Date: 06/08/09 10:46 pm Title: CherryBomb_1989!
Hilarious. I predict you'll win the contest ;)
Date: 06/07/09 07:01 am Title: CherryBomb_1989!
...Five! Well, four… I made Georg post one too... - LOL! i know what that feels like, getting reviews. its exciting! even if its just 4 ^__^
...xXBillxXxLuvZxXxBuXx... - *cracks up
..."Hi Georg! It's me! Bill! Are you busy?"..."Yes."..."Can I come over?"..."No."..."OK, I'll see you in about half an hour"... - wow, bill is so manipulative. me like!!
...B give G a blow-job, G starts to give B a hand job, B fingers G, G rims B, B fucks G. The end... - er, that was simple, i think?
0_____0
*yeah, shut up Bill...!!!
Date: 06/07/09 04:15 am Title: CherryBomb_1989!
"Het writers are always virgins." LMFAO! That line is pure WIN!
I quite like Bill's method of research, and Tom's little waver of uncertainty when he thought Bill would be pairing himself with him. And, the fact that you included stuff about how fanfiction really is, is a major plus.
Excellent work, and I wish you luck with the challenge!
Date: 06/05/09 05:34 pm Title: CherryBomb_1989!
This story is damn funny. I was giggling all the time. Funny and hot at the same time, great story!!!!!
Date: 06/01/09 11:08 am Title: CherryBomb_1989!
"And that… unh… would be… unh… if…"
"Uwa?! Uwa?!"
"IF HE WOULD JUST SHUT THE FUCK UP!!!"
The whole story had me chuckling but when I read those three lines I started laughing so hard!
I had fun reading this story. Biorg seems a bit awkward to me and had it not been for your humour I don't know if I could have read it that easily.
Your Bill was also wonderful!
Good luck to you!
Date: 06/01/09 02:49 am Title: CherryBomb_1989!
That was great!
Date: 05/31/09 01:08 pm Title: CherryBomb_1989!
moar!! =O =O =O =O
pretty please? (A)
this was WAY too awsome to be only a oneshot!! *gets down on her knees* PRETTY please? (A) (A)
Date: 05/31/09 07:58 am Title: CherryBomb_1989!
Okay, the description for this has been calling my name ever since I saw it posted, and I finally caved. The only thing holding me back was Georg; I generally don't read anything where he and anyone is the main pairing. Honestly, I just don't like Georg that much, and I tend to agree with Tom's comments, jokes though they might be. So, seeing him paired with Bill is just kinda... eh. I mean, Bill could do SO much better. But I couldn't stop myself form reading this anyway. I think it was Bill's username, seriously. Cherry bomb. It makes me think of Lady GaGa, tbh, and I've been on a Lady GaGa fix for a while.
Anywho... I love your characterization of Bill. Totally into himself, totally diva, totally bad writer. Maybe I just haven't read a crack fic for a while, but it's refreshing all the same. But I like how you write his naïve diva-ness and manage to make it cute, not annoying. I know you didn't label this as crack, but it just has that slightly ridiculous feel to it because of how Bill acts.
"I might have a drink." Bill wagged his finger at his brother. "You wouldn't want me to drink and drive would you?"
"But I'm watching…"
"Are you ready? I thought we could stop at the garage on the way so I can pick up some nice chocolates for Georg..."
Aww. *pets*
Bill is so selfish and oblivious. So cute. :) I also love how he was bashed for his own characterization of himself, by the way. Ironic. :P
"Het writers are always virgins. Or old. Or old virgins."
That's strange, I never thought of it that way. oO Hmm... I feel like I must now reassess my life.
"No, the best art comes from experience."
"That's why you only got three reviews."
That was good. :P Poor unworldly, unexperienced Bill. *pinches his cheeks* It's kind of sad that Bill actually memorizes his reviews, but I suppose that's because it was so short...?
It's so awkward when Bill's writing out the outline. Just... awkward. And a little funny, but perhaps if I read Bill/Georg [Biorg...?] it wouldn't seem so funny. Again, Bill/Georg just fails to turn me on in any way, so I guess I just chuckle like an immature 14 year old then.
And then the smut... again, I'm not for B/G, but Bill stopping to take notes was an appreciated touch. I don't think I could read 2000 words of straight B/G action. Just not my thing. But, oh god, the Dictaphone. Bill xD ♥
"Uwa?! Uwa?!"
"IF HE WOULD JUST SHUT THE FUCK UP!!!"
Okay, I have to say, not many people could make sex so funny, so kudos and also thank you. xD
"I already wrote it." He tapped his Mac Book as he slipped it into his bag and grinned. "Gotta go! Bye Georgie!"
I didn't see that coming, and uwah, what a great ending. It was definitely worth reading.
Date: 05/30/09 10:35 am Title: CherryBomb_1989!
Oh, man, I loved your Bill! So funny :)
Date: 05/29/09 11:45 pm Title: CherryBomb_1989!
Brilliant.
Date: 05/29/09 08:36 pm Title: CherryBomb_1989!
*applause* HAHA I love chattyBill!
Date: 05/29/09 01:11 pm Title: CherryBomb_1989!
HAHA, this was hilarious! I was cracking up so hard in the beginning. I was a bit sceptical to Bill topping Georg, but it turned out not so bad in the end after all.
Great job! :D
Date: 05/29/09 03:37 am Title: CherryBomb_1989!
LOL! Awesome!
Date: 05/29/09 03:18 am Title: CherryBomb_1989!
Haha Absolutely hilarious and very well written! Amazing! Great Job! :D
Date: 05/28/09 10:27 pm Title: CherryBomb_1989!
I LOVE IT... it's like a story full of twists and turns, and by the end your right-side down and up-side in the north pole!.
Date: 05/28/09 08:18 pm Title: CherryBomb_1989!
Poor Georg, he's just left sitting there all by himself totally confused. I love this, really I do.
Date: 05/28/09 07:01 pm Title: CherryBomb_1989!
Heehee, oh gosh, this was so funny. You should write more slash. ;)
Date: 05/28/09 06:59 pm Title: CherryBomb_1989!
THAT WAS FUCKING SPECTACULAR!!! The crack was amazing! People fuck up crack all the time but this was literally Laugh Out Loud funny! Your painfully oblivious Bill was stellar, other people fuck that up all the time! This was awesome!!!! So impressed! This is the best challenge fic I’ve read yet! I’ve read about 20 of them and I’ll probably find much of the same with the rest! So funny! OMG SO FUCKING FUNNY! oh and not to worry the smut was just fine *shifty eyes and grins awkwardly*
Date: 05/28/09 06:56 pm Title: CherryBomb_1989!
This was great. So cute and funny, and like everyone else, I love the idea of Bill's stories being rejected and reviewed harshly because of his characterizations. LOL! And OMG he totally writes slash...we all know that. ;)
Date: 05/28/09 06:42 pm Title: CherryBomb_1989!
This really cracked me up in places so badly - I think my favourite was Bill's stories being rejected so many times and then his characterisation of himself being criticised. Very lol worthy.