Date: 06/04/09 12:21 am Title: Chapter 1
I like, I like alot!
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 06/03/09 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh yeah this is good! I love the conversation between the boys! Update soon and I'm going to add this to my favorites.
Author's Response: Thank you for adding it :D rnthat means the world to me
Date: 06/03/09 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this. Very interesting :D
Author's Response: thank you :~D
Date: 06/03/09 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, I dont usually review stories, I just forget and or dont have time to. But I felt this needed a review. I actually like this, at first i was like what is this, and dont normally read fics until they are finished, for the fear the author drops it and never finishes it. But I read this at of boredum and LOVED IT.
Its alot how highschool is, or rather, my highschool is. Cliques. Carazzzzzzzzzzzzzzy. If you ask me. Im enjoying this, and i pray you stay with this story, keep up the good work. YOu should use the webcam thing for future chapter. I think it would be intresting.
ANd please dont rush this, this story is open with ALOT of possibilites, and i'd hate to see them dating in the next chapter. I love this alot and its just the first chapter. Leaving me wanting more. Good job Senorita!!!!!!!!!!!!
i hope to see some teasing from bill, it would be intresting to see him tease him in practice, and tom knowing he cant have the little virgin. GASP. But oh tomi boy, you will get your reward soon enough. I like how bill isnt exactly shy in this, it makes the story more realistic, and tom is the average playing type every highschool has, fortunatly ours graduated this year at my school
KEEP UP THE GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD WORK.
Author's Response: well i am so glad you had a look :D rnand dont worry, i will continue and i wont rush it. rnbill wwill be a tease.. a real teas ;)
Date: 06/03/09 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
hahahahahaahahahahaahha!
that is all.
=]
Author's Response: haha, that is good: D
Date: 06/03/09 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol i loved it i had to giggle at bill saying he would stab tom with his eyeliner keep up the amazeing work
Author's Response: well when bill realy did say he would, i laughed for days.. so i had to add it
Date: 06/03/09 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
heh. tom's such a retard xD and i love how they flirt with each other xD
Author's Response: tom sems to be my targed in all my stores
Date: 06/03/09 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
god I love it XD you already got me with the summary ... they hate them, who hate them etc. I mean ... god, feel the love XD like your writing style ^^continue!
Author's Response: Thank you, il be doing another update of this tomorow, after more spermy goodness with mine and dawns other story :D
Date: 06/03/09 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
And there it is, you have to keep it coming, because I like it and you have to do what I want because if not, I might send sperm!bill against you. There, first review.
Author's Response: ;O EVIL SPERMS ... rnomg we could make evil sperms