Date: 05/26/09 10:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, hahaha, Tom, Tom, you sex gott. I loved this--so cute and funny and hot. :D
Author's Response: Oh it makes me so happy you liked it! And Tom was having a rough time image-wise when I wrote this, so I wrote him without a lot of his insecurities and how I think he would kind of like to be seen in RL (aka sex gott lol). It was sort of my way of giving him a long-distance, non-stalkerish hug. Thank you so much!
Date: 05/26/09 09:04 am Title: Chapter 1
LOL!
As a lesbian myself I feel obliged to review this.
It was funny, it was hot and damn i need visual aid when it comes to this girl, cause you described her to be too hot to be true.
I thank God finally someone got the whole idea that no matter what man you meet they just can't 'turn' you straight again.
I will recommend this to everybody i know and I'll be voting for you like crazy.
It's a really good story and a really good start at Het! By far some of the best things i've read in this genre. Kudos
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That you found Jane to be hot is a huge compliment, because I really tried to design a character who I felt deserved to be fucked by Tom (I have really high standards for him lol). And her character actually is based off someone I know in RL, as is her fictional girlfriend Olivia. I'm also glad you mentioned how people just don't suddenly switch their sexual preferences, b/c that was important for me to show. In my fictional world of this story, Olivia and Jane do get back together after this scene and Tom just finally has a friend that he can be normal around (b/c I think he's lonely in RL). Oh dear lord, longest and most rambly review response ever, so basically just thank you very much and I'm so glad you liked it :)
Date: 05/26/09 05:30 am Title: Chapter 1
First Het I've ever read, and it's not all that bad when amazingly hilarious at the same time. I felt like I was reading an episode of 'Gilmore Girls' that wasn't for a family channel and had completely different characteres.:)
I think Jane sounds pretty hot, someone please give me her number?.:).
Author's Response: loool :) It makes me so happy that you like Jane b/c I tend to dislike all OFCs and was really unsure of my ability to write one that people didn't want to strangle. Thank you!
Date: 05/26/09 05:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Ok, wow. I really enjoyed this - funny and hot. Great dynamic between Tom and Jane, and Jane was just a pretty awesome character. I thought the required translation for words like 'blowjob' was a really nice touch, and the on going banter throughout was just great. Really enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to make an OFC who complimented the playful nature of Tom's personality that I'm in love with, and it makes me so happy that you liked the dynamic between them :)
Date: 05/26/09 04:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Well, DAMN, best het I've ever read! Amaaaazing. Really cute, hot, and funny.
Author's Response: looool thank you so much but that's absolutely not true (I've read Game of Chance and the way you managed to capture both the bravado and the shyness that I love about Tom is unbelievable). But of course, your compliments mean a lot and I'm grinning like a lunatic.