Date: 04/17/10 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 13
i really liked this chapter even if it was short! :) hope you get more reviews next time....or this time! i really enjoy reading this story and hope to read more soon! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I try to make it longer next time. And Yes, thank you for reviewing. I have already gotten 10 reviews so far, so I am satisfied now. lol. Gonna try and update soon. ;)
Date: 04/17/10 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 13
ooh more
Author's Response: More is on the way! :)
Date: 04/17/10 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 13
omgg pliss dont tell me that the police is going to get tom!!
i really like your story pliss keep writting :]
Author's Response: We'll see how it goes. But I promise that this whole story will have a happy ending. :)
Date: 04/17/10 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 13
I hope they will get a happy ending in the end. I feel so bad that all this crap is with them. :[ Is it odd that i believe that Tom should turn himself in? Bill could request to drop both the rape and kidnapping charges but for striking an officer he might get 1 to 5 years in jail. :/ i dunno. OR i hope that they do get a away and won't get caught :D i can't wait to see how this turns out. I just hope nothing too bad happens ;_;
Author's Response: Don't worry, I would never end it up sadly. Everything will figure out... Even though I don't have the whole story in my mind yet, I know the end will be happy! Thanks anyway :)
Date: 04/17/10 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 13
Wow taking hostage your fic because you don't get a whole lot of reviews, that's just mean.
I'm a lurker I don't like leaving reviews because I hate the way I sound in a single text box, but I could tell you that the long spaces between updates might just loose your readers, so maybe less hostage taking and more writing for the sake of enjoying the fic your writing?
As for this fic, I do enjoy it and its a brilliant idea. Wish I had thought of it first.
Author's Response: I know that was mean. I totally know this, but I got so little reviews and were so uninspired that I just couldn't write. I'm terribly sorry about that and I promise such a long wait will not occur anymore! Thank you for your review and also thanks for liking my story. You certainly inspired me to update sooner this time! <3
Date: 04/17/10 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 13
Halo! My name is Cristina, I'm from Spain.
I love, love, love, love, really love your fic. xD
Put the next chaper soon. Pleeeeeease. ^^
Kiss!! Cris
Author's Response: Hey, I'm Karin. :D And I really love your review. I'll try to update soon. Thank you! <3
Date: 04/17/10 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 13
I didn't notice how few reviews you got on the last chapter, until I was about to read this one. But I did react, actually. And I was about to review here the other day, even though no new chapter was up, about the banner, but I must've forgotten or something. I'm really looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And I am trying to update sooner this time... :D
Date: 04/17/10 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh, I liked this chapter though I feel sad for Tom, he's so exhausted! Anyway good story! :D oh and the banner is beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)
Date: 04/17/10 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 12
I actually missed this chapter.:o I'm sorry I didn't see it sooner! Anyway, it as really good and the smut didn't suck. :D I'm sorry for not reviewing when you posted it! ^_^ So, off to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: It's okay. :) Thank you anyway <3
Date: 12/21/09 10:06 am Title: Chapter 12
Yay! Smut! I thought it was good
Author's Response: Thanks. <3
Date: 12/21/09 09:53 am Title: Chapter 12
I loved it!!! :D I hope you continue soon!!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Thanks! And yes, I am continuing now. ;)
Date: 12/20/09 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 12
aww=] plz more
Author's Response: More is on the way! :)
Date: 12/20/09 03:32 am Title: Chapter 12
oooooooo freaking amazing! i loved it! can't wait till next chapter i was to wonder where there going next:}
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it! ;)
Date: 12/19/09 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Your welcome and if you want i could help with your beta-ing...:]
Date: 12/19/09 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 11
i love it... stupid bill finally came to his senses... i hope that everything will work out ok
Date: 12/19/09 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 12
smut is smut i love it lol
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Date: 12/18/09 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 11
o.o this story is effing amazing!! Please post soon, im like beyond hooked to reading it! :]
Author's Response: I'll probably update today! (if I get someone to beta read the chappie though... :/) Thank you anyway! <3
Date: 12/18/09 09:39 am Title: Chapter 11
Short short X/
I hate doing time skips in stories, because a lot of people are kinda like 'wait...how did this happen again'? I kinda got that at first, about how Bill suddenly (in four days) remembered everything. I can't say anything about this chapter, though, since it was a bit short...
Maybe you'll explain more about what happened in the last four days in the next few (possibly smutty?) chapters?
Author's Response: Yeah... The chappie was a bit short, but almost everything was explained there. :D That after Tom kissed Bill, he started having flashbacks and so, and at night he had seen a dream (also as a flashback) about their time with Tom. I don't know why you didn't see it, but everything was explained... But if you feel better then, I can explain these things some more in the future! The next chapter will be up soon and thank you! :)
Date: 12/17/09 10:51 am Title: Chapter 11
I really liked it ^_^
Author's Response: That's good, I'm glad you liked it :]
Date: 12/15/09 10:45 am Title: Chapter 11
I loved it!! :D I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Thank youu! And I will :)