Date: 06/05/09 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 1: Blood.
NOM NOM NOM. *noms on SexyGangsterBill* Why didn't I read this sooner? Oh yeah, was busy with stuff... XD
Author's Response: Mhm. He's yummy aint he? Er...you didn't read this sooner cuz you were lazy -.- duh.
Date: 06/04/09 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 3: Inspection.
That was cool. I loved that you introduced us to some of the members and explained things better. Hehe I'm ready to see how Bill "breaks" him. *wiggles eyebrows*
Author's Response: heh. yay. i'm glad you likes the inspection/introduction/explaination parts ^_^ AND AND AND hahahaha. breaking tomi xD this'll be fun xD
Date: 06/04/09 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 2: Favors.
*grins* Amazing. Tom has no idea what he's getting himself into.
Author's Response: hahahaha. he never knows what he's getting into when he's in one of my stories xD
Date: 06/02/09 12:48 am Title: Chapter 3: Inspection.
Yessss... The inner perv in me is excited =D heh
Author's Response: HAHAHAAHAHAHAH. Yaya I'm glad that the inner perv in you is excited ^_^
Date: 06/01/09 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 3: Inspection.
So Bill is.........A strange fellow to say the least. :D
And The Hotel seems like a very complicated group to haha.
This chapter is not boring at all. :D
And no pictures of Tom's guns?
What does he mean by break him? Like train him?
Great Update!
Please more soon?
:DDDD
Author's Response: Lol, ja. Bill is very strange, but as the story goes on, you'll see why he's like that xD
And yeaaaa, The Hotel is very complicated, but it gets easier to understand what they do when you see it first hand.
And yaya, thanks for thinking tha tthis chappie wasn't boring *grins*
And oh trust me love, the guns are coming up next chapter. I wanted you guys to be able to picutre them when he uses them on Bill hahaha.
And breaking him can mean training him...or something more sexual xD
Date: 06/01/09 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 3: Inspection.
ok so. to get the full effect im gonna write the review as i read it.....
hahaha a cold-calculating mobster comedian.
O.O holy... i know you told me about the bill-saki convo but god dayum. and i could just see him standing there, saying this in front of all his men and in the most calm way ever.. kinda like you when your pissed >.< lol
lol gotta love the motto, its cool tho because its kinda like yea hell kill ya but other than that he doesnt do anything illegal lol
i love dunja. *wack!* haha. dumbass tom tho... i guess he just doing his job but still... oh and i like that we see an something other than anger, annoyance, neutrality, or insanity from dear ol bill lol
"Either he wanted to do something or he didn’t, and if he didn’t, the rest of the world had to abide by his schedule."... who does that sound like to ya? jajaja.... oops.. apparently my inner-hispanic popped out... ahahhahahahahaha XD
i love that jost is a dirty cop.. i have no idea why.. just kinda amuses me lol
oooo break that boy in bill XD
cant wait for the next chappie babes. hope the long ass review makes up for me taking so long to actually do it >.> lol. oh and thankie for not asking me to beta this chapter... its nice to read something completely new.. but send me more stuffles!! otherwise how else can i remain.....
~your ever faithful beta
Author's Response: soooooo.
this review is sooo long, and i sooo don't wanna have to reply to every aspect of it while still kinda sick -.- anyways, i'm glad that you liked the chapter and bothered listing some of my favorite parts to write, and lol @ dunja and jost in this story xD they're HILARIOUS in their own separate ways right? xD
Date: 05/31/09 11:04 am Title: Chapter 3: Inspection.
Woah! What's gunna happen now? D:
Anywayyyys, I love it! update soon, hun! :)
Author's Response: lols. sweating, heaving breaking, pulsating bodies xD they're going to train xD and maybe have some smut time lol.
And thanks for the praise and the review ^_^ I'll update soon, I promise.
Date: 05/31/09 09:55 am Title: Chapter 3: Inspection.
this is wonderful! please please please update this soon!!!!
Author's Response: awwww thanks for the praise and for reviewing again ^_^ I'll update soon, I promise.
Date: 05/31/09 09:41 am Title: Chapter 2: Favors.
"the girliest serial killer crime lord" ? harsh... lol!
Author's Response: lmfao. welll Bill can kinda be girly -.- hahahah xD thanks for reviewing ^_^
Date: 05/31/09 01:35 am Title: Chapter 3: Inspection.
I looooooooove you for this story and the fast updates! Nah it wasn't boring at all! That background info was needed! Is Bill's dad still alive? Oh, and why am I getting the sense that the breaking in part will be dirty? =P
Author's Response: awwww. well thanks for loving me for this story and it's fast updates ^_^ And for thinking that it wasn't boring ^_^ Yay for background info and stuffles. And I actually can't tell you if he is or isn't. You'll find out what happened later on ^_^. Oh and trust me, the breaking in part will definitely be dirty ^_^
Date: 05/30/09 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 3: Inspection.
it wasnt boring at all!
0hhh i'm excited for the next chapter!
tomi gets broken in! XD
i wonder what billa will do to him?
do we get tomi with his top off, maby a bit of blood?
Author's Response: awww, I'm glad that you didn't think it was boring :-)
And I'm glad that you're excited for the next chapter ^_^. and *nod nod* he is goona get broken. very very broken xD and don't worry, you'll see what happens soon *grins*
Date: 05/30/09 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 3: Inspection.
Ahhhmmaazzziiiinnngggg!!!!!!!! Can't say it enough. I'm luffing this story very muchly and I can't wait for the next chapter!! *squirms in chairs with excitment*
Author's Response: Awwwwwww, thanks for calling it amazing ^_^ I'm glad that I could make you love this story very muchly :-) And I'll give you the next chapter really quickly ^_^
Date: 05/30/09 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 3: Inspection.
I looooovvvveeeeeee.......it. please post another chapter. you are a great writer.
Author's Response: awwwwww. i'm glad that you love it xD and i'll post another chapter soon ^_^ and thanks for calling me a great writer ^_^
Date: 05/30/09 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 3: Inspection.
Break him?? Oh ooh !! U have to update then!!don't leave us hanging! :O
Author's Response: haha. yep. break him *grins* Tom's gonna get broken in, but then he's gonna BREAK Bill nicely xD and i will update. int wo days. after i get over the hangover i know i'm sure to get in the morning xD and i promise i won't leave you guys hanging. xD
Date: 05/29/09 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 2: Favors.
Omfg!
I should have read that before! waaah!
I just fell in love!
This story is SOOOOOOO good!!
OMGG!
Plz update soon hunnie! *hearts and kisses*
Author's Response: awwwww. I'm glad that you love it ^_^
Thanks for calling my story so good hun ^_^
and I promise I'll update soon.
Date: 05/29/09 03:53 am Title: Chapter 2: Favors.
I like this story very much. :D
I usually find stories like this to be boring, but i find this one extremely entertaining.
Amazing Update!
Please more soon!
*Added to tracked list*
Author's Response: Awww, I'm glad that you like this story so muchrnrnAnd Awww, i'm glad that this story could be the exception to the whole boring thing (seeing you write that made me smile lots)rnrnThanks for calling the update amazing and reviewing AND adding to the tracked list ^_^
Date: 05/29/09 12:18 am Title: Chapter 2: Favors.
Fuck yeah! Another chappy! =D I loved it my dear - I'm starting to place bets on who will top who. 'Cause Bill's pretty badass. I hope you'll explain The Hotel more - I find that really interesting. And now I'm trying to figure out who this killer of the crime lords is.... Any hints? =D
Author's Response: hahaha. yep. i gave you another chappy. i'm on a roll with the updates xD and as for who is topping who......I haven't figured it out yet xD
and I'll definitely explain the Hotel more in depth next chapter ^_^ it's really crazy and crime-filled with still an air of Bill xD And the killer of the crime lords....hmmmm I can't give any hints other than to say that they're really badass xD
Date: 05/29/09 12:16 am Title: Chapter 2: Favors.
:D I still love this story, it's amazing. Can't wait for more hon!
Author's Response: Awwww ^_^. Thanks for the review Anony ^_^ I'm glad that you still love this story ^_^ And I'll defintely give you more xD
Date: 05/28/09 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 2: Favors.
alrighty, now again despite me talking to you at this very second.
my views.. bill = insane sexy
tom = just sexy
but my boo.. oh samy.. *collapses* i fear for his life tho with bills whole 3 months till death thingie.
now. yes at first look i was so confused. why would you wnt someone, loyal to one of your biggest rivals, being the one you trust with your life AND be good enough at what he does to KILL you.. i didn't get it, but i know and get you and there is always a reason for everything in that brilliantly twisted mind of yours.
ich liebe dich and you better keep givin me stuff to beta.. oh and i see how much you love me.. *sniff sniff* you dont thank me on either chapie *sniff sniff* you dont love meh!!!! jk jk jk, but yea. i lovers you
~ever faithful beta to the forgetful author XD
Author's Response: lol. well you're not talking to me RIGHT NOW >.>
and yea, Bill is supposed to be insane sexy. and tom is supposed to be just sexy until you see him next chappie *shivers in excitement* amd yea...samy. you know how i feel about that bitch xD
and ummm, if you were confused you should have told me when i called you slow ass xD AND AND AND yea, my mind is brilliantly twisted, most cuz i'm THAT AWESOME xD
and ummm...i do love you. i fixed the goddamn thing, but now you're not reviewing my other stuff and making me want to cry SO WHO DOESN'T LOVE WHO???? hmmp. byeeeeee iluvuk?
Date: 05/28/09 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 2: Favors.
bahaha I love it very much. This is amazing and very well written. Still likin' the gangstah theme very muchly and you know why xD. Keep it up! ^^
Author's Response: yay for you loving it very much ^_^ and for calling it amazing and well written (i do try. hard. a lot xD) and the gangstah theme is here to stay gurl, so get used to it and keep loving it xD