Date: 04/25/10 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'd read this on another site, and I simply love it. I had to read it again.
Date: 06/07/09 09:27 am Title: Chapter 1
...Biology was a bitch... - u got that right, but still interesting, no?
...Nonetheless he rubbed her belly in the middle of the night when she climbed into his bed because she couldn’t sleep from the cramp... - aaaawwww, thats kinda sweet, though i'd never ask that from my bro *shys away
...Fuck Darwin’s Canaries... - hahaha, now i get it =P
Date: 06/05/09 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hmm, it's different when the other half is a girl. makes it more yukkie in a way. It was funny, but I like the twins better being both male, I'm sorry...(or both girls, that's oke too)
Date: 06/04/09 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very dirty, lol, but nicely handled for your first (?) het. I realise this disagrees with other reviews, but I think the explanation about the get together seemed a little rushed and didn't quite fit with the rest of the tone of the fic, but that aside it was a fun lighthearted effort - well done!
Date: 06/03/09 10:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Dirty dirty girl…clit? *blushes* lol
Nice explication of how they got together. I hate it when people gloss that over. It helps to know that kind of detail.
Oy! That was awkward with a name like Emily all I could picture was a blonde…it was odd and weird.
very scary story!
Date: 06/02/09 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
I gotta say, the title really pulled me in! I loved the title!
And I like how it wasn't Bill in this story. Still incest, but different, because it was actually a girl and not Bill. I liked it.
Date: 06/01/09 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was pretty good. I liked the humorous bits.
Good luck to you!
Date: 05/30/09 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, I didnt expect that, but it was good! haha. It made me smile. Haha, fuck Darwin's canaries. Lmao. Anyways, I like how Emily said if she was a boy, her name would be Bill. I guess you just had to fit Bill in somehow, huh? LOL, I think if I had done the challenge, I probably would have done the same thing:D Good job! And Good luck in the challenge! :DD
Date: 05/30/09 10:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Het twincest is surprisingly hot... Nice job.
Date: 05/29/09 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is hot. That's kind of a typical response, but there's really no other word for it. Very sexy (Like the Victoria's secret line ;])Who wouldn't love to be in Emily's place?
Date: 05/28/09 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
lmfaooooooooooooo that was amazing.
i loved how it was still twincest, but with Tom and an OFC.
great job, too. :)
Date: 05/28/09 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is really good. I really like it. It was written very well and it was humourous.