Date: 06/28/09 09:20 am Title: Chapter 5: Reunion.
I like the chappie, as usual, but why didn't you put the fight and smut in the same chapter as well?
Author's Response: er, i'm glad you liked this chapter. the fight and smut are going to be in the next chapter hun ^^
Date: 06/27/09 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 5: Reunion.
hahaha. you dont fail
i love this story and i really cant wait for the fight. i think in fact im more enthralled with the fighting and blood aspect of this story then the sex... wait i lied.. its a tie lol.
i love them both equally, but of course not as much as you XD
~efb, vicky, hubby (take your pick of nicknames lmao)
Author's Response: lol. gotta wrote this quickly so: thanks for the review and for loving the story (and the future smut/fight xD)
Date: 06/26/09 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 5: Reunion.
*grins* Favorite line,“And two, because you’re so in love with Samy that you wouldn’t even dream of falling in love with the person that took you away from your lover.” Amazing. I really liked this chapter and you didn't bore me at all. I'm ready to see the next one, but I have to read all your others before you'll let me lol. ilyboo!
Author's Response: lol. i liked that line too hun ^^ and i'm glad that you liked the chapter ^^ and the next chapter will be written...soon-ish xD
Date: 06/23/09 09:43 am Title: Chapter 5: Reunion.
I LOVE this story! And am so sad that there is no next button! You threw me with the Tom loving Samy stuff, lol. But I want to read the fight! And did you say smut? Wheee. More soon, please?!?!
Author's Response: awwwwwww. well the next chapter should be updated either today or tomorrow, depending on how much writing i get done before mum kicks me off the computer -.- and yes, fighting and smutt-ing? xD i promise, i'll give you more, soon!
Date: 06/22/09 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 5: Reunion.
I kinda reviewed over IM... But yeah, never hurts to make the review count go up. XD ANYWAY, yeah. I'm having difficulty imagining Tom in a sweater. I'm thinking something striped... XD And epically gay. It's pretty lolz.
So there. Fail review. XD Whatever, I reviewed over IM. I am absolved from guilt. XD
Author's Response: lmfao. yea, you kinda did. but it's cool because i love making the review count go up too xD and ughhh *goes to fix sweater* there. it's a hoodie xD and everyone has to give me a fail review once in a while! xD
Date: 06/22/09 06:34 am Title: Chapter 5: Reunion.
yay!
I know that Tom will NOT die the next chapter, but im still a bit afraid of him :(
So.... gimme the fight scene and the smut please. *puppy eyes*
Loved it though... You're a very good writer Shelz! (A)
Author's Response: lols. he won't i promise ^^ he's too cool for that
and i'll give you the fight and smut soon promise ^^
and thanks for the compliments and review love ^^
Date: 06/22/09 12:38 am Title: Chapter 5: Reunion.
Smut is very much warranted, especially after it was interrupted before!!!!
Author's Response: hahahaha. it'll be here soon enough love, i promise. thanks for reviewing ^^
Date: 06/22/09 12:32 am Title: Chapter 5: Reunion.
ohhh!!! you updated this x3!!!
it wasn't boring, just made me more excited for the next chapter :D
lol
Author's Response: yup yup, i did, i did.
And thank you for not calling this chapter boring ^^
and I promise next chapter will be GOOD and, and, and it'll be put up soon ^^
Date: 06/21/09 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 5: Reunion.
this is fabulous!!! I'm loving it mor and more, it flows very nicely. I want Tom to kill that bitch so bad....XD Good job!!
Author's Response: lol awww danke meine liebe ^^ I'm glad that you're loving it more and more ^^ And yea, I want him to kill her, but it can't happen for a while ^^
Date: 06/15/09 12:48 am Title: Chapter 4: Training. And a little more.
Yay thank you! Heh if I can get your email I'll send you over the next chapter. :D Thank you!
Btw, like the banner :D
Author's Response: awwww. danke darlin i'm glad you love the banner ^^ it took meh forever! lol jkjkjk
and of course,er, my email is: parallelheartz@gmail.com ^^
Date: 06/14/09 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 4: Training. And a little more.
Hey! Haha you commented on one of my stories that I've neglected =( and I'm finally getting over my writers block. Do you still want to beta for me? =D
Btw, update soon! Haha I'm dying over here!
Author's Response: lol. yep, i did. i was like...i know that author.,...i know their stories -.- THEY NEED TO UPDATE! xD i'm one to talk xD but of course i'd love to beta for you ^^
and i'm gonna update soon! hopefully tonight since i have a banner for this baby ^^ xD
Date: 06/13/09 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 4: Training. And a little more.
Yum, action~
I like action. You know that. And now I see why you kept getting angry over the two of them not getting it on! Were they supposed to go all the way?
And I like the naming. It was cute. :)
Author's Response: lmfao you and your love for action xD and nah, i'm more angry over the fact that i can't get samy and tom to fuck xD and nah, bill and tom weren't. they actually weren't supposed to go THAT far. but they did. as usual xD
Date: 06/13/09 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 3: Inspection.
This...is...confuzzling! But good.
See, I'm reviewing!
Author's Response: haha. you still owe my other babies reviees -.- xD and how was it confuzzling? i don't like confuzzling my peeps xD
Date: 06/10/09 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 4: Training. And a little more.
"And then I’ll kill the bitch that made Bushido call and interrupt us.”
AAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *dead*
This story is the damn BEST XD
Sorry, I forgot to read before!!! :(
But now i did!!! And I loved it! :)
Plz update soooooon. Me wantz more! :D
Author's Response: lol. hahahahahahahaha. i'm glad you liked tha tpart so much love ^^
And yat for this story being the damn best ^_^
and it's ok. i'm just glad that you read and liked it, and i'm glad that you loved it ^^
Date: 06/08/09 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 4: Training. And a little more.
Nooooooooo! Ruuuude! I'm now mad haha I wanted some smut here! =D Good chappy! Please update soon!
Author's Response: bwahahahahaha. i know it was rude, but it had to happen cD there will be smut soon, i promise love ^^
Date: 06/07/09 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 4: Training. And a little more.
Very well written chapter my darling. Too bad Bill and Tom's sexy time was itterupted. xD This is a very awesome story and I can't wait for more *wiggles in seat with excitment*
Author's Response: awwww. thanks for the praise love ^^ and eww for sexy time being interrupted right?? xD and thanks for calling this an awesome story xD
Date: 06/07/09 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 3: Inspection.
Your story is very good and intresting!! I can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response: awww. thank you love ^^ I can't wait to give you more to read ^^
Date: 06/06/09 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 4: Training. And a little more.
so you said you got inspiration from a dream? I want to have such brilliant dreams too ^^
And I love this fic already, really, it's very good.
I love tom's guns. I wanna kill bushido,though, for interrupting. I wonder what's the secret bill was talking about...
Hope you'll update soon!
Author's Response: lol. awwww. thanks for calling my dreams billiant ^_^
and thanks for loving this fic already and caling it very good ^_^
And trust me love. I love Tom's guns too. And Bill's swords xD
and poor bushido. everyone wants to kill him. but it's not really his fault it's the person that CALLED him and told him to call Bill who should die xD
and you'll understand the secret soon enough love ^_^
Date: 06/06/09 01:12 am Title: Chapter 4: Training. And a little more.
OHMYGOD
This story is so fucking cool.
I can't help but keep thinking of that movie Wanted when I read this lol.
This is so detailed, it's brilliant. F-ing brilliant ^^!!
Author's Response: Lol. Awww. I'm glad I could make you OHMYGOD xD
and aww, thanks for thinking that this story is fucking cool ^_^
I was on my way to a aprty when i got the email saying i had a review, so i looked at it via phone and squealed in the car, because eventhough i've never seen that movie, i've heard it was crazy awesome ^_^
And thanks for calling it detailed, brilliant and f-ing brilliant ^_^
Date: 06/05/09 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 4: Training. And a little more.
CRAP. T_T Why why why you make my HWNR, Para???? That's just mean!!! You promised me floor/wall smut, and it was interrupted!!! Whyyyy...? T_T
Author's Response: LMFAO. umm, because i didn't want them to fuck right away? duh xD and there was floor/wall smut. it was just not completed xD it will be i promise xD