Reviews For Smoke Break
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Reviewer: AmyJean76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/23/22 05:31 am Title: Chapter 1

Super cute and so original!

Reviewer: ravenpan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/11 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

*gigglefit* That is PRECIOUS!

Reviewer: obviouslyrandom123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 01:41 am Title: Chapter 1

That was so funny! A little gross too, but still funny!

Author's Response: :D lol! why thank you, ja the idea of the same pair of flip flops being used by everyone and holding who knows how much fungus and germs gah, but ja the last image makes me thing of a pair of flamingos, lol, thank you for revieiwng hun!

Reviewer: Quill Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/09 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aww, I really did like this story. It was different, but it was really good. I like how you showed the connection of all the boys, and you described where the flip-flops had been, and where they had gone. I especially liked the ending between Bill and Tom. Very cute. *favorited*

Reviewer: Maiwen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/09 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is really good. Definitely a favorite so far. :D

Reviewer: trahshukry Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/09 10:01 am Title: Chapter 1

...he was a through and through clean freak... - now that u mentioned it, jost kinda does look like a "germaphobe" =P

...Geo was obviously too busy re-stringing his black and white checkered bass to care very much that his flip flops were missing... - i suddenly recall the first time i saw this particular bass was in the Zimmer DVD, live at Uberhausen ^__^

...They were such adorable idiots... - i couldn't agree more

*who would of thought a pair of flip flops could make an amazing fic, and i obviously dont say that much about gen! *loves ^__^

Reviewer: 143RD Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/09 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

lol~~
so cute!!
billie is cute~~

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/09 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

*howls* I freaking love this. Made my day. As soon as the twins started near the end, I somehow knew they would end up like that. Bravo *standing ovation*

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/09 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

*giggles* It was so funny and cute! A breath of fresh air. I giggled my way thought it!

Reviewer: JaquexSarai Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/09 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aw, that was adorable. A simple, sweet story is needed every once and a while and this was it. haha. I wish i could have something symbolic like that, but, like jost, I'm a germaphobe, sadly. Haha. Dirty things completely gross me out, also. Sometimes, just scratching gives me the urge to take a shower. I blame ninth grade biology, lol. Anyways, the end made me smile and go "Awwww". LOL. That sounds like something the twins would do, share the sandals like that. I'm really glad you decided to 'stretch your horizons' and take part in the challenge because I really enjoyed reading this! Good luck! :DD

Reviewer: strssna Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/09 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

This made me smile so much :) Adorable story.

Reviewer: THmouse Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/09 11:32 am Title: Chapter 1

I guess whe you read "The flip flop challenge" you took it litterally lol!
Well god for us then cause your story was great! It made me chuckle in the end. Well done!
Good luck with the challenge!

Reviewer: Katanasai Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/09 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love the characterization! I think this is my favorite Gen story. :) So detailed! After a few sentences the flip-flops seem to take on their own character. ^_^

Reviewer: Twilight-Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/09 08:31 am Title: Chapter 1

I loved it. Really sweet and enjoyable, I can really see the twins doing this XD

Reviewer: riookierin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/09 12:09 am Title: Chapter 1

lol reminds me of my flipflops. ugh, i can feel the uncleanliness of them whenever i step onto them, but that somehow never stops me xD
This was really cute and well-structured. I like it a lot :)

Reviewer: SINfulCrTr Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/09 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

I have a set of "smoke flops"! They aren't falling apart yet, but they're missing chunks. Anyways, I loved this story. I can just see them doing something like this.

Reviewer: kazenoarashi Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/09 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

LOL! Cute!

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/09 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

that was a funny story. slightly heartbreaking about the sandals being thrown away. their quest to find them though reminds me of my sister and me....we did those things on quite a few occassions. the end though, that's brotherly love right there....

Reviewer: himisoko Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/09 09:16 am Title: Chapter 1

Best TH Challenge Fic I've read yet! ^^ Way too cute, bizarre and funny -- I absolutely love it!

Author's Response: AW! thank you so much hun, :D that means a lot to me, danke shon schatz

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/09 03:10 am Title: Chapter 1

This was awesome! By the end, I was grinning like a fool. Wonderful :D

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