Date: 08/20/09 03:06 am Title: Chapter 2
is that tomi's house?! poor billa...i love how tomi just sees right through him, kinda...
Author's Response: haha yea thats toms house =] im surprised that you picked that up ahha you're the only one who did =]rn
Date: 08/20/09 02:56 am Title: Chapter 1
ha! i knew tomi would get to billa!
Author's Response: yes :D
Date: 08/11/09 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 17
Who is Vincent?
Is there gonna be a sequel?
Author's Response: grrrrrrrrrrrr in the 9th (or some chapter around there) i said Vincent was the guy who killed bills family DX no one remembers though!!!! *fail* my fault -_-. and i can't make a sequel cause it will be a "happily ever after" end. There is only one more chapter but i am planning on it being full of funny and silly moments and some more sexual stuff (even though im bad at writing that so ts just like not in detail) and yeaaaa just a relief chapter. it'll be up soon though. I wrote half of it, but i want it to be REALLY long and i have major writers block right now. I am beginning a new story after this though. Ill announce the name of it at the end of last chapter. thanks for the review. =]
Date: 08/11/09 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 17
Okay - this may sound a little messed up - but I can't seem to remember who Vincent is? Was he mentioned before in this story?
I am sorry if I seem a little stupid - but I just can't seem to remember Vincent at all..
Author's Response: SHIT i hope i didn't fuck that up -_- (sorry for the language) but Vincent is the person who Bills mom was having an affair with. omg if i didn't mention his name then i will be so pissed off!!!!! ahhhhhhh!!!! crap hahaha. thanks for letting me know, ill go check now
Date: 08/11/09 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 16
i love this story sooooo much! it is my favorite story that im reading:) please update soon!
Author's Response: yayyyyyyyyyyyyyy omg that made my day =] thank you so much :D yea i will have the next chapter up REALLY soon, thanks for the review!
Date: 08/11/09 09:46 am Title: Chapter 16
scary... of all the places, he had to hide in there. it's great, the chapter is on allready:).
oh, and back to the dreads-thing: there are different ways of making and maintaining them, but no matter, what, you have to cut them off in the end. they just get tighter in time, so you might only be able to comp them out a fews days after the making, at most. normally, you can let them grow out a few centimeters and then comb out a few more centimeters before cutting off the rest (i do have dreads myself, so i know;)). tom probably has extensions, i'd say. okay, to much talking about such a small thing:).
i'm looking forward to your next chapter:).
Author's Response: yea i don't have dreads so i wouldn't know XD haha. but yea back to the story, haha i know, the bad guy is always in the closet XD next chapter will be up soon!rn
Date: 08/11/09 01:51 am Title: Chapter 16
How could you stop this now???
Who did that,Did his aunt hang herself?
I need a new chapter NOW :)
Author's Response: hahaha yea im sorry that i ended it there but i REALLY wanted a good cliff hanger in the story at least once, and my past attempts failed so this was a good opportunity i HAD to take haha. and i can't tell you who it is because there are more and more and moreee plot twists and just plain epic stuff. Can you say fight scene? but NOT like the past ones ive done, this one will be a different style =] thanks for teh review! new chapter will be up REALLYYYYYY soon.
Date: 08/11/09 01:04 am Title: Chapter 16
Wonderful chapter. I really enjoyed it. The suspense and action was amazing and well thought out.
Author's Response: yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy :D thank you so much! im glad you liked it =]
Date: 08/10/09 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 13
great story:). i imagined, bill would have realized, how great it is to have someone to love again and to accept tom in his life. his leaving really came as a big surprise to me.
just one thing, though. you can't comb dreads out, you have to cut them. so tom would have short hair after losing his dreads.
Author's Response: but he took his dreads out in real life and still has long hair. I THINKKKK that it depends on how your dreaded, if they are more twisted then they would be salvageable, but if they were COMPLETELY knotted then they would be screwed, but hey im no expert =] thanks for the review!! and im glad i could suprise you!! haha next chapter will really surprise you. Im actually posting it now, so it should be up in a few hours of DEFIANTLY by tomorrow night if it gets rejected for grammar errors and such.
Date: 08/10/09 01:29 am Title: Chapter 15
"Reunited and it feels so goooood"
lol
Ahh,yes!
It's about that he came around(:
Author's Response: yes it is =] i would have prolonged the agony, but im not that mean haha, but i AM mean enough to start trouble...you wont even see it coming. Next chapter will actually be up tonight (the 10th) or tomorrow. thanks for the review =]
Date: 08/10/09 12:15 am Title: Chapter 7
ok ok ok... I just had to agree. SCN11B was the most amazing thing EVER. Espically since my brother had CIPA. He didn't make it.
Author's Response: yea it is one of the best stories. and im sorry about your brother =[
Date: 08/05/09 02:26 am Title: Chapter 14
**rant begin**
Bill is so fucking stupid.
the whole chapter I was mentally kicking him in the fucking face.When the fuck is he going to stop tortuing himself
?
**rant over**
sorry,i had to get that out of my system(:
soo,he moved by himself because he wanted to be free to hate.
which actually means he's a prisoner of hate.
so what about the dream eleborations?
*didn't mean to be so harsh in this review,but damn Bill deserved it.and your welcome to being here since the start(:
Author's Response: that defiantly had to be one of the best reviews i have ever gotten XD hahahaha omg. Yea Bills an idiot, and you're right, his system is completely flawed because he IS a prisoner of hate now. Ok Dream elaborations! So the first dream, Ok Bills walking down the street to toms house which is just because he wants to go TOWARDS Tom not away from him. He then gets on the roof becuase of that time that Bill and Tom looked at the stars together on the roof (that will be elaborated better in the next chapter) Tom not openeing the window is the first sign to Bill that Tom doesn't want him near him anymore. Bill had felt like he had run for hours because you know how in dreams when your trying to run away or towards something it just seems hard right? Tom is yelling at Bill and its one of Bills biggest fears, that Tom hates him. You never want someone you love to hate you even if you're not around right? Tom is just saying EVERYTHING Bill doesn't want to hear. At the end of that dream once he can't see Tom anymore everything just falls in, everything is now nothing becuase Toms not there for him. Now he doesn't have anything. SOOOOO dream #2 is the other side of Bill thinking. the first was what hes afraid of, now this dream is what he WANTS. So Bill is walking again back TOWARDS Tom and just like in the last dream he KNOWS being away from Tom is stupid and pointless so hes going to try again. (hes trying again becuase he REALLY wants Tom) So when Bill gets into Tom house (note that the door was already unlocked and when he gets into the house there is nothing. Coming back to nothing is easy) So all the furniture is gone and its empty becuase Bill is beginning to feel now that he has truly lost Tom forever. Its also a "you don't know what you have till its gone" deal. Bills life was basically all at Toms house and now his life is gone. The only thing left was the painting Bill and Tom made and that makes Bill feel that Tom doesn't want him anymore, he did leave him behind. It became nighttime quickly because it shows Time passing and Bill is still where he is and he still has nothing. Then once hes finally giving up he sees Tom and he is absolutely thrilled that Tom still wants him too. Kissing Tom was basically a heaven for Bill and RIGHT before he is able to be happy again it all disappears because really, he doesn't have Tom anymore, he cant have Tom because HE is the one who left him behind. In the beginning of this chapter it is sunny becuase Bill is more confident and the first dream it was raining because he well feels like shit. So yea thats the two dreams for this chapter. The next one will have more dreams too.
Date: 08/02/09 10:40 am Title: Chapter 13
I hope that the next chapter will be Bill's pov, AND i want Bill too regret what he has done (after some weeks or months) and come back to Tom D: Probably not in the next chapter but after some chapters x] Okey my mind is going really crazy right now of what I want to happen next O.o
Author's Response: haha all suggestions and highly appreciated =] yea i have already written the next two chapters, but i will gladly go back and make changes if someone suggests something. As long as the main things i have happen and it ends the way it should then im willing to put anything in almost XD thanks for the review!!
Date: 08/02/09 06:06 am Title: Chapter 13
I got the feeling that they knew each other alot,I think you got that point across(:
The next chapter should be exactly like this except from Bill's pov.
That should be interesting since he doesn't have anyone except Tom,so what does he do?
I want to see what's Bill's way of comforting himself(:
Author's Response: yayyyy im glad you got the feeling they knew each other!!! :D yea in the next chapter (hint)Bill isn't really the smartest of people...he just doesn't understand ANYTHING. poor stupid bill =[ XD and thank you for keeping up with my story!! it means a lot that you have liked it since chapter one and have given me some help too=]
Date: 07/31/09 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 12
Omg Bill can't just leave Tom like that D: I swear if Bill are stupid enough to leave poor Tom then I'll get pissed at him -_- Great story btw :D I really like that you describe their feelings so well but maybe Bill can get a LITTLE more soft ? O.o Just a little bit? :D
Author's Response: Well he did leave poor Tom like that so yes be VERY pissed off DX. Yea im the one writing the story and even i am getting mad at story Bill hahaha XD and maybe Bill can be more soft, maybe...haha his personality, like how he would be EVEN IF his family didn't die, he is a very intense person with everything he does. His family dieing just made him insensitive to a lot of things. thanks for the review =]
Date: 07/30/09 01:29 am Title: Chapter 12
JGOBGIHNMINBKJ!:!?1"/
WTF Bill?
Is he going to go back to his old non-feeling self again before he goes back to Tom?
Author's Response: hahaha i loved your response XD ok let me try to answer your question in a way that wont give anything away...hmmm...ok so Bill this ENTIRE time has been trying to be all non-feeling, but without noticing it he was having feelings with/towards tom. That was becuase....ok think of it this way, say you're starving in a desert and before that happened you told yourself you're never going to eat mcdonalds ever again because you think its bad for you, then in the desert you find a mcdonalds. well you're going to eat some so you don't die, but you just think "food yay" not "ew fast food" and then you'll keep eating more. Eventually you'll realize "oh crap i ate all this fast food" and then want to leave and go back to not eating any....i hope that made any sense haha. But overall yea, Bill is going to go back to his non-feeling self, but who said hes going to go back to Tom? Maybe it'll be the other way around, maybe he won't ever see him again, maybe he'll see him year later, maybe they will accidentally find each other randomly and Tom will punch bill? WHO KNOWS haha, thanks for the review =]
Date: 07/28/09 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 12
Bill's an idiot. Seriously. "'Id rather be free and hate than a slave of love" what kind of bullshit is that? *screams in frustration* But anyways, it was a good chapter, minus Bill's idiocy.
Author's Response: lmaoooooo (btw i heard that line on a tv show or something...i have no idea) haha but yea he is an idiot, but he REALLYYYYYYY REALLYYYYYYYYYYY cares about tom and hes the ONLY person he has so its like ok, if one friend moves but you have 5 other good ones to make u less sad, well he KNOWS that if he looses tom then hes REALLY alone. he would rather give up tom himself instead of having him being ripped away and then never hear about him again that way he can trick himself into thinking in the future like YEARSSSS into the future he'll be able to think "oh tom is probably happy with grandchildren at the park now" when in reality tom could be dead. hes just trying to protect himself. well thats what he WANTS, but probably now what will happen muahaha cause im evil and like making my story characters suffer apparently? haha thanks for the review =]
Date: 07/28/09 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 12
:) & :(
Author's Response: yea i know the ending is sad =[ but make sure you keep reading! April 5th 2002 is finally expanding past the school and tom and bills houses! woooo!
Date: 07/24/09 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 11
nice nice (:
Author's Response: thanks =] im happy to know someoneeee likes it. it has gotten a bunch of reads but NO reviews so im like oh crap they didn't like this...scheisse... lmao thanks for the review =]
Date: 07/20/09 09:53 am Title: Chapter 1
lmao, sounds fun!
XD
uhm, so when I was in Rome, I bought the Schrei CD! THE GERMAN ONE! THE REAL THING.
:DD
Author's Response: yayyyyyy haha