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Reviewer: JaquexSarai Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/09 01:26 am Title: hermite-floor-light thing

Omg, this story has my rolling on the floor laughing:DD I love it!

&let me just say, I would punch the doctor in the face if they ever gave me news like that! Ahaha:DD but it was super funny! And she reminded me of an overly cheerful cheerleader, rofl! :D

Reviewer: slightly_bizarre Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/09 03:55 am Title: Food should not be furry

omfg full-metal alchemist -dies-

rofl. NOT RAMEN! i understand Tom's problems. i hate that, man. damn maggots be gettin in muh ramen, yo.

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/09 06:23 pm Title: hermite-floor-light thing

Oh poor Tom. Be nice to him, Bill. That was the most annoying doctor I've ever read, dear God.

Reviewer: ichliebedreads Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/09 11:39 am Title: hermite-floor-light thing

I think the doctor drove me crazy.. yay! *sarcasmsarcasm*

likey likey...

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/09 06:22 am Title: Oh, look....more vomit.

Man. Probably got food poisoning or something.

Reviewer: nekodark Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/09 12:23 am Title: hermite-floor-light thing

lmao..oh gods Mad TV...hahaha

I can not wait to see how this all plays out, poor fainting Tom. xD

Reviewer: Schrei_Marie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/09 11:24 pm Title: hermite-floor-light thing

hahahaha
that nurse lady is sooo funnny!
great update!

Reviewer: leahq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/30/09 08:44 pm Title: hermite-floor-light thing

BAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That was freaking amazing.. great way to explain it... valley girl doctor scared me a little but jellyfish bill and fainttastic tom were brilliant! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

ah! thank you so much  leahq i'm glad you enjoyed, its people like you i do this for :)

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/09 05:39 pm Title: "fuff"

Ahahahaha. That poor baby.

Reviewer: SimplyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/09 05:01 pm Title: "fuff"

'fuff' HAHAH - Loved IT!!

Reviewer: ichliebedreads Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/09 04:40 am Title: "fuff"

awwweee... me likey.. well I always like Tomi pregnant.. as much as I don't like him bottoming..yeah, I'm weird like that..

more?? bitte..

Reviewer: Schrei_Marie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/09 03:36 am Title: "fuff"

hahaha lol
pooor tomi and billa!
great update!

Reviewer: Katanasai Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/09 03:05 am Title: "fuff"

lol. doesn't matter that it's short, it's cute, sexy, and funny. :) Keep writing. Please? :)

Reviewer: leahq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/30/09 02:20 am Title: "fuff"

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA OMFG I'm trying so hard to be quiet... my parents are trying to sleep right outside my room and it's after on in the morning... but omg i failed so bad! I laughed so loud! That's freaking funny!!!! Totally worth it being short... that was the best ending ever!

Reviewer: Katanasai Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/09 11:14 pm Title: Stomach muscles

Well, my loquacious writer, this was perfectly amusing. As a former pregnant woman,I fully understand poor Tomi's morning sickness. The spider deserved to die! Scaring Tom like that! Horrible little creature!

Reviewer: Schrei_Marie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/09 10:22 pm Title: Stomach muscles

lol! squishing a spider, i would have screamed and run a mile!
i feel sorry for tomi though, i know what its like to be sick every morning.
cant wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/09 09:08 pm Title: Stomach muscles

You need much longer chapters. Just when you get into anything, its over...

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/09 09:02 pm Title: Food should not be furry

OMG! The Tom and Jerry visual was hilarious!

Reviewer: SimplyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/09 06:59 pm Title: Stomach muscles

-giggleclap- I'm a HUGE fan of 'A Few Fries' series!! And this is just to freakin cute. -shiftyeyes- and I am starting to get the idea that our dear Tomi is preggers to Billa. BUT - if not - then yeah - its my stupid brain. Hehe

LOVED IT :D

Reviewer: iHEARTtokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/09 05:20 pm Title: Stomach muscles

ACE.
I loooooved it (:
Super fantastic.

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