Date: 06/15/09 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
She laughed again, shaking her head. “It’s nothing personal – you’re just not my type.”
“What’s your type, then?”
“Women.”
hahaha ive used that excuse before
great story :3
Author's Response: Lol so have I :) So glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 06/14/09 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
I usually hate het, I'm a distinctly slash girl. But I like this. I like that Tom didn't turn her totally straight, because I do believe that sexuality is sexuality. I like that even though it's supposed to be PWP, it has a tiny bit of a plot. It's well-written, amusing...
Author's Response: LOL as a non-het reader myself, I completely understand your aversion to het :). I'm glad that you found it amusing in spite of the het, and I agree 100% about the permanence of one's sexual orientation. Thank you very much!
Date: 06/14/09 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
I almost never read het, but I LOVED this. Very well written and I could not stop laughing.
Author's Response: That makes me so happy to hear :) This was a unique experiment for me not only b/c of the het, but because I generally don't write humor so it means a lot that you found it funny. Thank you!
Date: 06/14/09 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I laughed so much! Genious story, really amazing! Congrats with the first place in the flip flop challenge, you deserved it :)!
Author's Response: Thank you so much - I'm really happy that you liked it and that it made you laugh!
Date: 06/14/09 11:53 am Title: Chapter 1
I usually don't read het. This was pretty sexy, though. :D
Author's Response: Glad you thought so!
Date: 06/14/09 09:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Gash! You are the same author that's writing that Billshido-story I don't remember the name of!
I relly loved this as well as the one I mentioned. It's kind of funny, cause I wrote about something not too different from this some weeks back, before I read this. Really good.
Author's Response: Awww, it makes me so happy to hear that you liked both this and Playing by the Rules. Thank you!
Date: 06/14/09 02:48 am Title: Chapter 1
It was incredibly entertaining. I'm saying this because I haven't read this for the het, although that was HOT too. I loved your Tom in this, his one-track mind, and I love the idea that he may have made a real friend. All in all, excellent and deserved to win the contest. Congrats!!!
Author's Response: I should tell you that I pretty much worship everything you write, so the giddiness I felt after reading your review was probably unhealthy lol. Seriously though, it means so much that you liked my Tom and understood him in the way I meant to portray him. He (the real Tom) was going through a really rough time image-wise when I wrote this, and I just ached for how lonely he seemed. Rather than trying to write het (which is nearly impossible for me), I just tried to create a fictional friend for him that could make him happy. Naturally, the ideal friend for Tom would also put out, so the drama-less sex just kind of melded into the story. Thank you so much for your review and for your compliments - they made my day :)
Date: 06/12/09 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
*speechless* x
Author's Response: Hopefully that's a good thing :)
Date: 06/11/09 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
This
is
BEAUTIFUL!
This is your first het story? I am shock, you write like you write het all the time! Not even a author that writes all the time can compare to you, how do you do it! I gotta favorite this, who wouldn't? After reading this, I need to give you credit for making an enjoyable story to read
-tear tear-, I am so proud of ur first het, what else I can say?
oh, how about; MARRY ME! to blunt? fine T~T
Author's Response: loool your review made me smile so much - thank you! It makes me so happy that you liked it and that you found it entertaining...it was quite a challenge to write (I just don't think in het lol). But once I got into the mindset I really enjoyed writing it, and I am definitely proud of my first het as well lol :) Thank you for your kind words!
Date: 06/11/09 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was a definite win :)
Author's Response: Thank you =)
Date: 06/08/09 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't read a lot of het, but this is definitely worth a second or third read. Awesome. =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
Date: 06/05/09 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Amazing! I very, very rarely ever read Het, but if you decide to write more, I'll definitely give them a look.
I loved all of the teasing and playful dialogue. The fact that Jane was a confident woman and not some teeny girl with so many problems and woes and blah blah was a true breath of fresh air. I just simply adore this. The story, the characters, everything is fantastic. Excellent job, and I wish you all the luck in the challenge! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really tried to make Jane a strong, likable character and it makes me really happy that you liked her characterization. So glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 06/05/09 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
...You two are notorious for confusing poor, helpless straight men... - so its a VERY good thing that most of us are of the female gender then =P
...You are going to have straight sex whether you like it or not... - that got me laughing so hard i had to stop reading this for like, 3minutes!
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*kinda lot of anatomical terms here; sternum, clavicle, scapula.. not that i'm complaining, but it seems a lil formal? well thats probably just me
...he received a hundred Euro note and a Michael Bolton CD with his ham and cheese omelet... - hah! they were real! go georg!!! ^__^
Author's Response: Glad you found it funny :) And jeez, you're right, I really drew from my 9th grade anatomy class when I wrote this lol. Thanks for pointing that out!
Date: 06/02/09 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
“What?” Georg asked, confused. He glanced over at the girl, who had reverted to sunbathing, and then back at Tom. “She doesn’t speak German, does she?”
“Yup,” Tom nodded - *cracks up* I was afraid so!!!
Roger, as it turned out, was in charge of something to do with sound quality in the arenas, and the girl, who was called Jane, had indeed been his translator since New York. – OMG I hurt for them they are so stupid!!! They’ve gotten too comfortable being the only ones who speak German *cracks up*
He had somewhat gotten over his embarrassment from the afternoon before, and after condemning all non-famous people who felt the need to wear identity-obscuring sunglasses that covered half their faces and caused innocent people to make fools of themselves, he decided that he would talk to her again. Apologize, maybe. Compliment her on her German. Ask her if she wanted to fuck. – oh good *snorts and shakes head* only a teen age boy!!!
“Everyone else in high school was learning Spanish, so I wanted to do something different,” she shrugged. “My rebellious streak is pretty much out of control.” - *sigh* a decent OFC *the tight feeling is released from her chest and she goes back to reading*
“It’s nothing personal – you’re just not my type.”
“What’s your type, then?”
“Women.” - *cracks up* I’m not sure if she’s lying or telling the truth either way really funny!
“They’re fake, right?”
Jane laughed, shaking her head, “We’re not that good of friends yet, Tom.” – ha ha ha ha
“Can we please just fuck.” – lol the desperation I can hear in his voice lol!!!!
Jane sighed. “Fine,” she said. “Just a… Shit, I don’t know even know the word for it…what’s it called when I suck on your dick.”
“Really?” Tom asked, looking over at her.
“No!” Jane laughed, “I was kidding. - *cracks up* OMG that’s so funny!!!!
Jane grinned. “And I do say, Mr. Kaulitz. Are you hard?”
Tom groaned in annoyance, giving her a dirty look and a slight push on the shoulder. – oh god she’s so cruel!!!
Very nice first kiss!
“I just made out with guy, who happens to be an international teen heartthrob, while listening to Michael Bolton. I don’t know what part of that sentence is the most ridiculous.” - *snorts* all of it *cracks up*
“It doesn’t actually untie,” she grinned up at him, “Its sewn closed – the strings are just for decoration.” – lol I though it might be something funny like that lol!!!
“Jane, sex between a man and a woman is a perfectly natural, beautiful thing,” he grinned.
“It’s still weird.” – ha ha
“God, you fucking tease,” Tom groaned, lowering his head to kiss Jane in gratitude as he slid two of his fingers through her deliciously swollen folds. She was completely shaven and completely wet. “I don’t care how drunk you are,” he murmured into her mouth, spreading her moisture with his fingertips in a smooth, circular motion. “You want this so bad.” – ha ha and very nice details!!!
She was beginning to tilt her hips to try and direct his movements, which was understandable as he was purposely avoiding rubbing her clit or pushing his fingers inside her. She was going to have to beg for it. – evil boy!
“I guess as far as these go, yours isn’t bad,” she shrugged, removing her fingers. “Still doesn’t do it for me though, sorry.” – lol
“Just wait – it will,” Tom smirked – cocky much? ha ha
It was very funny. But it was all build up, not enough sex and just kind of ending like you weren’t sure what to do with it. I would have loved a little more to finish off the story.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you for your comprehensive review - I love hearing what parts stand out to people. And thank you as well for offering suggestions for improvement... I like knowing what I can fix the next time I write something, and now that you pointed it out, I can see how the ending seems a bit abrupt. Thank you very much!
Date: 06/01/09 10:55 am Title: Chapter 1
"“Do all lesbians complain this much during sex?” Tom smiled against her lips, lifting himself slightly off her as his hand smoothed down the tight skin of her stomach.
“We like to multitask,” Jane breathed, her eyes fluttering closed as Tom’s fingers traced the skin along the edge of her swimsuit bottoms. "
I loved that line, hahahaha. This was really good :)
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Date: 05/29/09 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol, The dialogue!! (^_^)
Author's Response: So happy you enjoyed it!
Date: 05/29/09 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
This one was fantastic! Totally funny and believable, and I just knew I had figured out who wrote it because it's so good, until I see that that person reviewed it....but that could be part of her master plan...:) It totally rocked. I mean for het, you know. ;) Loved it.
Author's Response: :) I'm grinning so huge right now - thank you!
Date: 05/29/09 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Your first het? Girl you're a natural!
I loved this story to bits. It was funny and hot. I loved your OFC.
Good luck with the challenge!
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much!
Date: 05/28/09 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
uhhh-MAZINGGG !!!!
seriously, for someone who never wrote het beforeee.
you def sounded like you were a pro at thiss
*HIGH FIVEEEE*
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 05/28/09 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
uhhh-MAZINGGG !!!!
seriously, for someone who never wrote het beforeee.
you def sounded like you were a pro at thiss
*HIGH FIVEEEE*
Author's Response: Thank you!