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Reviewer: em_rose483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/15 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh this is wonderfully written! I've not read much Tomshifo but I've always been intrigued by the pairing. This was truly amazing though! I enjoyed it ever so much :)

Reviewer: KSena Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/13 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, now that was just LOVELY! Really really awesome. As you say, there is not enough Tomshido out there. It's one of my favorites to. And this felt very raw, very real... very emotional, even if I am sure Tom tries to hide that. And by emotional, I do NOT mean girly. These two are MEN. And they show it all the time. But men can be emotional to. Just differently. And you showed that very well, in the midst of that MINDBLOWINGLY hot sex! :-D I really hope you'll consider continuing this in one way or another. Because it was SO awesome! Thank you for a wonderful read!

Reviewer: _sleepwalker_ Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/11 03:56 am Title: Chapter 1

I was very pleased with this story. There are very few Tomshido fics and this one is really good!

Reviewer: Lunasama Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/11 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really love this pairing. And it's so rare, it irritates me slightly that so few people have an appreciation for it. I can honestly say that I find this intriguing, more indepth and thought-out than your usual Tomshido ficlets. They tend to be either outright painful or romantically crippling.

I do hope you continue this. It's obvious there's tension there that's not just sexual drive and my curiosity does happen to be my biggest weakness *eyeroll* Much as I curse it...

Would you consider continuing. I'm kinda hooked here...

Reviewer: Yvonne483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/10 11:11 am Title: Chapter 1

PLEASE, write moooore on this story ! pretty pleease, it was so beautiful! ..

Reviewer: Yvonne483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/10 02:58 am Title: Chapter 1

I want more to this story, please! it was really good:D

Reviewer: Mouse Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/10 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, that was hot. I wouldn't mind a new chapter, or a series or something, but it's still great. And I've seen these kinds of endings before, and I don't mind them.

Reviewer: billxbesitztxmeinxherz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/10 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

This seems to be the most recent thing you've written here on the site. Have you stopped here in the TH fandom? I was just wondering

Reviewer: SingOutLoud Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/10 01:51 am Title: Chapter 1

MORE. My GOD, all I want is more of this. Never before had I read a Tom/Bushido pairing, but I need it now. Write more sex? Please? Please? And also other things too, dialogue (though I feel it's mostly short and sweet between these two) and plot as well. But mostly sex. Anyway, I love this.

Reviewer: sporkz123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/10 12:57 am Title: Chapter 1

love this story sooooo much! please please PLEASE continue!!! :)

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/09 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

You should definitely definitely sequel this.

Reviewer: MelissaRM19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/09 12:07 am Title: Chapter 1

I love this. It's perfect. It would be AWESOME to see it turned into a multi-chaptered thing. There aren't many Tomshidos that aren't just one shot smut stories.

Reviewer: lollipopcorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/09 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Continue it pleeeeaaaaase! I gotta see how this turns out. I want Tom to be like Bill :P

Reviewer: stoicgenius Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/09 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was so hot! Wouldn't mind reading a follow up on this XD

Reviewer: MelissaRM19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/09 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

I would loooove for this to be multi-chaptered! It's a really hot thought!

Reviewer: Militheach Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/09 04:09 am Title: Chapter 1

I like this pairing, and I agree that it doesn't get written enough. So, thanks! haha

I have to say, I was expecting more. It ended too abruptly. Too many loose ends I guess you could say (yes, shame on me for the bad pun). It'd be awesome to see this continued or if you write another oneshot. =]

Reviewer: Marinaaxolynn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/09 03:02 am Title: Chapter 1

I honestly never would have thought I'd enjoy Tomshido... But I really, /really/ do =D Danke for opening my eyes and being an awesome writer ^^
Definitely wouldn't have enjoyed the pairing as much if it wasn't written so well =)

Reviewer: Lizard Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Doth my eyes deceive me? Froggy has written something again?! w00t! And if you're rusty, I sure can't tell! I do believe that's the first BuXTom fic I've read, and I like it! I like how you're so in Tom's head as the story goes on, and leaves just enough for potential sequels. ^_^

Reviewer: incognitoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

omg.

i read this story this morning and i haven't been able to stop thinking about it ALL damn day.

i keep having flashes of images of them together. especially this part
"With his back pinned to the seat and his shoulders wedged up against the door, Tom braces his foot on the headrest of the passenger's seat and arches up, interrupting the rhythm and greedily demanding more. The angle is just right and Tom shudders as this shift puts pressure directly on his prostate. Tom doesn't moan, but his breath catches in his throat and he tips his head back, letting it smack against the glass of the window"

holy shit it makes me ACHE!!

i beg you PLEASE (in a nice, non creepy way) expand this. you're completely right about not enough tomshido.

now i'm going to go read it again

Reviewer: scarletswidow Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yay! Tomshido!

This was hot and bittersweet, I love it ^_^

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