Date: 01/01/15 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mother of God, he's convincing! :D
Author's Response: Isn't he? Thanks for making me read this! lol ♥
Date: 06/17/09 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
*round of applause* x
Author's Response: Aw thanks! :D
Date: 06/09/09 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
I KNEW IT!!!!! LoL
Author's Response: Girl, I'd be disappointed if you didn't know! You've been reading my stuff longer than anyone. <333
Date: 06/03/09 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
I know I should be mad at him because he kinda used sex to keep her but since he seems to want/love her so much I can't really be mad at him. Sometimes you have to let people go and deep down he knows it.
Really well written especially since it's probably your first time writing het.
Good luck in the challenge!
Author's Response: It's true, I think. He really does love/want her, but he's really used to having his way. I think it's pretty obvious to him, though, that he won't keep her for much longer.
Thank you for the kind words, I do appreciate them! :D
Date: 06/03/09 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
I hope that Bill wouldn't really do this. That's awful sometime you have to let people go.
oh and BTW really hot!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Aw, I would hope he wouldn't, too, and I really don't think he would. Even if he often seems very 'diva' to me, I think he's still a sweet guy.
And thank you! I appreciate it. :D
Date: 06/03/09 09:43 am Title: Chapter 1
What a coniving bastard! Is he that selfish that he feels he is more entitled to her that her HUSBAND and CHILD?
Very nicely written, though. I liked it, even though it made me kinda mad. But that's OK, I'll get over it.
Author's Response: This Bill had to get and keep what he wanted, and he definitely wanted Natalie. Even with the knowledge of Nat's husband and child; they are not right there and he can't see their pain, only his.
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, even if Bill made you mad! :D
Date: 06/03/09 05:24 am Title: Chapter 1
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...He knew he’d changed her mind and that she’d stay... - damn, bill really made use of his charms, didnt he?
*i never read a Bill/Nat pairing before. this is great! considering your writings are probably more into slash ^__^
Author's Response: I wrote a little bit of a Bill/Nat(& Dunja) pairing before, but I hadn't read one before this challenge. Thank you so much for the kind words, as I was quite nervous about this. I do appreciate it. :)
Date: 06/02/09 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very ambitious if you aren't used to het normally! Really liked confident Bill ^_^
Author's Response: I've written it a couple times, but never with Bill. He feels completely different to write with a girl (of course, right? lol). I'm glad you liked his confidence, thank you!
Date: 05/30/09 01:11 am Title: Chapter 1
*_____* yes
Author's Response: It was so naughty, Darcy! lol Thank you <333
Date: 05/29/09 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
*fans self* hot damn!
Author's Response: *grins* Thanks! :)