Date: 07/18/12 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
So friggin sweet, love it!
Date: 06/05/09 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think you expressed the emotions a lot of us felt as Bill was getting sicker and sicker and through his surgery and recovering. I know I would have been determined to make him stop if I was someone close to him like this person was. Good job and good luck!
Date: 06/05/09 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was really sweet, really beautiful - am sorry it took me so long to get around to it!
Date: 06/02/09 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
...Everybody thought it were tears from emotion, but they weren’t... - i never thought the tears were because of pain =(
is that selfish of me? because everytime Bill and the boys perform on stage they are always smiling, it really makes me happy too ^__^
*i think u have a few minor mistakes but other than that,nice work!!
Date: 06/01/09 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's sweet. I like that Tom is on his wavelenght but I wish there was more of it. I feel like it's only a taste of a greater more deep plotline.
Date: 06/01/09 03:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Very nice. :) I like it.
Date: 05/30/09 10:49 am Title: Chapter 1
this is absolutley amazing
xx
Date: 05/30/09 10:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww, this was cute, and I liked the way we had no idea who was speaking. :)
Date: 05/29/09 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Your English is good, no need to really worry about that. Yes, there were a few mistakes, but nothing serious(: I like how Bill pushed himself for his fans because in real life, I'm sure he would do that. Anything for his fans, right? I also like how it's from the ofc's point of view, how she's the one telling the story and telling everything she notices. Not many authors can write like that and not make it so...story telling-ish, but I think you did a really great job! :D
Date: 05/29/09 09:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Don't worry. Your English wasn't that bad. I spotted a few mistakes but nothing too serious.
As for the story it was really nice. I think you captured the characters' emotions quite well.
Good luck with the challenge!
Date: 05/28/09 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww that was so sweet *reaches for tissue* it is just like I imagine Bill, to ignore his problems to keep the fans happy. Yayness for you :)
Date: 05/27/09 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
immediately when I saw the title I thought of "Don't speak" by No Doubt.:). But this story was way better than that song.:).
Date: 05/27/09 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
that made my heart melt.
congrats, it was so tranquil, yet sad at the same time.
perfect.
Date: 05/26/09 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Honestly, your English wasn't TOO bad. I could still read and understand, and really, they were small mistakes.
Heartfelt.