Date: 06/04/09 01:25 am Title: Spermance
Totally cute story. Keep going, it looks very promising;-)
Author's Response: we wont stop yet :D we promise
Date: 06/04/09 01:01 am Title: A sperms Goal.
two words: PURE BRILLIANCE.
this is so original, it's crazy.
[in a wonderful way of course]
*is looking forward to reading more soon*
Author's Response: haha thank you rndont worry, there will be more soon rni promise you
Date: 06/04/09 12:47 am Title: Spermance
lol,yay!
This is so cute[:
I love it))
Author's Response: thanx, glad you enjoy it
Date: 06/03/09 10:22 pm Title: Spermance
OMFG THIS IS TRULY AWESOME!
SO fucking unique! *0*
Author's Response: Haha, thank you :D
Date: 06/03/09 09:18 pm Title: Spermance
I must say, that is a clever idea. XD
I like the story... you should update again soon. (:
Author's Response: wel will soon rni promise
Date: 06/03/09 09:07 pm Title: Spermance
omg omg lol more
Author's Response: more shal be soon :D
Date: 06/03/09 08:07 pm Title: A sperms Goal.
BAHAHAHA! That was the weirdest pov i've ever read and I LOVED IT! I do wish you'd write more! Sperm romance is so cute!
Author's Response: we have just updated :D
Date: 06/03/09 07:39 pm Title: A sperms Goal.
This is just wow..XD I love it! I need more sperm romance!!!
Author's Response: thank you so much, we never thought people would actually enjoy this.rnmore spermance coming up
Date: 06/03/09 07:38 pm Title: A sperms Goal.
Wow. This is interesting. Please continue this. This is funny. Please update soon. I really wanna read more.
Author's Response: we are updating very soon :D rnwith another spermance picture
Date: 06/03/09 07:12 pm Title: A sperms Goal.
oh my god!that was so so sweet and funny.you should go on with it,for real!great work!
Author's Response: we are definatly continueing ;s rnwe have the next chapter ready for you all :D
Date: 06/03/09 07:01 pm Title: A sperms Goal.
X'''D You have no idea how badly I lost if when I saw the banner! I like, half-choked on my coffee and nearly fell off my chair XD *laughter* Holy hell, this was just priceless XD
Author's Response: we have many more to come, we promise you..
Date: 06/03/09 07:00 pm Title: A sperms Goal.
Awe! :D
Billa sperm and Tomi sperm are so cuuute~ :D
Author's Response: they are, arnt they, the visionary came from dawn, she is awsome
Date: 06/03/09 06:48 pm Title: A sperms Goal.
-giggles- This is cute i liek it . its odd spermmance i neverherd of it befor XD.
Author's Response: its a rare acurance in twins.........well in my mind anways
Date: 06/03/09 06:36 pm Title: A sperms Goal.
Haha, that is the most absurd thing I've ever read. A few mistakes with the verb tenses, but a very original idea, I must say.
Author's Response: thank you so much, it was like playing with fire, when we decided to write this, so i am glad you like it
Date: 06/03/09 06:29 pm Title: A sperms Goal.
Aw! Original, and sweet, and a tad peculiar... the perfect fic! ;)
Author's Response: why thank you :D rnwe are slightly, un normal d:
Date: 06/03/09 06:28 pm Title: A sperms Goal.
lmfao!
well uh... that was different
x3
Author's Response: very differnt :D we thought we would be original.
Date: 06/03/09 06:20 pm Title: A sperms Goal.
That is hands down the weirdest thing I've ever read XD HAHAHA, it wins at life.
My new fave pairing: spermTom/spermBill.
Author's Response: we have alot more tricks up our sleves, just you wait and see :D rnmore sperm pairings coming up soon ;)
Date: 06/03/09 06:17 pm Title: A sperms Goal.
Lol um this is cute, but sperm die within like, 72 hours, how do they go back and forth? Once it comes out, it's out for good! :P
Author's Response: amm, well.... yes.. but this is made upo... sperm dont talk either ;) or have hair xDDDD i dont think .. but yes i get what you mean.. when tom ejaculates into bills ass.. they swim very fast to .. bills testies... were theres a small hole for them to go through.. so they servive....
Date: 06/03/09 06:14 pm Title: A sperms Goal.
...points for creativity man, respect.
That being said, I'm staring open-mouthed at this. It was...interesting, and original, although it was a bit rough to read. There's a few missing commas and periods and such.
Respect man, you both have my respect.
Author's Response: thank you so much, we are both really happy you like this. rnwe should continue it soon. and thank you for helping with the grammarnRachel & Dawn x