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Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/09 05:12 am Title: of Crayons, Cars and Tadpoles

I had the giggles and  the music i am listening to like totally fitted the chapter too XD

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/09 07:00 pm Title: Bubblegum-pink and formula

that was cute. =D more please.

Reviewer: Ladite Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/09 03:12 pm Title: Bubblegum-pink and formula

Poor Tom, can't help but love him.

xx

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/09 10:11 am Title: Bubblegum-pink and formula

He is so stupid. But you guys already know that. That's my immediate reaction, though. He is so stupid.

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/09 12:45 am Title: Bubblegum-pink and formula

I can just see Tom, bent down with his face at the edge of the counter, running his tongue across the edge of it, looking up at Gustav wide eyed, tongue hanging out like that. Oh, sweet imagery! I love it!
Oh, and the whole being the first male to breastfeed thing! Classic Idiot!Tomi there.
Babay formula really DOES taste like crap. Ick. No wonder they throw it back up all the time.

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/09 12:41 am Title: 'Bubbles'

Aw, poor Tomi is feeling a bit of pressure, huh? The future of evolution, or whatever you said.
Dr. Bizzare. That's great.

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/09 12:38 am Title: hermite-floor-light thing

Oh, wow. I love it! Love it, love it, love it! I can't even tell you how hard I'm frickin laughing right now! Roy is looking at me like I've lost my ever-loving mind. Little does he know, I never really had one to begin with, so you can't miss what you never really knew...
Anyway...

Reviewer: leahq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/11/09 12:38 am Title: Bubblegum-pink and formula

BAHAHAHA! They can eat only blood... AND FORMULA!!! Hehee fabulous! The whole mental image of tom licking the counter was funny too! Keep up the amazing work because this is so cute

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/09 12:34 am Title: "fuff"

"fuff"
Oh, that was classic, and I love this so much, even if the chapters are short. I think it gives them more oompf that way.

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/09 12:31 am Title: Stomach muscles

Loquacious. Good word, Billa. Sounds like one Idiot!Tomi would mess up in true Fries fashion.
I feel bad for that spider. It's not like he woke up that morning and said, "Hey, I think I'll mosey on into the bathroom and startle the crap out of Tom." I mean, Tom could have at least fell over the other way, right?
But, on a happier note, yay for stomach muscles, without which life would probably be unbearably funny.

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/09 12:26 am Title: Food should not be furry

Full Metal Alchemist, no shit!
Good stuff, Billa, and I'm not just saying that because we're nuttier than fruitcakes.
LOVING THIS!

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/09 12:22 am Title: Oh, look....more vomit.

I feel like such a shmuck for not having read this sooner! I helped beta the first chapter and said, "Oh, this is gonna be good, I need to hunt it down and read it and track it and love it and hug it to itty-bitty bits," and then-- POOF!-- the thought was out of my head, probably because I saw something shiny and colorful and maybe it even had a bit of a speck in it, too. Will you ever forgive me, meine sechsling? Please? You stll love me, right? Please say yes... *whimper*
Maybe if I read every chapter and review them, you'll love me again.
Pshaw, who am I kidding? Like you could stop loving me...lol!

Author's Response:

-kneels- my love for you is unending (mien liebe fur dich bin unendlichkiet _sp_) i could never hate you!!!! and thank you so much for reading!! it means th eworlkd! really!!!!! i'm sorry i misse doyu tonight, i saw you on msn, but i wa sin th emiddle of writing some first class smut for you.... :D billtom in a shower style;)

 

Reviewer: GiraffeJumper2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/09 01:28 am Title: 'Bubbles'

Wow...I like this, update soon?

Reviewer: himisoko Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/09 10:45 pm Title: 'Bubbles'

"fuff"
lol -- you're very funny :D

Author's Response: thanki you! i try, i find it quite hard though, lol so thank you for the review and support!

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/09 09:20 pm Title: 'Bubbles'

Like a giant chicken egg....and his child is named Bubbles. Dear God. How do you come up with this? Oh my word. People like Tom should not be allowed to reproduce. Oh jeez.

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/09 08:12 pm Title: 'Bubbles'

LOL Fried Tadpoles. LMAO.
I like this story

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/09 03:24 pm Title: 'Bubbles'

YAY I am finally caught up. =D I love this

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/09 03:19 pm Title: hermite-floor-light thing

XD GOTT I love that doctor shes hilarious

Reviewer: Katanasai Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/09 02:38 pm Title: 'Bubbles'

lol... there is a very disturbing connection there, with Tom referring to his bubbles as 'tadpole-like' and then, at the end, saying 'Fried Tadpoles'... was that on purpose? Its funny either way. XD

Author's Response: nein nein, there wasa no connection intended, lol i just have 'eat the plastic tadpole' on the brain, its what Pepsi means in japanese, i think, or taiwanese. lol, but ja , no connection indtended, thank you for the review

Reviewer: leahq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/03/09 02:53 am Title: 'Bubbles'

Hehehe that's so cute... bubbles *giggle* I love listening to tom's thoughts... they're so profound in an idiotic sort of way... :P So cute!

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