Date: 06/08/09 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
The idea of them living next to each other and knocking their wives up at the same time is just too cute.
Date: 06/05/09 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's good to see Bill and Tom in these little flashes of life, to know that they'll always be there for each other. :)
Date: 06/05/09 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
...How could single children deal with this kind of life-changing event on their own?... - erm, they have other family members? like the mom and dad? hehe but i get what u mean, its a twin thing ^__^
...What's having a kid compared to doing a world tour before we turned 20?... - fortunately, u will have no idea what its like carrying a miniature you in the uterus for 9 months *all hail mothers!
...and far after death, because that's what twins are made for... - mnbvcxzlkjhgfdsapoiuytrewq *cute! meltssss
Date: 06/02/09 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
It was a little bland, despite what was happening I wasn't really worried or concerned about them being stressed out. There was some confusion between which twin was talking and which twin was doing any particular action at the beginning. You paired one's actions with the other's words, awkward. Thanks for trying something different.
Date: 05/31/09 05:33 am Title: Chapter 1
The way you mixed in this unique story-line with the twins emotions was perfect! I can definitly imagine them both frantic, but there for each other in the end all in the midst of two pregnancies. Well done! And Best Wishes for the Challenge!
Date: 05/29/09 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I enjoyed that very much. I wish I had a twin I c`an give birth next to. Ahaha, but I'm terrified of giving birth and I don't have a twin. But my sister is really close to being my twin. She was born exactly one year after me, the day right before my birthday. We often finish each other's sentences or say the same thing at the exact same time. Or I'll have a song stuck in my head and then she'll begin singing it, or vise versa. I believe in Fate and I think Fate wanted their wives to go into labor at the exact same time. Haha. If I was a man and my wife had gone into labor, I would be frantic, like Bill, even if I had done a world tour before turning twenty. I don't think anything is scarier than going into labor. Anyways, I like that Tom is always there for Bill. He's his rock and that will never change. This story is definitely one of my favorites in the challenge, good job and good luck! :DD
Date: 05/29/09 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwww so cute! Yeah that's exatly what twins are made for, being there for each other always and forever no matter what.
Good luck with the challenge!
Date: 05/28/09 08:39 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like how you personified the feelings, giving them character. It's a really interesting take on expressing emotions, also the story line itself is very sweet! Great!
Date: 05/26/09 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was sweet. It'd be nice if they really stayed that close, huh?
Date: 05/26/09 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was a very adorable premise!
Date: 05/26/09 04:52 am Title: Chapter 1
so so cute.:).