Date: 06/05/09 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm not sure you hit the nail on the head with this one, but it provided a few laughs. Bill commenting on the girl's apples, for example. lol Sometimes, for me, all it takes is one line to change my mind about a fic, and you did that. I still don't understand what exactly was happening, but I've written a few like that myself, so I'm not going to bash you for it.
You wrote a story that may be confusing and doesn't seem to have a real point, but honestly, it was better than some that DO have a plot. So, good job, and good luck!
Date: 06/04/09 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
...Sometimes they’re happy, sometimes they’re sad and sometimes their just rotten to the core, but today they’re happy... - poor bill must have thought he's losing it ^__^ but i wouldn't buy those apples, can't bear thinking of biting into those smiley faces =P
Date: 05/31/09 12:30 am Title: Chapter 1
This was so random and really funny. The humour was great and i'll probably be calling Georg a cabbage patch kid from now on haha. Great job! Good luck with the challenge! :D
Date: 05/29/09 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lmao. I laughed really hard after reading: "I was just really embarrassed that she caught me staring at her apples and God, were they nice." And well, I was still laughing as a read the rest of the story. I had a weird feeling that Bill might have been on something, but at the same time, he could just be crazy:D Or the apples are magical. Well, either way, this story was super funny. I've never heard of sushi tacos before and they do kind of sound nasty. I think I would make it a pizza night also if someone was making sushi tacos for dinner! LOL. Good job and good luck with the challenge! :DD
Date: 05/29/09 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1
That was totally random. I really don't know wether I liked it or not... It seems to fit more under the crack than the humor genre.
Anyway, good luck with the challenge.
Date: 05/29/09 12:07 am Title: Chapter 1
That was one of the most randomest things EVER. I freaking LOVE it! Even if the cabbage thing was kinda nasty. . . *luffs*
Date: 05/27/09 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol was Bill tripping?
This was cute xD
Date: 05/27/09 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was silly, and I'm digging the silly!. I really really really want a magic apple now.:).
Date: 05/26/09 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
This would be a good one to read while under the influence of various, uh... influences...
Date: 05/26/09 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Um... a little random but lol, MAGIC APPLES!!!
And with that we all left the farmer’s market, me with my bag of magic apples, my brother with his sense of humor, Gustav in the taco suit and Georg with his bags of cabbage, beef and fish.
:) It does sound like a pizza night :)