Date: 07/09/09 11:22 am Title: Epilogue 2
there is just one thing, you wrote twins up top. They arnt twins in the stort, that slowed me down a little lolz YAY!! Andreas is dead I love happy endings. This was great, I hope I see more of you soon. XOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: oh shittt il go change that
Date: 07/09/09 08:41 am Title: Epilogue 1
I like this chapter. :D Very well done.. I cant wait for the second. :P (oh, i love the whole story, I was just surprised to see that it wasn't done. :P)
Date: 07/09/09 01:44 am Title: Epilogue 1
holy fudge, he not going to just do it is he.... please say no. Other than that heart attack at the end I loved it, please put the 2nd part up, im dying to know whats next......Andreas yes? lolz Please XOXOXOXOXOXO
Date: 07/09/09 01:36 am Title: Chapter 10 - the end
This totally shows how much I pay attetion to song lyrics in storys RJA/RJSA lolz I love this song, and perfect for the moment might I add, Your Gaurdian Angel is amazing happy happy happy XOXOXO
Date: 07/09/09 01:22 am Title: Chapter 8
OMG im so dumb thats a Simple Plan song...Welcome to my life lolz. Love this whole story, really sweet. XOXOXO
Date: 07/09/09 12:05 am Title: Epilogue 1
The last chapter is called an Epilogue, and the first is a Prologue ^_^
And this beginning is RAWR
Don't keep me waiting for long
Date: 07/08/09 11:54 pm Title: Epilogue 1
awww billl is finally doing it wit the boy he luvs its so cute ;]
Date: 07/08/09 11:27 pm Title: Epilogue 1
keep it comin!
Date: 07/08/09 11:19 pm Title: Epilogue 1
awwwwwwwwwwwww they're happy!!!!
Date: 07/05/09 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 10 - the end
...Even if saving you sends me to heaven... - aaaaaawwwwww
...I’m in love with you... - duh!!!
...The curtains went up once again, to show both boys kissing... - haha, that did not just happened
*very good idea for the song by The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus. i like them too ^__^
Author's Response: hahah that so did happen :P XD rnand the epilog soon.. im keeping you.. your mine now i like your reviews XD
Date: 07/05/09 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 9
...Well if that’s the thanks I get, I’ll save your ass more often... - of course you will, tomi ^__^
...Do you know ‘falter’ by Hundred reason?... - sadly, no. i'll have to check on it then
...Tom Trümper/ Bill Trümper… it has a nice ring to it…. Bill Kaulitz/Tom Kaulitz… yes, that sounds better... - aaaawwww, so cute! i could just imagine bills face
dont u dare give my baby bill a hard time!!! *hesitantly clicks the Next button*
Author's Response: Falter is amaizng
Date: 07/05/09 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 8
...The chair Bill was sat on had pushed against Tom, causing Tom to fall over it and land on top of Bill, their lips crashed together... - owh no u didnt! not in front of simone, boys =P
...Andreas has been suspended... - *jumps up and down in happiness*
*i love Simple Plan!!! they're awesome ^___^
Author's Response: haha horny boys what can i say :D
Date: 07/05/09 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 7
...he knew one day he would go after Andreas and kill him for hurting his Bill... - may i join too??? ggggrrrr
...He sat there for a moment, and kissed Bill’s cheek... - aaaaawww
*my, my. did that really happen to u??? man, some people are impossible! ignore them, they're so0o0o0o not worth your time
Author's Response: yes lets go kill andreas :D rnrnand yes it did =/ still donno who it is
Date: 07/05/09 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 6
...I need you, I really need you, Tom... - *heart breaks into tiny pieces*
...Bill blushed deeply, there was no way he could hide it now, he was in love... - *picks up the pieces and tries to glue them back*
Author's Response: i know.. -snifffles-
Date: 07/05/09 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 5
...I made a mistake, I have fallen in love with Tom Trümper!... - nah, not a mistake ^___^
*quite short though (good thing i dont have to wait for an update..heee)
Author's Response: hah ayes a good thing : D
Date: 07/05/09 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
...Hay, mom… do I look okay?... - do u even need to ask, darling?
...Trümper’s, that is what the whole school said, he belongs to Tom Trümper... - is that a good thing, or a bad thing?????
...But he believed it was a perfect addition to black mail... - oh uh! and i thought andi was the best friend =P
...I’m never writing in a diary again, diaries are for chicks... - thats a good one! but i dont own a diary, does that make me not a chick???? *feels miserable*
Author's Response: i dont own one either :P XD rni tend to write my feelings in stories.. all my stories relat to somma in my life, and the chapters
Date: 07/05/09 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
...You may be fucking hot... - ah, tom u just admitted it
...and you may make me question my own stupid sexual orientation... - and now he knows ur angry, confused
...but making me have to sit through class after class, with a raging hard-on is not my idea of fun!... - and bill just won this round *bill:1 and tom:none*
*honestly? not ditching it, not keeping either... i'm "continuing" ^__^
Author's Response: i love tom aye.. he ssuch a drip :D
Date: 07/05/09 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
...Maybe I’m bi, either that or I’m curious, yes, let’s stick to that one... - love this line! poor tom is confused but still naughty
...Tom, the womanizer, loves women, not boys. Perhaps he still thinks Bill’s a chick... - heee, now georg is confused =P
...Dear diary, I have one wish… don’t let me fall in love with him... - thats gonna be tricky now aint it
*love where this is going.. hm, wanting to find out what kind of musical... *searches for the Next button*
Author's Response: georg is awsome :D rnand yeas :D
Date: 07/05/09 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
...Hobbies: Plays the Guitar, sex, graffiti, sex, music, sex... - yeah, sounds like tom =P
...So what do you say, Tom? Ja? Nein?... - hell yeah =P *just admit it tomi*
...Bill says: Tom, if you ask me to strip on cam, I will stab you with my eyeliner, got it?... - heeee, that i would like to see
...Tom says: you’re a virign????... - u typed this wrong, but did u do it on purpose? coz it really gave off the feeling like tom was typing so fast that he misspelled *winks*
*oh no... this fic is already completed? damn i am slow... so to make it up i'll give u a review on every chap (hope u dont mind) ^___^
Author's Response: ;ornyes i perposly spelt it wrong XD only you picked that one up :P rnand the FIC is finished but i have two epiloges :D