Date: 07/06/10 02:18 am Title: Chapter 21
I absolutely LOATHE that woman. She makes me want to throw a tantrum and throw things, and really I almost cried I was so scared for Tom. You get so many kudos for the emotional tug you put on my heart. You're very talented and I'm happy to read such a beautiful and multi-level story.
Date: 07/06/10 01:37 am Title: Chapter 18
Oh my goodness... *licks lips* Do you know how good you are at writing sex scenes? XD The best part about them is they're emotional too. You can feel the connection between Bill and Tom as you read, no, not read, experience it. Wonderful chapter the language flows so freely, and it's a true pleasure to read Janni be it this chapter or the chapters before it.
Author's Response: Wow, this is an amazing review. Thank you so, so much for the kind words. I do appreciate it! :D
Date: 07/01/10 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMG OMG OMG !!!! TACKY THE PENGUIN! That was the very first script I EVER performed!!!! XD Sorry...Got soooo excited..
Awww.....Bill and tom...plus a little girl!
Author's Response: I ADORE Tacky the Penguin. I used to read it to my children all the time when they were little, and my favorite part was making funny voices and making Tacky sound all goofy. So much fun! I love that there was something familiar to you here. :D
Date: 07/01/10 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 14
*just dead dead dead*
Author's Response: LOL This sounds like a bad thing, but I think it was good. xD Thanks!
Date: 06/28/10 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 8
Haha! Oh David is so funny. He makes my day sometime lol, but honestly, there are no fresh young things in Ohio XD Trust me! I live there!
Author's Response: Haha, well no, because they're all on the bus to New York. Or LA. ;p I'm glad you enjoyed David's character! :D
Date: 06/26/10 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Epilogue
thank you :D the whole jurney was beatifull, and i wish you to write many many amaizing storeys as this one :D
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! :D
Date: 06/25/10 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
That little girl... if she was a part of my life I'd be wrapped around her little finger.
I like your transitions from place to place. They flow really well.
Author's Response: I have a secret. Well, not so much a secret, but Janni is very much based on my own daughter, Kat. And when she was little, yeah, she had us all wrapped around her little finger. Now she's 15, though, so. LOL She's a little more ornery. ;)
Thank you! No one has told me that before and it's great to hear. :D
Date: 06/25/10 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
Bill's reaction is perfectly reasonable. It made me laugh, because his view is all true and it made me recall some of the not so clean incidents of when I was younger.
Tom and Janni, are precious. Every detail is put into place so perfectly I just melted.
There is so much promise for your story and I'm happy to be able to read it.
Author's Response: This was so wonderful to hear, even if I did respond so late. I'm sorry about all the late responses, but thank you so much for your review. :D
Date: 06/25/10 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
*in love* Your story is absolutely beautiful! And this is only chapter 2! I'm so excited to see what comes up. :)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :D
Date: 06/25/10 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Epilogue
aw I love this!!!! update more soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 06/25/10 09:49 am Title: Chapter 28 - Epilogue
Ohmigosh that was lovely! So sad to see this one end. But now I can read it over and over in its entirety. Yay!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D
Date: 06/23/10 12:35 am Title: Chapter 28 - Epilogue
Gosh Mel, I'm so sad to see this ended but I'm so happy it ended well. I'm so glad they're all a family together and kjgdfhgkd I just love it all so much. This definitely sticks close to my heart.
Also, Janni and I have the same initials. xD teehee
Author's Response: Aw, thank you, honey! And I didn't realize you guys had the same initials. So cute you even thought of that! lol <3333
Date: 06/22/10 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
So I just read the last three chapters. Though I didn't cry, I think I could. The end was so sweet, so perfect. Janni is adorable and willful in her own way. I'd like to see the day some kid picks on her for having two daddies lol. Tom's relationship with Bill was perfectly paced and tentative, even when they were in so deep they couldn't see much outside of thier little family bubble. I love this story so much and if you ever get it published I'll be first in line to buy it. And I demand a signed copy. =P Thank you so much for writing this. It's definitely a favorite of all favorites.
Author's Response: Late response is so late, and for that, I apologize. I hope you know that what you've said here put the biggest smile on my face. And if I ever get it published, you will definitely get your signed copy. ;) Thank you, love. ♥
Date: 06/22/10 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Epilogue
The perfect ending to a wonderful story. Thank you so much for sharing your talent for weaving such an enchanting tale. Janni has touched my heart & I am so happy everything is so right in her world.
ilu bb
Author's Response: Thank you so much, sweetheart! You've been such a wonderful friend and so supportive. I can't thank you enough, and bb, ilu2. ♥
Date: 06/22/10 04:13 am Title: Chapter 28 - Epilogue
Aw! I'm so glad you wrote this. It's such a cute story with minimal drama, and it's wonderfulll! Thank you so much! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 06/22/10 02:01 am Title: Chapter 28 - Epilogue
Hi!!!
This was just a perfect ending for an amazuing story! You gave us a precious gift from your mind and heart. Tank you.
I got caught by this story since the beginning and it has been wonderful to follow it til completion.
Finally Bill, Tom and Janni are a family, with ups and downs but a family none the less. There's an incredible message of hope and understanding lying beneath each word.
I hope I have the opportunity to read something you write soon. I do like how you write.
Thank you again for sharing something so beautiful with us.
Hugs and kisses for you!!
Velia
Author's Response: Your review was so sweet. I'm so happy that you enjoyed the story so much! Thank you for your kindness! <3
Date: 06/22/10 01:46 am Title: Chapter 27
Oh good Lord, woman! You had me all stressed imagining the worst scenarios... granted, you updated days ago, but my job gave me no chance till today to read it.
It was a really grat chapter, full of the ideas that must be in the minds of a lot of people. As for example that the capacity of a person to raise a child is not determined by his preferences. And that children with gay parents are as worthy as those with parents of different sex.
I am breathing again now. I'm going to read the epilogue right now.
Hugs
Author's Response: aw, I'm sorry I made you nervous. Sort of. >.> lol No, I wanted you to be able to see the verdict going either way, at least until this chapter. Because Tom and Bill really had no idea, either, so I'm glad you weren't really sure!
Thank you so much for the kind words. I honestly appreciate them. *hugs*
Date: 06/21/10 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Epilogue
yeeeeeeeeeey! i'm crying over here woman! you're brilliant! =']
i wanted a really hot scene at the end though! dammit! lmao
brilliant though! i'll miss it!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm sorry there was no hot ending, but I'm glad you enjoyed the rest of the story. :D
Date: 06/21/10 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 27
oh my gooooooooooooood!! i was actually sceaming in happiness! =']
mum came into my room wondering what happened!
every time they got an argument against Anjelica i was like "yes!" lol
BRILLIANT!
Author's Response: LOL! You probably scared the beans out of your poor mom. xD Thank you so much! :D
Date: 06/21/10 11:21 am Title: Chapter 28 - Epilogue
Well, I make a review now because when you posted the epilogue, i was in a weird mood. That's always like that when a story I love ends up. And I follow Janni since nearly a year and well... that's over. I liked the end a lot, that's just fine, sweet and I fancy the characters so much! I hope we will read that oneshot you worked on. Great job with that story anyway.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, and thank you for following the story so long. That really means so much to me. :D