Date: 06/02/08 04:21 am Title: One Hell of A Day
i missed this one!!
glad they found Bill soon, major thanks to that girl who helped
Author's Response: Haha... And, yeah no kidding. XD Kind of a major plot device that he randomly found someone in spain who spoke some german, though... >-> lol
Date: 06/02/08 02:32 am Title: One Hell of A Day
How would Tom's phone register Bill's name if Bill was calling from a different phone? Tom must have one very technologically advanced handphone.
Author's Response: Yeah, somebody already pointed that out.. >-> I was half asleep when I wrote this chapter, and now feel like an idiot for screwing that up. XDDD Anyways, thanks for the review! lol
Date: 06/02/08 02:26 am Title: One Hell of A Day
great chapter hun!! you've officially dragged me into the story :) keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Ahaha.. That's good, I guess! And thanks, I will. C:
Date: 06/02/08 01:55 am Title: One Hell of A Day
there's an inconsistency - how could "Bill's name flash across the screen of his phone" when Bill was using some local phone number????
Author's Response: ...Shit. I forgot about that. XDDD Let's just call it a plot device, lol!
Date: 06/01/08 10:05 pm Title: Not the Most Brilliant Idea
Gah what a horrible place to end it. Lol. Loving this story. Please update soon though!!! X
Author's Response: XD I know, lol. And, danke! I'm working on the next chapter now. C:
Date: 04/23/08 01:27 pm Title: Champagne For the Little Lion
Oooooh I love it. xD
Wohooo!
Author's Response: I am GLAD. :D
Date: 03/26/08 03:38 pm Title: Champagne For the Little Lion
I think this story is awsome, great plot, great everything!
I'd like to rip Bushido's apart, if you don't mind, and then kick Tom's ass for being mad at Bill. Why can't anyone be happy for once?
already longing for the next chapter, I'll give you a cookie if you do it really quick! :D
Author's Response: Aww... But I like Bushido.. XD And you can't kick Tomi's ass... lawl
Date: 03/26/08 10:26 am Title: Champagne For the Little Lion
Oh my.. What will happen next?
Please continue soon :]
Author's Response: Ooh, guess you'll have to wait and see! ;D
Date: 03/25/08 03:08 am Title: Champagne For the Little Lion
that felt like a bunch of stupid fuckers.. why was Tom going to leave Bill drinking beside the bar for so long? where was secirity? why they didn't get details on what is where and how to find their way around? I guess after such an accident Saki can be fired... just stupid mess...
and Dadid.. definitely he is a jerk and a bitch overworking Bill and others. .. but come on, they are his meal ticket... i guess after the car crash he should be walkign on egg shels around them...
a girl??? in elevator? that's random...
Author's Response: I can't tell if this is supposed to be a good review or not... >__> And yes, I know. Security seems to be pretty lax.. But that's what I like to call a plot device. XD
Date: 03/25/08 02:14 am Title: Champagne For the Little Lion
AND I must say that I'm kinda glad that Tom did that...I got SO mad at Bill with Bushido! SO MAD!! Go Tom Go! Make him fell what you just felt!
Author's Response: Ahaha.. Tom wasn't jealous or anything, just worried and scared for his little brother.. C:
Date: 03/25/08 02:12 am Title: Champagne For the Little Lion
OMFg I read this in like 10 seconds....and I need MORE MORE MORE!!!
Please!!
My mental health depends on that!!
Author's Response: Wow.. Skills, man.. And, soon!
Date: 03/24/08 10:59 pm Title: Champagne For the Little Lion
love it
want some more
Author's Response: Soon, soon! :D
Date: 03/24/08 05:40 pm Title: Champagne For the Little Lion
A cliff hanger!? D:
Author's Response: *gasp* Maybe..
Date: 03/24/08 02:37 pm Title: Where the Hell Are You?
Oh noes! he's with Bushido! That asshole better not touch him! Can;t wait for more!!
Author's Response: Eeps. Bushido does not appreciate your insults. D: Update coming soon! :D
Date: 03/24/08 02:03 pm Title: Where the Hell Are You?
Bushido! xD
Author's Response: Wahaha. Yup! :D
Date: 03/24/08 01:32 pm Title: Where the Hell Are You?
lol no need to bribe me with cookies i love to review this amazing story :P lol....u get your chapters done so quickly!!! like holy crap!!!! just wonderful again and again!!! love it love it!!!
xoxoxoxoox
Author's Response: I only get chapters done quickly when I'm not in a rut. XD And, thanks for always reviewing! *hands you a cookie*
Date: 03/24/08 01:17 pm Title: Where the Hell Are You?
That Bushido better not try anything funny with Bill :P
Author's Response: Haha.. We'll see... ;P
Date: 03/24/08 01:11 pm Title: Where the Hell Are You?
Ooh no! Please get Bill safe back to Tom!:p
Continue please!
Author's Response: Ahaha... Just keep reading.. C:
Date: 03/24/08 12:38 pm Title: Where the Hell Are You?
i dont actually know what to say, he's being nice and nasty at the same time. So all im goin to say is, well written olde chap :)
Author's Response: I know, he's confusing me, and I'm writing him! >__< And, thanks.. lol
Date: 03/24/08 09:30 am Title: Let's Try It Again
r0;I wanna try it.r1; -- aaw!! Finally! It made me soo happy when Bill said that!:D
Author's Response: Yeah, I've been waitin' to do that for a while now.. XD