Date: 06/12/09 03:29 am Title: The Discovery
OMG OMG OMG!!! Yay1 Now I know what happened to Gustav!! I'm so glad you updated!! I hope you update REALLY REALLY SSOOOONNN! Big fan! Big fan!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I don't know when I will update next, hopefully soon though.
Date: 06/10/09 05:03 pm Title: The Discovery
this sounds good.. I wanna know what happen with Tom...he doesn't seem to be a bad person but well..
I like the story please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Tom isn't really a bad person, he just goes through stages of weirdness.
Date: 06/09/09 01:28 pm Title: The Discovery
omg, that was...so freeky!But I can't say anything other than I love it :P You are a plain superstar at this :D
Author's Response: Awh you're so sweet, thank you so much! xD
Date: 06/09/09 08:03 am Title: The Discovery
Don't stop now :P
It's a good story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much (:
Date: 06/09/09 07:44 am Title: The Discovery
Oh. I loved it! Please update very soon!! :)
Author's Response: Glad you liked this chapter, thank you very much.
Date: 06/09/09 06:27 am Title: The Discovery
great chapter! This prison looks like a Spa or some holiday village where the inmates have mobile phones, go to the gym and go to their cells whenever they want XD btw I feel sorry for bill , I bet it won't be easy for him to act normal and relaxed towards tom..
Author's Response: Prisons are actually very relaxed places now-a-days. Thanks for your review.
Date: 06/09/09 05:21 am Title: The Discovery
hmmm... psycho!Tomi too.. likey likey.. *giggles*
yeah.. please continue with fast updates..
Author's Response: Haha, I will try my best. Thank you (:
Date: 06/09/09 01:37 am Title: The Discovery
i read all 3 chapters right now and i have to say that i REALLY love it so far!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much (:
Date: 06/08/09 11:38 pm Title: The Discovery
Hooray! I love the new developments! So if we leave a review for every chapter, you update more?
Author's Response: Thanks for your review (: Basically, I find if I get super nice reviews, just like you give me xD it spurs more on to right more and more and more just because I feel I have to please you with something good. It's like an achievement I suppose. But I finish my exams on Thursday so I'll be writing ever so much you may not be able to keep up (:
Date: 06/08/09 11:10 pm Title: The Discovery
this is different but amazing. i like seeing another side of Tom and Bill. and the gym scene was funny
Author's Response: The gym scene was amazing to write, I had all this yummy images of Tom and Bill working out, it was just ace. Thank you so much for your review (:
Date: 06/08/09 09:49 pm Title: The Discovery
*grumbles that her first review got erased*
Laura, I love this so much!
You've got me groveling for the next chapter now that Bill knows about Tom's "killing streak". I'm pretty impressed with the way you've built up this scene and how it will eventually tie in with the rest of the story later on. I could almost feel the sickening apprehension Bill feels in the end of this chapter.
Anyway, yes Tom is slightly disturbing (okay very disturbing), but I hold the conviction that he won't be killing Bill anytime soon. Harming him? So far, I can see that happening but never kill.
And lastly, I can't help but feel a little pity for Tom. Imagine having to wait for your own death sentence...*shudders*
keep writing!
Author's Response: CHARLIIIIIIIIIII, OMG YOU REVIEWED xDDD This has made my day. O.o thank you so much, I had to ask my sister whether Bill fainting was a little over the top and she said it was so the next best thing was him just throwing up. I'm rather glad my writing had such effect actually because I was wondering if it didn't fit well, but obviously it did! Right now I just want to hug poor Tomi, all the things he must be going through in my story :( Anyway thank you so, so, so much (:
Date: 06/08/09 08:44 pm Title: The Discovery
OMG.
Will Tom find out that Bill knows!?
AHHHHH!
:O But then if he finds out Geo told Bill, bye-bye Geo!
OMGOSH!
I'm like, DYING, over here!
EEP!
Author's Response: Take a few deep breaths and you'll be fine! Thank you for your review (:
Date: 06/08/09 08:11 pm Title: The Discovery
YAY! my new favorite story.
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad it is, thank you.
Date: 06/08/09 08:00 pm Title: The Discovery
Holy shit -_-
Poor Gusti :(
Author's Response: I really love Gustav and I'm sorry that he was killed off in my story. Thanks for your review though! Gustav appreciates it.
Date: 06/08/09 07:43 pm Title: The Discovery
Laurayouupdatedwheeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
you really have no idea how much I love this story. acutally, you prolly have no idea how much I love all of your work. XDD you need to continue this, and I command you that NO Bill or Tom shall die in this fic!! *flails*
please, update sooon! :D :D
PS: who was this dedicated to? Charli... uhm... Chels... Ev? just wondering. :)
Author's Response: ROMEYOULEFTAREVIEW *claps* Oh and dude, I just killed myself off in this story, POOR GUSTI :( And thank you very much (: This was actually dedicated to YOU, Charli and Chels, for providing me with such a laugh on the shoutbox last night xDDD
Date: 06/08/09 07:39 pm Title: The Final Sentence
woah. intresting. =]
Author's Response: I know right? Haha thank you.
Date: 06/08/09 06:37 pm Title: The Discovery
I love this :)
I want more its good
Author's Response: You want more? There will be more (:
Date: 06/08/09 06:36 pm Title: The Discovery
Oh my... I dare say that's an interesting twist... I'd like to see tom's pov on that whole situation... I like that they're all flirty now... it's adorable... can't wait for more!!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much (:
Date: 06/08/09 05:52 pm Title: The Discovery
nice! its getting exciting! :D
Author's Response: Thank you (:
Date: 06/08/09 05:50 pm Title: The Discovery
Awww Gustav v.v.
I was about to get off this site but i refreshed the page and your story showed on on the Recent list, and I just had to read it xD
Im glad you're taking things slow, this story seems very promising =]
Author's Response: I feel sorry for Gustav, I didn't want to treat him badly, I didn't want to kill him off :( Thanks for your review darling!