Date: 12/01/09 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 15
yay for an update!! please update again soon, i really like this story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D
Date: 12/01/09 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 15
Aww. I loved this chapter. Bill is kinda weird and also hard for me to see though, but I still love him here. And Tomi is such a sweetheart! I can't believe he was so bad towards Bill when they were younger! Now he's such a gentleman. xD
I hope you will update soon! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Bill is certainly a mystery, and i love that about him! Even though i know everything about him >.> xD Tom's easily influenced, that's all. And he's trying now, the dork. :p
Date: 12/01/09 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 15
I cant believe you made me wait that long!! I think I died and had to use this chapter as CPR!! xD
Awesome chapter more please,, and SOON ;D
Author's Response: :O i know! i'm sorry! Hopefully the next one will not take so long!
Date: 12/01/09 05:44 am Title: Chapter 15
Aw, I love the image of their entangled legs. So glad to see this story being updated!
Author's Response: .__. me too xD. Hopefully that will not be the end of the leg molestation. xD Thank you so much!
Date: 12/01/09 04:56 am Title: Chapter 15
GAH! *squee* yay! bill's starting to warm up to tom... if only on a minuscule level but anywhore.. *clutches hand to chest* you made my heart feel all a flutter with texts and the "leg molestation" under the table... *sigh* so cute... now I'm going to stop blathering on and press submit (and go read your new fic, because I haven't before now and I feel guilty for not reading all your awesomeness...) so yeah, I love this, and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Awwww~ All 'a flutter', i love that phrase! I'm so happy you liked it, thank you so much for the review!
Date: 12/01/09 03:31 am Title: Chapter 15
I really don't know why I hadn't read this before. But I've just sat her for the last several hours, catching up and I am crazy involved with this story! I absolutely cannot wait for more. :D
Author's Response: :D Thank you sooo much!! <3
Date: 12/01/09 03:25 am Title: Chapter 15
FUCKKKKKKKKK, can't believe i miss a wonderful fic like this. MORE PLZZZZZZZ
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D
Date: 12/01/09 02:01 am Title: Chapter 15
I'm so happy to see an update! I've been missing this story. :D This was a great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I've been missing posting xD
Date: 12/01/09 01:15 am Title: Chapter 1
may? really... well its seems like ive loved it forever... get on it babe!
Date: 12/01/09 01:10 am Title: Chapter 15
can't wait to read more
Author's Response: :D
Date: 12/01/09 12:48 am Title: Chapter 15
YAY! An update! OMG, and let me just say, that TSOA on the whole bomb thing....
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D
Date: 12/01/09 12:37 am Title: Chapter 15
Oooh, this was great! There's something so strangely captivating about this story. I love all of Bill and Tom's little interactions. We're slowly getting somewhere here :) Bill's character is sort of an enigma to me, and I look forward to the progression of this story so much!
And...Tom...being sweet? Who would have thought! I love it.
Author's Response: ^^ Thank you! How is it strange?? :O Yeah, ^^' Sorry about that whole...slowly getting somewhere thing, hah, but i really cant see it happening any faster! The great thing about Bill here is that he is such a mystery, you find out more as Tom does so lets root for Tom! xD Thank you so much for the review!
Date: 12/01/09 12:08 am Title: Chapter 15
Gahhh---I don't want to stop reading this...I feel like i'm on a roller coaster! I am so ready for the next update!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I wish i didnt ever have to stop writing it! But alas, work and sleep come first, unfortunately. T^T
Date: 11/30/09 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
when are you going to post it? im dying to know! i think im this fics biggest fan. reviewing since chapter 1 like, in feb or jan even? i cant help it, this one rocks!
Author's Response: :p It was MAY, thank you. XDD. I will post as soon as the next next chapter is done. I am always one ahead. ^^ Thank you.
Date: 11/30/09 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 15
oh wow!!!! eiiiii! oh god, okay... that was so... wow! im on edge here babe, it was great! maybe they will hold hands at the game or.. i want them to get closer... i fucking love you for writing this babe!
Author's Response: O_O Lol, I have the next chapter written (i like to stay ahead of the one i post) and you almost hit the nail on the head! There is a tiny handholding scene, but I'm afraid it isnt much ._. Anyways, I'm so so so happy you love this! :D
Date: 11/30/09 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 15
=O
What was Bill's malfunction here? He was like....Mr. Frosty-briefs, dude. And Tom, bless his sweet heart, was so attentive and adorable and.....he's so lovesick. *sigh*
What happens next? What happens next? lol
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Dont worry, Bill's reasoning becomes clear in the next couple chapters. ^^ Lol Frosty-briefs. xD And i know, I think I'm starting to love Tom! Thank you so much for the review!
Date: 11/30/09 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 15
Yay, an update =D A very good one, at that! Now before I tell you how much I enjoyed this chapter I'll point out two tiny little mistakes.
Tom wasn’t sure was compelled him to tell Bill that...
Should be "wasn't sure what compelled him"...and
Where there consequences?
Where should be were =)
Anyway. On to the awesomeness of this chapter. I don't know what it was, but I really, really liked this chapter. I love the texting part, it made me smile. When Tom was happy, I was happy ^.^ And you sure know how to write and keep a person immersed in the story! I wanted to stop and get a drink but lol, I needed to know what happened. The lab scene was cute, too, though I want to punch Tobi. Though, I wonder why Bill didn't let Tom say anything back? Well, I'm sure there's a reason...and glad Tom stopped Bill from using those chemicals XD Anyway, yay for foot molesting and yay for them going to the game together! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for pointing out my errors! They are fixed now, thanks to you! :D Thank you so much for reviewing the fic too, and I'm so glad you liked it! I'm really glad i can keep you from getting up to drink, lol! That shows commitment!
Date: 11/30/09 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 15
Ehhmm.. I wonder what made Bill's mood sour in there..O__O *facepalm* Sorry for my ignorance...
Anyways, I'm glad they're getting a teenybit closer now.. MORE MORE MORE TomxBill pleeeaaassee!!XDDD
Author's Response: Dont worry about it! Bill's reasoning will come through in teh next couple chapters! ^^ Thank you so much for reviewing! :D
Date: 11/26/09 12:05 am Title: Chapter 14
Lovvvvvvved it! The boys are so confused and tom trys so hard,it's adorable. Is Gustav going to grace us with his appearence in the next chapter?
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope the confusion thing wears off after time, but they still have a lot to learn! Aaaaand, i cant say yet :p, but something's a-brewin! :D
Date: 11/25/09 07:06 am Title: Chapter 14
“You’d still be sitting there scratching your head with the manual upside down.”
I adore that image you put in my mind with that phrase, it was one to just chuckle too, and I loved it! n_n I love how you can write in such a way so that I never get lost in images jumping around, everything (meaning scene/action) is always explained in such detail, that I just smile that I'm able to picture it all!
Last line was beautiful I think. Just so adorable, it's like he's keeping Tom with him, at least a small part. Even though I'm sure he has Tom with him most of the time, just awwww, it seemed so cute to me. :D I like how you're not rushing the emotions, you're letting them take their own time to bud out, and for the boys to reconnect, like I think it would in a real life situation. :) It's awesome. n_n
Author's Response: :o Thank you so much. Really. I love your reviews, they make me smile, even on the worst of days! (not today, today is good! XD) I really love that you take the time to comment on the things that you really like, because they end up being the same things i like too! I adored Bill "taking a piece of Tom with him" because thats exactly what it was, a reminder. And I'm really glad you like the pace, i cant see it being realistic any other way. Thanks again!