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Reviewer: Loran Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/09 08:23 am Title: Chapter 1: Blood.

Actually it's Loke not Loki, but that's okey:P Anyway it's an amazing story!

Author's Response: Actually, in English, it's spelled Loki. I remember learning in one of my Uni classes about how it's spelled Loke on Norwegian, and how a Norwegian painter created this one picture called "Loke and Sigyn", but I also know for a fact that it's generally spelled as Loki in English. Loke, in English is 'a private path or road'.

but anyways, I'm glad that you like the story ^^

Reviewer: WhiteWolfHotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/09 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 8: Discover.

its good rllr rlly good.. i need some tom gun actin, cuz remember every 1 was lik e"train him b4 u brinh him to ur mother" well... tom isnt like fully pupie trained im guessing so.. olol

Author's Response: yay. i'm glad you think it's good ^_^ and don't worry, there will be loads of action in the next chapter, and Bill not training Tom is gonna be a HUGEEEEE issue in the next chapter *nodnod* xD

Reviewer: Annalas Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/09 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 8: Discover.

Okay, adding to Favs now. Seriously. Anyway, love Bill's mental moment XD
I wish I could say something worthwhile, but I'm already talking to you about it on aim lol

Author's Response: hahah NOW you add it to your favs xD such a fail xD and i'm glad you love Bill's mental moment. i was getting pissed since he was going SOOOOOO OCD xD

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/17/09 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 8: Discover.

*flails*

YES! Here's the calm before the storm. I CAN'T WAIT!!!



Author's Response: yay for flailing xD

and hehehehe so much amazingness will happen soon xD

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/09 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 8: Discover.

ooh i hecka luvz thiz..plz update SOOON thx soso much=]=]

Author's Response: YAY I'm glad that you hecka love this ^^

Reviewer: Anony Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/09 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 8: Discover.

:D I finally caught up on the story!!! -huggles- It's brilliant hon. I luv it! Can't wait for more! xxAli

Author's Response: yay for catching up adn you thinking this is brilliant ^_^ i can't wait to give you more

Reviewer: Princess2000204 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/09 04:36 am Title: Chapter 8: Discover.

More, More!

I can't wait to meet 'mother' ^_~ 

Should be hilarious to say the least!



Author's Response: hahaha. it's be funny and scary and weird and just awesomeness xD

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/09 04:06 am Title: Chapter 8: Discover.

yeeeah! smut! ^___^

Author's Response: hahaha. smut is ALWAYS nice xD

Reviewer: KaulitzTwinsLover17 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/11/09 02:19 am Title: Chapter 7: The Angel of Death.

This was insane. I can't think of any other way to explain it. Amazing, but insane.

Author's Response: hahah. danke. this wasn't supposed to happen for a while, but i lost my inspiration and shit happened xD

Reviewer: WhiteWolfHotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/09 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Angel of Death.

i fucking LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg looove it lol u g2 update!

Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you love ^^ and i'll update soon ^^

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/05/09 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 1: Blood.

Fine!

Author's Response: ha ha ha ily ^^

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/05/09 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Angel of Death.

Two words.

Next chapter.

That is all.



Author's Response: hahaha. after your smut. and Princess Cafe. And Verbatim. And Taken. And Lunacy. xD

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/09 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Angel of Death.

oh snap! :O its getting so good XD

Author's Response: haha YAY I'm glad that you think so ^_^

Reviewer: Annalas Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/09 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Angel of Death.

I heart your stories, and this one is no exception...I'm blaming Aimee for EVERYTHING, atm. She could be trying to screw the Hotel so she could comfort Bill and pick up the pieces afterward... >.> It's just an idea, of course.

Author's Response: yay. i'mg ald that i could make you heart my stories ^_^ and hahaha. >.> she has a part in it, but she's DEFINITELY not the bigbad of this story lol

Reviewer: Misa Sugar Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/09 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Angel of Death.

LOL, I don't think Bill is OOC, I think his character makes sense.

...THF took so long to get back up, I forgot what else I was gonna say. XD

Author's Response: lol. hahaha at least one of us thinks his character makes sense xD and hahaha tis alright ^^

Reviewer: Raiya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/09 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Angel of Death.

D:

Oh my, lol.

Good chapter =]

Author's Response: lol. i'm glad you liked it ^^ thanks for reviewing ^_^

Reviewer: KaulitzTwinsLover17 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/17/09 02:20 am Title: Chapter 6: Fighting. And a lot more.

The fight scene was ahmazing. Then the sex scene...dear gawd Shelly that was one of your best. Bill's nuts though and I felt horrible for Tom when he was like "Get off." I'm so excited for the next chapter.

Author's Response: hahaha. danke danke. i liked the fight, even if i felt like it wasn't up to par with what i'm usually capable of lol. and yea...i HATED the sex, but i'm glad you liked it so much xD and yea, Bill's a little off his rocker xD and i felt bad for Tom too, but Bill had to do it, yanno?

Reviewer: Raiya Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/09 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 6: Fighting. And a lot more.

Dear God.. lol

I feel so.. dirty after reading that ahahah. >_O

It was good though. Very good x]]]]

Author's Response: hahaha. er, i'm glad that I could make y0u feel dirty?

lol. and thanks for thinking it was good ^_^

Reviewer: Kariiin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 6: Fighting. And a lot more.

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*died, went to hell and came back to review*

This was SO hot! I would have came myself if I were a guy. :S

Anyway... *died again*


GIMME SOME MORE SEX!!! *drools*

Author's Response: HAHAHHAHHAHAHA. I'm so glad that my sex could make you THAT happy ^^ i was all worried about it and such ^_^ you made my day love, you really did ^^

Reviewer: Princess2000204 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/09 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 6: Fighting. And a lot more.

Yay for an update!!!!

Author's Response: yup yup. i hope you liked the chapter and i promise i'll try not to take as long with updates ^^

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