Date: 06/10/09 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hmmm....either Bill was abused as a child or he caused them himself, and I'm curious to see who or what the swoosher was....ok so "swoosher" isn't a word, but damn it, it is now! Anyway good chapter.
Author's Response: haha thank you for the review =] (sorry if i already responded to this before but Ive been having issues with my computer lately.) anyway thanks also for your guess. i cant wait to reveal what happened!
Date: 06/09/09 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 3
plz update sooon thx soso much=]
Author's Response: ill have the next update by next Wednesday or Tuesday night =] I'm writing the next chapter right now and will work on it hopefully it'll be done by then, so it'll end up being a bit longer than this chapter =]rnrnthanks for the review!!
Date: 06/09/09 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh noo! Tom's hurt v.v
About Bill's scars.. I'm not sure really where they came from o.o. The obvious answer was that he did them to himself, then again, you could throw a curve ball at me lol. The ones on his back, maybe from surgery? Idk. I'm dumb lol.
Another good chapter =]. I like how you're taking things slow. ^^
Author's Response: thank you soooo much for the review!! =] i wish i could tell you whether you were right about how he got the scars or not but i cant yet DX, i musttt restrain myself from ruining the story!! thanks again for reading and reviewing :D
Date: 06/03/09 12:22 am Title: Chapter 2
Huh, I like it, I like it a lot, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: thankkkk youu!!!! =]
Date: 06/02/09 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
I liked this chapter, I am very interested in how Tom and Bill's relationship turns out, especially since Tom seems to be so caring even though he's only known Bill for a day. You did a really good job in making their personalities seem real.
I don't know what else to say other than I really like where this is going =]. Can't wait until next Wednesday ^^
Author's Response: thank you for the review!! :D im glad you noticed how sweet tom is and in the next chapter you'll find out a little bit more why, but in the 4th or 5th it'll become reallyyyy obvious. thanks again for reading!!rnrn
Date: 05/27/09 02:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Hmmm... UPDATE SOON1 I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
Author's Response: i will update soon =] chapter 2 will DEFIANTLY be up by next Wednesday. It takes me so long because im trying to give each and every character a really defined personality and make them seem really realistic. thank you for reading my first chapter btw! =]
Date: 05/26/09 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really, really like this story so far. Though not much has happened yet, it seems promising with your descriptions, especially of Bill. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter =].
much love ^_^
Author's Response: thank you SOOOO much for the review! i feel REALLY motivated to continue writing the rest of the chapters now =] i think the next chapter should be up in about a week =]