Date: 06/13/09 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this. The last two lines were amazing and this made me smile. Awesome job doll bby!
Date: 06/03/09 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this was so sweet! She seemed like a crazy enough character to me to not be "Mery Jane" and I liked it! The letter at the beginning was fantastic! Really, it was. I liked how everything seemed to be short sentences, and everything was so sweet. I think I said that already, but that's OK, because I really liked this!
Date: 06/03/09 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh God! That was something I would do too. I mean writing a letter with all my feelings and stuff. That was just great. You should write het more often.
Good luck in the challenge!
Date: 06/03/09 02:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh.. This is nice!!!! I never really read HET before this challenge but I wanted to read all the stories so here I am reading HET. Great story, not a sweet, happily ever after tearjerker, but funny and different. I like it very much.
Date: 06/02/09 12:11 am Title: Chapter 1
This was really nice I love the way it was written in letter form!! Your good at Het. You should peruse it!
Date: 06/01/09 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was very cute and I can see Bill needing someone who can be a little bitchy to combat the diva in him. Some elements of Syd felt a little too much though - the tormented childhood and the playing a multitude of instruments, etc. It may purely be me, but in such a brief story, those elements made her seem less realistic. Still enjoyable and cute though!
Date: 06/01/09 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
...Sydney Antoinette Carter... - thats a really nice name, kinda funky but classy too..hehe Syd for short
...A very pretty, peter pan like she... - you got me watching that episode again.too cute!
...And it was every bit as painful as heartbreak is supposed to be... - *sniff sniff
...but I remembered you saying that you’d marry no matter what I looked like... - omg thats way cute! but i hope that doesnt really happen on Bill's wedding day =P
Date: 05/30/09 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very cute. Good job!
Author's Response: awww. thanks for calling my first het baby cute ^^
Date: 05/30/09 01:09 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved this :) thank you
Author's Response: thank you for loving this and reviewing my first attempt at het ^^