Date: 05/09/10 11:53 am Title: My Billa
aww soo cute...its making me feel all warm and fuzzy inside *grins like an idiot*
i love this and i think it is amaing and very well written!
Date: 01/04/10 05:00 am Title: My Tomi
Awwwwwww That was soooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07/24/09 03:22 pm Title: My Tomi
I can honestly say you have just written the first story to make me melt. I am literally a puddle right now.
I love this story so much!
Billa's POV is poetic, deep, and extremely meaningful. You can just feel his love for Tom. It's an amazing thing, that you have the ability to cause emotions like that. I think [I] love Tom a little more now xD
And, Tom's. It was so incredibly sweet. It made me feel like I was actually reading something the twin's wrote for each other, discribing their love. I almost felt bad for reading it, because it sounds so personal, and so loving. I felt like I was intruding.
For both chapters, you did an amazing job. It was so realistic and touching.
You are one of the most talented writers I have read, including published books.
Now, if you excuse me, I need to go solidify myself xD
Please, grace us with more of your incredible talent. I'll be sure to read your other stories.
Author's Response: Thank you. So much. I love getting reviews like this. I really do. And I thank you. I just have a ton of stories. Some are like this one and most are not. I prefer to write this way but sometimes its harder to do so. All I can say is most of the one shots that aren't NC-17 are like this. :)
Date: 06/13/09 03:42 pm Title: My Billa
Beautiful, i'm crying right now, words so powerful, This is what You do to me. Needless to say more? Once again, you took the words out of my mouth. Exactly how Tom describe Bill is what we all think of him but we had no way how to explain it. YOU, did that and I thank you for providing us this beautiful story. I'm sorry for the late update.
Author's Response: I am extremely happy that you loved it. I really... tried to make sure it was written right. The concept was a little iffy at first but it came out much better then I expected it to be. I am so glad that some people really like this story. So thank you! So much.
Date: 06/09/09 01:27 pm Title: My Tomi
Additionally - OMG, I didn't even notice at first who the author of this fic is. Ascuba, the one who never fails to crack me up with regularity, also wrote this deeply spiritual, moving, and insightful fic that makes me wish with all my heart that I had a twin!
Author's Response: XD I can write deeply emotional things. It's easier to write then comedy to me. And thank you for your lovely review. I REALLY tried to capture what they portray in everyday life and on interviews. Its just in the looks they share and you can see what they're thinking.
Date: 06/09/09 01:19 pm Title: My Tomi
This is indescribably wonderful. You know the part where Tom says he can't form the words to say how much Bill means to him? Well, I'm having similar difficulty saying how well-written this fic is. I know this is fan FICTION, but you have captured something that the twins seem to reflect without their even speaking. I wouldn't be the least bit surprised to hear that this is exactly the way they feel about each other. Well done to the 100th power!
Date: 06/09/09 11:50 am Title: My Billa
oh it's so cuuuteee!!!! UPDATE
Author's Response: there is no more. XD sorry.
Date: 06/09/09 10:54 am Title: My Billa
These two chapters were so cute and just full of amazingness! Loved this second chapter as well!
Date: 06/09/09 10:07 am Title: My Billa
GOSH ACELA! It is so adorable! -tear-
Date: 06/09/09 10:07 am Title: My Billa
GOSH ACELA! It is so adorable! -tear-
Date: 06/09/09 09:17 am Title: My Billa
beautiful, it was so sweet. I could never write something like this. XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Date: 06/09/09 07:56 am Title: My Billa
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder--in my eyes this is beauty!
I can see the twins actually feeling and thinking some of these things about each other. In a brotherly way, of course.
At first I thought it seemed you put more time into writing Bill's part, it's very poetic and beautiful. Tom's seems more simple.
But then I thought "hey, that makes it the more believable". Bill is probably more poetic than Tom, he writes the lyrics after all ;) I can only imagine that Tom, whilst thinking just as highly of Bill, would express it in a way that is more simple.
Whether you did this intentionally I don't know, but I like it and it makes it feel even more like Bill in the first and like Tom in the second.
Just one little thing that caught my eye: You don’t appreciate how you are amazingly sweet and loveable you are
I assume it's supposed to say either: You don't appreciate how amazingly sweet and loveable you are or You don't appreciate how you are amazingly sweet and loveable.
I enjoyed this, definitely going into my favourites :)
Date: 06/06/09 10:09 am Title: My Tomi
aw i luv it! update more soon!
Date: 05/30/09 01:40 pm Title: My Tomi
This is absolutely deep and touching. I'm nearly in tears writing this right now. Is stories like this make me envy writers like you; always have that potential gift of writing and making small things that we happen to overlook seem so, so, big and it makes us slap our heads and wonder; how did we ever missed that? For instance, I haven't read not a single fic where Bill describes himself and denies his self-beauty but saying Tom was the beautiful one not him. Please continue with your EXCELLENT work.
Author's Response: Thank you for you're lovely review. It really inspires me. I'll be posting the Tom portion tonight hopefully.
Date: 05/30/09 12:35 pm Title: My Tomi
wow. poetic. beautiful. super sweet. love it.
Date: 05/30/09 09:47 am Title: My Tomi
Awww That's so cute, Poor tomi, people judge him by the way he looks but we never know what he is really like, he could sweet and caring for all we know , but only billa knows
Date: 05/30/09 09:44 am Title: My Tomi
This was so beautiful I literally got tears in my eyes! It's so poetic and romantic...I just don't even have the words to describe this!
Date: 05/30/09 08:39 am Title: My Tomi
Oh wow, this was so beautiful and emotional.
Date: 05/30/09 06:49 am Title: My Tomi
Awww! That was so adorable, and your ability to write descriptions is amazing. Just so beautiful, well done.