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Reviewer: nekodark Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh no!, your making me like Tomshido!! ah whatever I am not going to fight it need more guys banging Tom which I think is a shortage...I mean um damn you gave such a good image.

Thank you for posting.

Reviewer: Buyyouadrank Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very glad to see you writing again :) You haven't lost your touch!

The story itself is very very hot. It is indeed nice to see something for this pairing, especially something this good.

Reviewer: Betje Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

Now that was HOT!

and jeej you're alive!:D

Reviewer: ichbin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

love love love. i don't get people who don't like tomshido. and this was written so realistically (and hotly).

Reviewer: midnightskeeper Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

i enjoyed that way more than i thought i would. very hot. glad to know you aren't dead, i had wondered...i hope you'll end up with more extra time on your hands soon and give us some more stuff like this.

Reviewer: Misery Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 10:01 am Title: Chapter 1

This is my very first Tomshido, and I loved it! It was hot, and seeing two tough guys battle it out was amazing. You also get to see the rare, soft side of Tom, if only for a moment or two. And do I detect a hint of jealously at Bill from Tom? :0)

I'd read more of this, however you decide to do it.

Reviewer: knw Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 09:55 am Title: Chapter 1

Definitely a different cup of tea for me, but if anyone can sell it to me then I imagine it'd be you. I think it stands alone well, but definitely be curious if you did expand it.

Reviewer: sirpustophlese Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 09:16 am Title: Chapter 1

o.o Froggy, this is the best comeback ever. We really needed you and this amazing Tomshido in our lives

Reviewer: himisoko Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 09:12 am Title: Chapter 1

This *must* be expanded -- it's too damn good and too damn hot -- dear god...

Reviewer: Katanasai Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 08:51 am Title: Chapter 1

lol, I adore the summary it would have ended up with! That's hilarious. Tomshido is so hot! You are right, there is a severe shortage.... so keep writing them?! Amazing, hot, well written... all that good stuff. :)

Reviewer: iHEARTtokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 08:35 am Title: Chapter 1

I have never read a Tomshido story before. I now know why you love it so much, it's become my new favourite pairing. You did an awesome job on this story, good job :)

Reviewer: boo Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 08:17 am Title: Chapter 1

You wrote Tomshido! I think I'm completely in love with you. I agree with you completely that there aren't enough stories with this pairing, so I kinda squealed a little when I saw this, and then I read it and I completely fell in love with it. The end made me hurt a little, but it hurt so good.

Reviewer: kazuu Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 07:54 am Title: Chapter 1

OMG I missed yooouuu!!! (says the person who hardly knows you, lol) I honestly thought you were dead or something! ...no I didn't, but I was worried X3
If you ever do find the time, plz make this into a chaptered fic. I want to see where this goes and I don't think a series of one shots would do it justice you know? I really like this pairing and I totally agree with you when you say there isn't enough good stories out there with Tomshido in it ^_^ you're definitely the person who could change all that, you're such an awesome writer!
So yeah this was awesome, nice to know you're alright *random glomp*

Reviewer: Majestrix Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 07:19 am Title: Chapter 1

Your writing is as strong as ever. And yes, I agree Tomishido is a very underrepresented pairing. It's weird, I don't like it often, but when I'm in the mood...

You've done it more than justice. Thank you for giving us a bit of your time.

Reviewer: longwayhome Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 03:48 am Title: Chapter 1

This is so good.


SO good.


It is, in fact, so very good that my toes curled, my fingers dug into the sides of my laptop and I bit into my lip so hard I can still feel it. I may have made sounds out loud that resembled "nrrrgghh" and "ummffaahh" and I'm going to need to read this maybe a hundred more times to see if it gets any less sexy in repetition.

My educated guess says it won't. If you're back I (politely) demand a sequel to this.

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 03:39 am Title: Chapter 1

I can't even tell you how happy I am to see this. You said you wanted to write something, but I didn't have a clue it would be tonight!

This was so damn good, it took my breath away. Actually, I don't think I breathed through most of it! Angsty and hot and it left me aching. I would love to see more, if/when you ever decide to expand on it, but right now, I'm just happy as hell to see this wonderful oneshot from you! :D

Reviewer: bleepbloopbanana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 03:22 am Title: Chapter 1

I get out of having to leave a proper review coz I did beta duty, hah!

Also, I really really reaaaaaaaally liked this part: "Fuck me." An unexpected break between two tracks gives Tom's secret away and he knows immediately that Bushido heard the breathy words that he'd meant to go unnoticed.

FlkjSLKEHEWHR!35lj

moar.

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