Date: 06/07/09 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
...they were sluts and their make up was a mess, I could do it much better... - yes you can, bill ^__^
...And I was happy as well, flirting, dating a rapper who has to stay anonymous... - pfft..anonymous my ass =P
...my whole life I thought I was gay and now I kissed a girl...and I liked it, no, I loved it... - aaaawwww, great for you Bill ^__^
...Well as long as he doesn't try anything with my future wife, I'm okay with it I guess.... - *LMAO.. priceless!!
Date: 06/03/09 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really neat concept here and nicely delivered. Loved the references to Tom being the same as always, too. Shame about Kasimir though :(
Date: 06/03/09 11:48 am Title: Chapter 1
ewwww so his dying cat brought them together that’s just sad. Good job with the English.
X-raypictures - nope they would be x-rays or radiographs.
Date: 06/03/09 09:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Cute. And not bad for not having written in English before.
Date: 06/01/09 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like that you wrote it from Bill's POV. It was almost like reading a diary or something like that.
Poor Kasimir! I felt sorry for him.
I also liked the humorous bits you added here and there. They were refreshing.
Good luck in the challenge!
Date: 05/30/09 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Haha, my best friend was told that also. He IS gay and his mother is already telling him he's going to take care of her when's she old. I'm going to have that job also, of taking care of my mother, since I am the oldest.
Oh dear, Bill's mom seemed like a bit of a nut job at the beginning, already thinking of adopting chinese children? LOL.
I had to pause to control my giggling after "Gordon was crying like a baby. And then they tell me I'm gay. So I picked him up, the cat, not Gordon, and drove him to the nearest vet."! Gotta love that line!
Wow, I'm just like your Tom, not the bringing home girls part but the part where he had to go with Bill because he's sick of having to stay inside all the time. LOL.
Aw, that was super cute, how they met:) well, except for the part the Kas died. That made me want to cry. And Tom, well, those parts were funny! I loved it! good job and good luck in the challenge! :DD
Date: 05/30/09 01:04 am Title: Chapter 1
oh, adorable :) :) I love it.
but omg kas ;_;
Date: 05/28/09 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet, though sad how they met. I loved the little bits of humor in there :)