Date: 06/08/10 12:51 am Title: Chapter 10
oh my mom would sooo kill me if i came home with a tattoo that my friend had done. lol "This was going to be a good night" made me think of I've got a feeling. d:D
Date: 06/08/10 12:24 am Title: Chapter 9
soooo tommi is realizing ever so slowly the feelings he holds towards bill. d:D
Date: 06/08/10 12:06 am Title: Chapter 8
so i'm guessing that bill's family died in a fire? since water saved his life that is an obvious conclusion. "physco pet name from hell" i will have to remember that for when school starts back up. dXD
Date: 06/07/10 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 7
that is just so sad!!! i hate it when i cry in my sleep, and for billa to have cried for so long i don't even really wanna know what he was dreaming about. d:( LOOOOVE IT
Date: 06/07/10 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 6
theyare awesome headphones! i used to have a pair until my cat broke them. I guess Bill just doesn't notice that he is actually beginning to care for tom. ^_^ even just as friends. d:D
Date: 06/07/10 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 5
so bill is opening up to tom of all people. lol.
Date: 06/07/10 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
it would be boring. ^_^ thank god its not. d:D
Date: 06/07/10 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
oh no! tomi!!!! it saddens me that this story was never featured. it deserves soooo much more praise than it has gotten. ^_^
Date: 06/07/10 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
you can tell just by how he acts and what he sys that bill haad something tragic happen to him, especially his reaction to them wanting to meet Tangia. I looooove this ^_^
Date: 06/07/10 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
okay, so i know i already read this. I decided to go back through all of my favorites because it has been sooooo long since i read most of them. I can already see why i loved this. ^_^
Date: 05/15/10 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 18
awsomeawsomeawsomeawsome
Date: 04/03/10 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 18
lol this story is the best!!! i laugh my ass off of how Tom asked Bill if they were boyfriends and his dad he certainly is the coolest dad!!! now i want some popcorns xD
P.S. i LOVE UR STORY!!!!!
Date: 04/03/10 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 17
wow i didnīt expect that at all..lewis helping tom? that was such a twist i like it though a lot his big brother
Date: 04/03/10 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 10
oh oh.. i love u girl! oh and did i mention iīm just downloading all the songs u have put on the story lol yah i gess i just got really caught up on the story and i trust in ur taste xD
Date: 02/04/10 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 18
I will try to make you happy.. :) THIS WAS THE BEST FUCKING STORY, EVAAAAAAR! XD 2 bad you didn't write the sex scean though :( xD
Date: 11/26/09 08:19 am Title: Chapter 18
A very lovely story from start to finish. The angst was sublime :)
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Maria
Date: 10/21/09 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
what are the names of the songs you used?
Date: 10/01/09 06:12 am Title: Chapter 18
ok, so i have wanted to comment while reading this whole story, but i really saw no point considering most of your requests for reviews were to help with the completion of the story, and as i've read it now it's obviously been finished for a while, lol.
ANYWAY...First off, i want to say that this was deffinately an amazing story, and you seem to have very little confidance in the amount of talent you really have. honest, i've read a lot of stories on here and it was just great.
also, i think your charachter development was done really well, because you made everyone feel really realistic and relatable, and as the story porgressed i could really feel for the charachters, and understood how they grew and changed with each chapter.
it's very difficult to write drama and not make things overyly dramatic to the point of rediculous, and i thinnk you pulled it off briliantly.
i loved the ending, it tied everything up nicely with a few cute twists here ant there, and it just seemed really hopeful, and acurate to the charachters you've built.
i dont know how long this has been posted, or if you will ever even see this comment, but i really really enjoyed reading it, and i hope you keep writing.
peace out girl scout, and have a nice live :]
Date: 09/30/09 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love how Bill thinks.
Tom is making me curious.
And i just have to say, what kind of rediculousness is having to change into swim clothes just to not swim?
I really am likeing this story.
Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Date: 09/30/09 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 3
i really like this story so far.
um...it's Yin and Yang actually...not Ying.
and i'm curious, these songs you're using, are they real, or did you write them? i've never heard of any of them so far, and they're so pretty.
just curious.
and this is a really great story, i cant wait to read more :]