Date: 06/30/09 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
Haha, like Megan Fox. *-* -drools. Oh man. She's my dream girl. -dreamy sigh. :D
Awhh, yeah like.. I don't think every guy can pull off make up as well as Bill or Visual Kei bands. :3
OMG! Do you watch Daisy of Love!? :O
Author's Response: yea megan fox is soooo hot. haha XD guess what!!! haha i just made a gazerock shirt XD it looks just like the bands shirt's but not as amazing and the sleeves are different. XD once i find the shirt that has black sleeves i am going to make another one to look exactly the same. Im wearing it in my default myspace pic XD yea omg i love that show haha XD i havent been able to see the most recent episode, the last one i saw was the one where she was picking between chichi and sinister but i had to turn it off before i could see who she picked to go home DX but i try to watch it whenever i can =]
Date: 06/30/09 01:33 am Title: Chapter 6
Haha, awh me too! I love guys who look like girls. Its adorable. Which is why I thought Michael Jackson was so attractive. Not that he was really adrogynous, but he was pretty feminine. I mean, long hair, sculpted eyebrows, tight jeans. Ya know, its attractive! ;D But honestly, I'm more into girls. Girls that look like guys. Or Asian girls. Lulz. XD I'm bi, what can I say? XD
And yeah, you should! :D
Author's Response: thats cool =] yea even though im straight i dont really hesitate to go "wow shes hot" or "wow shes pretty", i do that a lot so my friend whos a transgender says i have the soul of a gay man hahahha. once in gym a bunch of former students were visiting and this girl came in but she looked almost 100% like a guy (and i was almost the only one that noticed she was a girl) and i turned to my friend and said "omg id so go gay for her shes soooo good looking omg" and they just stared at me like okayyyyyy... hahaha XD see im kinda picky about my androgynous guys, like just smearing on eyeliner is actually a turn off. i only think makeup is hot when they do it like ruki or bill. like PERFECCTLYYYY otherwise it looks lazy to me. and i like guys with nice nails so idc if their painted or fake like Bills haha XD
Date: 06/29/09 01:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Lol, Japanese to English is pretty hard. Haha, Kai's so adorable!! Lol, awhh.
Dirty Diana is one of Michael's song. I was watching the video. :3
Author's Response: yeaaaaaaa they all are! haha. yea last night i was talking to my friend (who is a straight guy) and we were saying what kind of guys we like and im like "i like androgynous boys. especially like aoi. yum." and hes like "i like the bigger kinda guys with beards" lmaooo. and he was calling aoi pretty and stuff XDDDD it was awesome. rnrnohhh ok i have to go watch that sometime now haha =]
Date: 06/28/09 04:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh man, I know who the GazettE. Ruki is so amazingly gorgeous! *-* ahh, what song* is it? :3
And yeah, I'm watching Dirty Diana as I type. :D
Author's Response: haha i cant tell you what song im using yet!!!!!!! but i got one haha. it was like the 8th song i got translated -_- hahaha. yea omg ruki is gorgeous.yea im practically in love with reita and kai hahaha. Kai is deffinatly one of my favorite drummers because even though he's playing these like hardcore songs hes still smiling and all happy looking its awesomeeeee. and reita is just pure amazingness hahaha XDrnrndirty diana? ive never heard of that. what is it????
Date: 06/27/09 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
ARE YOU TRYING TO IMPLY SOMETHING ABOUT THE LITTLE GIRL? HM? XD
Yeah, yeah I get what you're saying. Haha, don't worry! I think you're doing a pretty good job at making him seem impassive. (:
Oh man, EPIC MOMENT!? Can't wait. B)
And sorry I didn't reply sooner. I've been pretty bummed about Michael Jackon's passing away. He was one of my idols, and I was going to London to try to make one of his concerts and then BOOM! He just dies. )': *cough, sorry. Ranted a bit there. o_o
Author's Response: no don't worry i was upset my his death too =[ he was really talented and all that jazz. rnrnHahaha im not implying anythinggggggg haha you'll just have to wait and read to find out what i DIDN'T imply XD hahaha. Yea im in a rut. i reallyyyyyy wanna put a song by The Gazette in here just because i loveeeee their music, but problem is.....they sing in Japanese...so i don't know what they're saying XD haha they're like j-rock/j-pop/rock/pop or something haha idk. i know that there is one song about wanting to be famous (not gonna work) one about incest (not gonna work) and i know a lot more songs but i haven't translated them haha. i rock at lifeeee (sorry now im rambling! ahhhh)
Date: 06/25/09 02:23 am Title: Chapter 6
Oh man! Tom got Bill's number!? IMPROVEMENTS! :D Lol.
Ahh. So yeah, 'He would give his entire left arm to be able to talk to his sibling again.' She was totally his sister, the little girl. I'z smart. B) Heh.
Ojeez, Oh Man. Spending the night!? IMPROVEMENTS! Back rubbing?! IMPROVEMENTS! Not getting mad at the back rubbing!? IMPROVEMENTS, IMPROVEMENTS, IMPROVEMENTS!! :D
I see a reletionship building.
;D
Author's Response: hahahhahah XD MAYBE YOU'RE WRONG THOUGHHHHHH haha don't get your hopes up that shes his sister XD just sayinnnnnnnnn hahah yea there should have been a big argument scene where Bill and Toms mom politelyyyyy fight about why he should and why he shouldn't stay, but i was too lazy to write it hahaha. oh well. Yea im trying to write Bill to be this likeeeeee....really mentally tough, closed off, not caring, not thinking, slightly bitchy, just thereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee kind of guy. you know? but im kinda failing.... haha he keeps seeming nicer than he is!!! like Bills not supposed to be mean hes just supposed to not care enough to hurt anyone's feelings and not care enough to be nice to anyone. He doesn't care so that's why he doesn't think about anything. haha JUST WAITTTT till one of the MUCH later chapters, omg it'll be such an OMG EPICCCC moment XD i already found the BESTTTTTT FRIKKEN SONG EVERRR for it, since you know i like to capture everyone's personalities (more or less) in a song.
Date: 06/24/09 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 6
i have skull candies x3
I liked this chapter: Bill's kinda/sorta letting Tom in =]!
Author's Response: yea me too i have the pink ear buds and the bigggg blue ones. =] i loveeee them. Yea Bills beginning to let Tom in, not because he trust him, not because he likes him, but because Tom just seems to not bother him. Its like not liking dogs, but your mom buys a tiny one that doesnt bark and you never have to take care of it. you know what im trying to say??? haha. Yea there's a scene in the next chapter that i am excited to write, its sorta insignificant but also awesome haha. in a sad-ish cute-ish way. thanks for the review =]
Date: 06/24/09 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 6
“Yea getting slaughtered while wearing a bunny costume doesn’t sound too great.” Bill laughed. Like for real laughed even though it was for only a second. Toms face lighted up. He liked seeing Bill happy and this was the first time he had seen Bill looking happy in well ever. Suddenly Bills face turned back to its usual blank stare. “So where is everyone else?”
^My happy part? xD
Author's Response: haha yea XD if you've ever seen House of 1000 Corpses then you'll know what i mean by REALLYYYYYY f*ed up movie haha XD but i do not recommend watching it if you are disturbed by blood and gore or really really crude language. The bunny part is funny though. Theyre jsut chasing the one girl through a feild while shes wearing a pink bunny suite and ears XD and tehn they stab her to death....not so funny hahahaha. thanks for the review =]
Date: 06/24/09 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 6
Hmmm....its getting better, slowly finding out more about Bill, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: thank you for the review =]
Date: 06/24/09 01:01 am Title: Chapter 5
*siiiiighh, I guess I'll just have to wait until you post the flashback/dream chapter. WHICH BY THE BY! I think that really good idea. :D
OHMEINGOTT, yesss. I would've cried and stopped reading the rest of the story. Truth be told. I can't handle sad stories. -___-; I'm weak hearted. LMAO. Can't read sad shit for.. shit! Hahh. And I'm sure I'm not the only one.. I hope? *cough.
ANYWAYS. Its your story. (: You should post it up whenever you feel like it. If you want to post it up now, then do it! *cough*I want you to*cough*.
Just sayin' XD
Author's Response: haha yea most of the time when i see a major character death i don't read that story cause i cant handle it. they need a medium character button hahaa. Yea i think i mightttttttttttttttttt post it today or tomorrow. i have a lot of practices today for field hokey though so i might be too tired.....OH WAIT I HAVE AN IDEA!!! see chapter 5 i posted on teh last day of school for me, and today is when it shoulddd have been posted so chapter 5 was a end of school year gift! so this one will be the official chapter haha i feel much better about posting it today now XD if that made any sense.
Date: 06/24/09 12:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Alright, alright. I'll just wait untiI you come up with the flashback/dream chapter. *siiiigh. XD Which by the by! I think that's a really good idea! :D. We'd finally get to see what happened to Bill to make him so.. Careless? I'm not sure what word to use, but you get what I'm sayin' yeah?
THANK GOTT! I would've cried if either of them died. But knowing it isn't one of them, I'm good. B) And yes, you have in fact saved a couple of lives. I'm ute I wasn't the only person spazzing over the character deaths.. O_O ..hopefully.. *cough.
Anyways! If you finished it, and if you want to post it a day early, or hours XD. Then you should! It's your story after all. (:
*cough*I want you to, but hey that's just me. XD*cough*
Author's Response: haha i posted it =]
Date: 06/23/09 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
Let me guess, the little girl was Bill's younger sister? Was his family in an accident and they died and Bill survived? o_o *Cough. So yeah, can't wait to read Bill as a DJ. ;D lol. This chapter is great! Bill's finally noticing Tom! :D But its angering me how he's not looking into it. >:O Its all good, though. All in good time, yeah?
HEY!?! There's a major character death warning!? May i ask if Bill is going to die!? Or will it be Tom!? BOTH!? NEINNNN~ D:
I'll die if they die.
T~T
Author's Response: haha your review made me smile XD Ok i can't confirm anything about who the little girl was yet. you might be right but you might be wrong. But i guess you could say his family of how ever many people did get in an "accident". I think im going to dedicate an entire chapter to a flashback maybe. MAYBEEEE. or maybe one of Bills dreams, that might work too.
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rnAnd idk if im ruining anything by saying this but it might save a few readers if they see this, but Bill and Tom do NOT die. I would cry if i ever had them die in the story haha there was only major or minor character death but no medium important character death sooooo yea XD
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rnSo i just finished writing the 6th chapter, yea i know i finished a chapter the day before this one was supposed to go up -_-, im brilliant *sarcasm*, but i really want to post it. so should i do it now or wait till next Wednesday?
Date: 06/23/09 02:53 am Title: Chapter 5
umm,I want to see Bill really happy just for on moment,since he doesn't seem to have many happy moments...
This is a really good story xD
oh and yeah,,I know you said Bill wasn't anorexic but what caused him not to eat?
Author's Response: thank you for the review =] and yea i will make sure that Bill is really happy like you want some time in the story =] rnrnok so yea about why bill doesn't like eating. First, he is just naturally skinny, like not ribs and bone skinny, but like 7% body fat kind. (that would be if he ate normally) So he doesn't like to eat because, you know when you are sad you just want to eat? or when your sad you don't feel like eating at all? Well Bill is constantly burdened, at least subconsciously, about his past and it makes him really sad and he just doesn't have the will power to do anything like eat or buy a dog to play with (Bill is supposed to love animals but idk if i will get to add that anywhere in the story though)or do anything really except sit and draw or sit and listen to music. Plus he thinks somethings (that i cant tell you yet, its gonna be a surprise even though Ive been hinting at it a lot)are just his fault, sorta like "If they don't eat then i wont either" but that's just in his subconscious as well. If you haven't noticed, Bill sort of refuses to think about anything, ever haha
Date: 06/19/09 01:43 am Title: Chapter 1
nah, its no problem. (: that's what us reviewers, and readers are here for! to help you out and be honest with you. :D
I think its a good idea, yeah. Because like you said, it shows how they're feeling, without having to write a long paragraph and take up unnecessary space.
and it gives them character. (:
hope I helped! :D
Author's Response: yea you helped =] thanks a lottttt haha :D yea i wrote the entire 5th chapter last night, its the longest one yet i think haha
Date: 06/17/09 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
haha, your welcome.
anddd my mind is pretty warped too.
:D
as long as one of those are in there, i'll be even happier than i already am reading your story.
:)
Author's Response: haha =] im REALLYYYYYY glad that you like my story!!! honestly...its my first time writing a story, like EVER. I mean I've written before but not like chapters or a long story you know? So im trying realllllyyyyy hard haha.rnrnYea probably all of your ideas will be added somehow =] and can I ask your opinion on something? You know how almost every chapter I have a few songs added in that the characters are listing too, do you think thats a good idea? I mean its NOT just random songs playing, its reflecting their emotions deep down. I mean sometimes the lyrics say EXACTLY what they feel and sometimes (like in Toms case when he was cleaning) it reflects how he doesn't hold things against people, how he is optimistic, like his life does kinda suck but he still listens to this crazy upbeat song not angry songs you know?rnhaha hope i didn't confuse you! sorry if i did, i began to ramble by accident XD
Date: 06/17/09 05:22 am Title: Chapter 4
I think Bill should be in a band.
XD
hah,
and like photography.
I can see Bill holding a polaroid camera.
-dreamy sigh.
or he should be a DJ.
BILL + DJ SKILLZ = MAD BEATZ, YO.
Author's Response: haha OK ill figure out how to put those in there XD but i warn you, my mind is kinda like warped, so it'll be added in a strangeeee way, but it'll all make sense =] thanks for the review!!!
Date: 06/16/09 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
plzplzplzplz update sooon..i need more billa and tomi though=]thx=]
Author's Response: the next chapter will DEFIANTLY be up by next Wednesday (not tomorrow but the Wednesday after) but it might be up on Tuesday. =] thanks for the review!!
Date: 06/16/09 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
Interesting....really interesting, and honestly I can see Tom listening to that sort of music, can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response: haha yayyyyy, i was afraid that people would yell at me or something or stop reading the story because of that song bit. Hint: music plays a HUGEEE role in this story, like Bill said in the story, its scary how music can define his day almost PERFECTLY. thanks for teh review!!!
Date: 06/16/09 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh!!!! I don't have any ideas for you >__< I'm sorry! lol.
And I still don't know how Sonya and Bill are related.. is that dumb? Have you mentioned it somewhere and I missed it? Older sister? Mom?
I'm sorry this review won't really help you! sorry sorry >_
Author's Response: oh i thought i mentioned how they were related XD haha sorry. Sonya is Bills aunt. yea it wasn't supposed to be a secret or anything, i mean the details of his family are important, like i planned out every detail really specifically before i started writing, like Bills parents hair and eye colors and their personalities, Toms families looks and personalities, everyone's relation to another. haha im REALLYYYY trying to make it seem realistic. ill go check to see if i really did put it in or if i just imagined putting it in haha XD thank you for the review!!
Date: 06/11/09 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
Cant wait for the next part :]
Author's Response: thank you for the review!! yea sorry this chapter was pretty short, the next one is a lot longer and im only about 2/3s done writing it XD