Date: 12/06/09 10:30 pm Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
PLEASE MAKE AN EPILOGUE!!!! PLEASE!
Date: 12/06/09 09:53 pm Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
Yay!!! They made up, but I hope that Tom's leg is going to be ok. I think an epilogue would be good because I would like to see how they turn out after getting rescued.
Date: 12/06/09 09:25 pm Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
thank god!!! you had me worried when tom fell asleep..uff
Date: 12/06/09 09:00 pm Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
Now he was broken.
That was my favorite line, it was so sweet x]
I like how you ended it, it was so adorable. The only thing I was worried about is that you had quite a few spelling and grammar errors that chopped it up a little bit :/ If you'd like, I can beta it for you and it will be done in less than an hour x]
That's only if you want it, though.
Overall this was a very sweet threeshot and it made me 'aww' out loud x] I loved it.
Date: 12/06/09 08:47 pm Title: The Crash (2/3)
:O
If one of them dies, I will cry but it will be so sweet at the same time. Your chapters are written very nicely, they flow beautifully and yeah :P
I suck at reviews xD
Date: 12/06/09 08:43 pm Title: The Forgiveness (3/3)
awwww incredible!!! please continue!! XD
Date: 12/06/09 08:37 pm Title: The Talk (1/3)
Haha, I'm really loving the start of this. It shows the rare times when the twins are fighting and that's never really been a topic I've seen much in other fics, so I'm glad to see it here. Plus it was just entertaining xD
But I'm thinking from the summary, there's going to be sadness, so I'm preparing for the sad :/
Date: 10/26/09 03:21 pm Title: The Crash (2/3)
I hope Bill didn't get hurt.Tom should be more careful.Please promise me that Tom won't die if he is the one that got hurt.
Date: 10/19/09 10:45 pm Title: The Crash (2/3)
Oh I hope they're ok. I guess that's what happens when you are too focused on fighting and not the true task at hand. Hopefuly they will learn albeit the hard way why petty hatred for eachother is not good.
Date: 10/19/09 06:30 pm Title: The Crash (2/3)
-screams- NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I
Date: 10/19/09 06:30 pm Title: The Crash (2/3)
-screams- NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I
Date: 10/19/09 06:05 pm Title: The Crash (2/3)
omg more!!!
this is really great ;D
only 18 reviews ? can't believe it 0o
Date: 10/19/09 05:56 pm Title: The Crash (2/3)
I love it(: more please!
Date: 10/19/09 04:42 pm Title: The Talk (1/3)
I am so sorry for their mother and I wish she won't die because the boys need a mother.They are really stupid and they shouldn't fight like that...I hope they will love each other like brothers do
Date: 10/19/09 01:18 am Title: The Crash (2/3)
Oh damn-what a cliffhanger...more, SOON please...
Date: 10/19/09 12:35 am Title: The Crash (2/3)
NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! Way fif you stop there?!
Give me more now!
Date: 10/08/09 01:08 am Title: The Talk (1/3)
So, where is the rest of it? Hope you get the chance to write and post the last two chapters would like to finish reading this....
Date: 09/20/09 09:51 pm Title: The Talk (1/3)
oOoOoOoO what will happend next???? update soon so i can find out, Please :)
Date: 07/25/09 07:58 pm Title: The Talk (1/3)
I like it. : D
Wanna see more! :3
Date: 07/23/09 01:06 pm Title: The Talk (1/3)
sounds really good ! even if i dont like when the twins are mean to each other, the fact that they can be sweet when family is involved makes it really cute :P cant wait for the next chap !