oh man! it was tons of fun! and i better have lost like a gazillion pounds cause i did A LOT of walking. DX

i felt bad cause i couldn't review/comment your story. D: anyways, i went to London, then Paris, then Venice, then Rome, then Barcelona, and a little town in Spain called Figueres, and lastly Madrid. Fun fun fun!

And now my sleeping pattern's all fucked up, XD its like 7 AM in Texas.

Dutch!? Oh man! Thats cool! :D field hockey.. what's that like again? XD

Author's Response: i already responded to this on myspace haha i just want my un responded box to be clear. hahaha

OOOh gesh,I hope Bill doesn't feel bad because he could've been up there with tangia?*sorry,sorry;I just had to get that horrible question out of the way*
that sleepover sounds like fun(:
Next,they should run down the street naked together(:
haha

Author's Response: lmfaooooooooooo haha i don't think i could figure out how too add that into the story but it could be hilarious if i figured it out XD ok well, Bill never actually thought about what could of happened. He never went "oh maybe if i had gotten my dad to get the tape i could have gotten her to not cry and shed be alive" he never thought about any of that. All he knew was that he had lost people before like further relatives and some friends had moved and it made him sad but all the people he was closeee to, when they went away it was just unbearable so he didn't want to think about it or feel that pain again. Bill is a very spontaneous, fun, light hearted, polite, caring person naturally, that's just how he was born. He does everything he even feels like doing without thinking about it. He doesn't want a relationship with anyone (friends, family, bf/gf) because he doesn't want to lose someone, but since he doesn't think about anything he doesn't have a clue that hes getting close with Tom. Hes getting addicted to Tom. Its like smoking crack lmao you do it once without really thinking about it then it felt amazing so you do it again and again and you don't know why and don't want to think about what it will do but it just feels good so you stick with it. (btw i don't do drugs haha it was just the best metaphor i had haha)

woah, lol. wasn't expecting Bill's mom to be having an affair :O. didn't see that coming

they're very playful with each other =]. personally, having tattoos done at a sleepover would totally beat the makeovers my friends made me go through >_O

Author's Response: haha yayyy finally i shocked someone with something in my story!! :D i keep trying to have plot twists but its like *fail* haha. yea they are playful, but Bill doesn't really notice it. he just knows that tom makes him happy and makes him feel "complete in a way" so he doesn't think about why or how he likes him. Tom actually likes likes likessss Bill, but Bill doesn't spend the time thinking out his feelings so Tom can't tell if Bill likes him back or if hes just naturally cuddly. Bill doesn't even consider the fact that he might like Tom too, or that he only likes him as a friend and is being unfair leading him on. dun dun dunnnnn haha

i love this chapter(:
When will you tell what exactly happened? I can't wait for that details
[:

Author's Response: im thinking about putting them in the next chapter. i was SOOOOOOO close to putting them into the scene when Tom asks if they died in a fire, but then i remembered i wanted to do flashback or dream thing so i didn't haha sorry. thanks for the review =]

so is this actually set when Bill is twelve, or not?

Author's Response: no when the story starts bill is 18 and in his senior year of high school. he is 12 when some tragedies happen

They died in a fire.
You had refrences to that in the last two chapters,right?

We should find out in a drean sequence,since Bill has nightmares every night.

Author's Response: thanks for your input =] anddddd i can not tell youuuuu if thats how they died. haha sorry. you'll find out soon though. i actually might write it now. its going to be very vague and stuff. but you'll get the point.

Whelp, I think maybe Bill should have it in a flashback while he's sleeping.. but wake up terribly (like how you would with any other nightmare, screaming, crying, clinging onto Tom, blahblahlblah) and have Tom there... so like.. Bill will explain it then.. what happened... maybe? Ohh!! I suck at suggestions x[

I was sure that I reviewed the previous chapter... huh.. Well in response to your end notes of the last chapter, I felt bad that you felt that your story wasn't as good as SCN11B or whatever.. But SCN11B is HER story; yea it's awesome, but completely different. And this is YOUR story, and I think you are doing a wonderful job =]. I am in love with this story just as much as I was with hers =]]]]. Plus, you allow your reviewers to interact with everything xD like with suggestions and stuff x3

Much, much love, my dear =]

PS. I got all excited when I saw that you used lyrics from The Gazette. I think their lyrics and music is awesome and to see them incorporated into your story: everything just goes together well ^^

Author's Response: ok this review made me smile a lot :D yea im trying to escape the SCN11B similarities. I mean i already know 100% all the main scenes that are going to happen (just not the last scene yet...lmao) and i know who's going to be introduced, who's going to flip out, who's going to open up, where everyone will be, i know it all, but i have to build it all up! see if i just put whatever i wanted next, like the next big scene, yea no one would compare it to SCN11B anymore, but there would be no depth, no emotion, so its hard =/ im not good at filler stuff. And i really do like your suggestion on Bill dreaming it then waking up and explaining it to Tom =] i wouldn't of thought of that. OK do you think i should have Bill end up sleeping over Toms house a lot, orrrrr ifff i use your scene, then should i just make it another completely random one like the last sleepover?

Oh,so he's not anti-social,
Just,apathetic?

Author's Response: yea. see hes supposed to seem anti social but once you get to know him you realize that he is a normal kid and hes nice and sweet, but he doesn't want any friends or family because if you picked it up in the first chapter, he doesn't want to have to deal with losing anyone. He doesn't want to go to funerals he doesn't want to say goodbye so instead of living life normally he closes off himself so that no one would want to get close to him.

I really like this story...I did get the vibe that Bill's character was somewhat like Bill's character SCN11B.
I'm just so interested in Bills character idk why though,he seems so interesting[:,I know.It's weird :/
So Bill goes everywhere alone?
like movies,concerts,(does he go to concerts?)and parties(if he goes),etc?
btw maybe to make the characters stronger you can do a background on them,like write down everything about them(likes,dislikes,their story,job,etc) even if it isnt in the story.
-I know,I'm over-enthusiastic :/

Author's Response: the sad thing is i did do that, a character sheet. and GWARRRRR HES NOT SUPPOSED TO BE LIKE HIMMMM.(i don't blame you AT ALL for comparing them but im trying really hard to make them different) see in SCN11B Bill is reallyyyyy super bitchy and hes REALLY uptight and non violent and un-emotional. Myyyyy Bill is supposed to not care enough about anything that he isntttt MAD at everything like her character, he just doesn't care, my Bill is very lenient, like ok say in SCN11B if Tom had a poster of a playmate on his wall bill would've ripped it down right on the spot, but my Bill would've just ignored it and thought wtf? Maybe the next chapter will help because of what i explain in it....maybeee. haha.
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rnok so bill does go EVERYWHEREEEEEE alone. he doesn't go to parties, no concerts, yea RARELY movies, he'll only go if he legitimately has NOTHING AT ALLLLLL to do or if its one of his favorite movies.
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rnalso in SCN11B Bills life sucked, well my Bills life is supposed to be very charming. not counting the insane depressed aunt who barely notices anything ever. See Bill has a lot of money, big house, all the books or cds he could ever want, a awesome job, tons of clothes, and talent. and Tom is this poor kid who has to basically fight for his life in his own home sometimes and has almost nothing except a few guitars and a ton of movies. When i was describing the house, everything that Bill saw, thats all there was, tehre were no papers lieing around, nothing on the counters, no decorations, nothing.

Author's Response: the sad thing is i did do that, a character sheet. and GWARRRRR HES NOT SUPPOSED TO BE LIKE HIMMMM.(i don't blame you AT ALL for comparing them but im trying really hard to make them different) see in SCN11B Bill is reallyyyyy super bitchy and hes REALLY uptight and non violent and un-emotional. Myyyyy Bill is supposed to not care enough about anything that he isntttt MAD at everything like her character, he just doesn't care, my Bill is very lenient, like ok say in SCN11B if Tom had a poster of a playmate on his wall bill would've ripped it down right on the spot, but my Bill would've just ignored it and thought wtf? Maybe the next chapter will help because of what i explain in it....maybeee. haha.
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rnok so bill does go EVERYWHEREEEEEE alone. he doesn't go to parties, no concerts, yea RARELY movies, he'll only go if he legitimately has NOTHING AT ALLLLLL to do or if its one of his favorite movies.
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rnalso in SCN11B Bills life sucked, well my Bills life is supposed to be very charming. not counting the insane depressed aunt who barely notices anything ever. See Bill has a lot of money, big house, all the books or cds he could ever want, a awesome job, tons of clothes, and talent. and Tom is this poor kid who has to basically fight for his life in his own home sometimes and has almost nothing except a few guitars and a ton of movies. When i was describing the house, everything that Bill saw, that's all there was, there were no papers lying around, nothing on the counters, no decorations, nothing. (sorry if you get this twice but this one is longer cause i accidentally hit submit)yet he is still really sweet and kind and caring. Tom is overly sensitive to other peoples emotions because he is a mamas boy, he always takes car of her, or feels obligated to, and he rarely noticed his own emotions because he has to be tough or else he wont be able to handle Lewil.
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and its ok to be over-enthusiastic XD at least someone likes my story :D yayyyy haha

OH WAIT, no you won't! Cause I don't know it!
-sigh.

There goes one more friend for you, Ms. FanGirlScream.
-shakes head, disappointedly.

Author's Response: hey!!!! ill just request you on myspace then haha XD so the girl in the gazerock shirt is me XD YEA OMGGG I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE the triplets!!!! they were actually the reason i started watching the show because in the commercials they looked soooo hot. i have to google them again now XD grrrrrrrrrrrrr im so pissed cause i have to finish writing chapter 7 tonight and im like not "feeling it" you know? like im not in the mood to write but i forgot to finish it until now DXXXXX ahhhhhhhhh. i have such writers block haha that hasn't happened to me since chapter one XD