Date: 05/31/10 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. *tear* Just beautiful. I do wish there was a sequel, but none is really needed.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 06/28/09 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
tht was sooo beautiful!!!! i wish there was more to read...=)
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 06/13/09 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: I hope that's a good wow. :)
oh yeah.. a Very good wow..
Date: 06/13/09 02:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Im with ghostie on this one.. (& btw, this is Becky)
I really loved the idea behind this, I hope in the future you write more to it. maybe make it into a 3-4 chaptered fic.
Author's Response: Hi, Becky! *waves*rnrnIt was originally intended to be a longer fic, but a shorter version came out for the challenge. We'll just have to see. :)
Date: 06/10/09 08:19 am Title: Chapter 1
O.O oh Wow...
Author's Response: I hope that's a good wow. :)
Date: 06/03/09 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
That reminded me City of Angels, th movie you know? I loved it. Although it was short I didn't feel like there was something missing.
Good luck in the challenge!
Author's Response: I know the movie, but I've never actually seen it. I may have to do that now, though.rnrnThank you! :D
Date: 06/03/09 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
That's so cool! I love this concept!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 06/03/09 09:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Stuff like this makes me smile like an idiot. I love it. That whole, looking for someone, and eventually finding them, even if you have to start a new life or whatever. Beautiful.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! :D
Date: 06/03/09 07:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Whoo, that was....different? creepy and beautifull. Very nice
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 06/02/09 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this idea - just very beautiful somehow ♥
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 06/01/09 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
...and Bill knows this fate is the best possible one... - aaawwww, i feel like your "dark/death angel" had just given away his grace, and turned mortal for Tom T__T
...I know your face... - the very last line - priceless
*i loved this! though i feel it was quite short, but it would make more than just a mere a chapter ^__^
Author's Response: Heh. He pretty much did just that.rnrnThat line is what drove the entire fic.rnrnWe'll see if more comes along. :)
Date: 06/01/09 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet, like a little fairy tale. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 05/30/09 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh. This was a little confusing at the end, but I loved it. There's just something about this story that is just amazing. Although, I have to admit, I read this twice, almost three times, before I understood somewhat what was happening. I guess it's because I'm tired and hungry. Anyway, I understand it better now and wow, yay. Awesome! Yes, that's all I have to say:D Good job and good luck in the challenge!
Author's Response: I do like to confuse my readers a bit, so don't feel bad for not understanding it even after reading it three times. lolrnrnThank you! :D
Date: 05/30/09 06:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Remarkably whimsical and AWESOME.
Well, this story deserves better words than that. I think that this is possibly going to be my favorite out of all the submissions, definitely my favorite from what I've read. Just incredible all over. It was short, but there wasn't too much, or too little. Every word was perfectly in place; I couldn't ask for more. Yes, the ending left me slightly confused [still a little unsure how Bill became human] but it was still unseen and really I'm a total sucker for endings like that. Inconclusive, yet very definitive. I would love to read a sequel to this, although perhaps you feel the story has run its course. I would still love it. I love the whole idea of this. It could be adapted well into a proper chaptered fic. But then again, maybe you don't want that. I digress.
I also appreciate how you didn't spell everything out. You left everything for the reader to infer, even if it leaves the reader slightly befuddled. That's just great. I love it when a story leaves me confused like this. It means you've bested me and I like it. :)
In conclusion... this was great, all around, 100%.
Author's Response: Your review completely changed my opinion of this story. It was a rush job by all means (written in the last hour before the deadline), so I didn't expect a lot of people to like it or even understand it. I definitely didn't expect to get such a wonderful review like yours. I was truly blown away by what you said, and it made it all worth it. <3rnrnJust as you like being bested, I like besting my audience, so this worked out perfectly. lolrnrnThank you so much for your kind words. They truly mean a lot to me. :)
Date: 05/29/09 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was very moving. I love stories in which the twins have a supernatural connection.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 05/29/09 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow. that was... interesting, to say the least. :)
Author's Response: Interesting is better than nothing. Thanks for reading. :)