Date: 06/07/09 10:05 am Title: Chapter 1
...Andi's dead... - am i a bad person, for feeling relieved that it wasn't tom or bill? *ashamed of self
...so every few feet you walk, you are walking through another ring... - very nnice details here
.... I couldn't leave my mother with only one from a set a of twins... - oh neine! neine! *sniff sniff
...I was so aware that the few good things I had done,they were so few... - man, that was heart-touching.. guess i hav to go look for that song now ^__^
Author's Response: Don't worry, if this had been someone else's fic and one of the twins died, I'd be in tears. And the song is embedded in the beginning of the story, if you didn't notice before. :)
Date: 06/04/09 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
You had a combination of things that I don't usually buy into here, but in spite of that I liked this. I particularly liked the opening. Very sad about Andi though :(
Author's Response: Oh wow! I'm glad you liked it! I think it's an accomplishment to write something that a certain person doesn't like, and they end up enjoying what you've written, despite their thoughts on the matter beforehand :)
Date: 06/03/09 11:12 am Title: Chapter 1
It had a deep message but it lacked deep emotion. It was the story written down but there was no well of emotion to effect the reader.
Author's Response: Yeah, I see where you can get that from. Thank you for the only bit of constructive criticism I've ever gotten. :)
Date: 06/03/09 08:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Powerful. It seems like people really see things clearly when they know their time is coming to an end. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thank you! I was trying to make it powerful. Some people say it lacks much emotion, so now that I actually have a bit of criticism, I can make my next challenge fic better.
Date: 06/01/09 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
I've always been fascinated by out of body experiences so I really enjoyed reading this. You did well.
Good luck in the challenge!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have always been really interested in it as well, I just never have the time to do much research. But when this song came into play around the time of the Challenge starting, I knew I had to do something :)
Date: 05/29/09 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
hi there. first, i'd like to say that this is the third story my friend told me to read out of 5. i really liked it and how it was a song fic. i thought it was cute that you cried *squee* but i really liked the song. and the story ties in perfectly with it. so congrats on achieving that, because not many people can pull it off and have someone say that's a job well done. so good job! :)
Date: 05/29/09 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
hi there. first, i'd like to say that this is the third story my friend told me to read out of 5. i really liked it and how it was a song fic. i thought it was cute that you cried *squee* but i really liked the song. and the story ties in perfectly with it. so congrats on achieving that, because not many people can pull it off and have someone say that's a job well done. so good job! :)
Author's Response: Thank you darling! I'm so glad you had so much to say about it. It was meant to be a moving piece, and I'm glad that you liked it.
Date: 05/29/09 08:30 am Title: Chapter 1
i looove it!! *squeezes*
Author's Response: No, I love you. -huggles-
Date: 05/29/09 01:34 am Title: Chapter 1
wow, that was really moving, thank you :)
Author's Response: No, thank you darling. I'm glad you enjoyed it.