Date: 12/13/09 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 16
Awww, I love this story. So. Cute!
And aww, Tom, all blushy and nervous around Bill..."someone else on his mind?" We all know what he's thinking =P I think it was cute for the two of them to go to the game together, especially since Bill doesn't usually do things like that. And the sweatshirt and food part was quite adorable, I must say. Very cute and very interesting as always, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: :D! I'm so happy! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12/13/09 11:57 am Title: Chapter 16
wow I love this....I think I might have gone a little cross eyed from reading the ten last chapters in one go but I couldnīt stop myself....please donīt let me wait too long for the next chapter *gives puppy dog eyes*
Author's Response: Awesome :D Thank you.
Date: 12/13/09 08:04 am Title: Chapter 16
Aww, Tomi is in loooove :3
The chapter was awesome, as always ^__^
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 12/13/09 08:03 am Title: Chapter 16
Aww I love this story!! :)
Date: 12/13/09 02:36 am Title: Chapter 16
I really liked the closeness between the two of them in this chapter. It's like all the old hostilities just fell away once they started really talking again. So lovely to read. :)
Author's Response: :D Thank you soo much! I'm happy to see them getting along too! (lol, its about time right? XD)
Date: 12/13/09 01:06 am Title: Chapter 16
Loving it! Keep the updates coming!
Date: 12/13/09 12:40 am Title: Chapter 16
another very good chapter. i enjoyed it. =) looking forward to more.
Date: 12/12/09 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 16
Ah! Bill is wearing Tom's warm sweatshirt! Tom's sweatshirts always look so warm and comfy... XD I'm glad you're deciding to post the next scene in 3 parts. I don't really like reading super long chapters hehe.
Author's Response: They do! Go back to the chapter for a pic of Tom's hoodie, i uploaded one so the readers know which one i'm using! ^^ Thanks so much for the review! :D
Date: 12/12/09 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 16
That was really cute :)
Date: 12/12/09 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 16
Itīs really cute and has a warm feeling to it..
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 12/12/09 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 16
please update soon i love this
Date: 12/12/09 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
HAHA! xD This is really good witten, even this first chapter :D Looking forward to reading the rest.
Author's Response: Awesome! Thank you! :D
Date: 12/09/09 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 15
:3 I NEED TO READ MORE.
Date: 12/09/09 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 12
This fic is so well written it blows my mind. And I feel so sad for them.. Love the use of the song too
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much! :D
Date: 12/06/09 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 15
This is going really well I love it
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 12/03/09 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 15
The texting part makes me soooo sad! It was heartwrenching! Its like someone looking you in the eyes and saying "I love you." ..."HA! JUST KIDDING!" TT>TT that part was really sad. I know Tom made light of it, but it still tugged at my heartstrings.
I enjoyed the part about the bomb. XD It was light and fun, but memorable.
The footsie thing, although cute, was a little weird for me. It was a little too intimate in my eyes for them to be doing when they are still early in their friendship, especially since Bill DID say that they weren't really friends yet. Thats just my thought though. :)
Overall it was a good chapter. Uneventful, but good! I can tell its setting up for the next chapter, since it seems Geo's having a party! What will go down there??? lol Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you :D I loved the texting scene too, but it wasnt meant to be all that sad. Tom knows its too early for Bill to say that to him, and he's not that upset about it, really. And the foot thing is not sexual at all, so i dont really see what you mean by it being too soon. It was more of a "familiarity" thing than a sexual intention. Anyways, thank you so much for the review, and I'm really glad you like it!
Date: 12/02/09 09:30 am Title: Chapter 15
This is a realy great story :)tom and bill are so cute in this story :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D
Date: 12/01/09 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 15
Hmm. Maybe Bill sent the "I miss you" text to Tom on purpose but freaked out? :P
Awww they're getting a tiny bit closer each chapter :)
Author's Response: Lol, good idea, but actually no, he really did send it to the wrong person. Who that is...i cannot say! xD
Date: 12/01/09 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 15
heyyy..im head over hills too! Haha u just make bill's personality pop :-D
Author's Response: :D Thank you so much!