Date: 09/24/12 09:42 am Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
u really need to make a sequel to this!!
Date: 04/09/12 10:37 pm Title: The Talk (1/3)
Please make an epilogue
Date: 03/19/12 07:07 am Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
this was a good story!
u should do a sequel to this!
Date: 05/29/11 12:05 pm Title: The Talk (1/3)
Is it coming an epilogue or what? :)
Date: 03/19/11 11:54 pm Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
Agh... I'm actually mad at Bill. If he could walk and can move. He should have gotten out and head down the road toward the gas station as soon as he knew the situation*sp*. Made sure that Tom is alive, get him comforable, get out the ride and make some kinda mark to show the location of the crash, even though there are hardly any cars driving pass. Thats what I was thinking the entire time I read the chapter. But no instead he did nothing. TOM COULD HAVE DIED! This happened to my father and his friend and my father left to get help and it came within three hours. Anyway awsome story. Sorry bout my ramblings.
Date: 02/20/11 11:43 am Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
Want to know what will happen!
Date: 11/16/10 08:57 pm Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
ooh lovely! they were found! :)
Date: 08/13/10 09:37 am Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
This is like the umpteenth story of yours i've read and I'm really, really compelled to lose sleep over your fic. You're awesome!
Date: 04/27/10 09:04 pm Title: The Talk (1/3)
Interesting, I like it so far
Date: 04/27/10 01:51 pm Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
I really liked it! I was looking for a story like this, where the twins didn't like each other, it was so fun to read when they fought! Exelent job, I liked your vocabulary! :)
Date: 01/03/10 08:23 pm Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
Personally I would have preferred the epilogue but at least Tom didn't die xxx
Date: 12/09/09 07:20 pm Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
Why always happy endings? :/ ,, But a really nice story :D
Date: 12/09/09 06:26 pm Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
I hope for the epilogue
Date: 12/08/09 11:13 pm Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
I don't think I've ever read a twincest story before where the twins spend almost 10,000 words yelling and taunting eachother, but you're an amazing writer and it works so well. Oh gosh, and the crash, how they're huddled together, it's just so angsty and perfect. I was worried for a bit there that Tom wasn't gonna make it or something, but I'm so glad they're ok. :) I can't wait to read the happy epilogue, but if by chance you're not writing it, this story is perfect the way it is. Thank u so much for writing.
PS- I'm reading n reviewing this on my iPod Touch as well. :)
Date: 12/08/09 01:05 am Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
OMFG!!! i was oh so worried n freaking reading this!!! it's osm n scary n sad n OH POOR TOM! :S its so scary when u crash but i think its worse when they found you hours or days later...
Date: 12/07/09 11:18 am Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
Great- love how though they hated one another there were moments of twin solidarity when they needed each other!
Date: 12/07/09 11:01 am Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! -melts-
that was cute and sad!
you beter make a epilogue fast or ill cry LOL.
Date: 12/07/09 12:45 am Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
please, please do an epilogue. it feels unfinished, what's going to happen to Tom!!
Date: 12/07/09 12:29 am Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
YAY! :D
Date: 12/06/09 11:04 pm Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
Might??? God I hope so!!! I want to know how their relationship progresses since their true feeling's were revealed!
Loved the story~