I'm 2H that makes water. Now we just need the other stuff, and we get buzzed boys XD lol, I love reading this, just everything seems fun, and you never have me bored. And now this guy on the football team... hehehe, I'm wondering if it's going to be something really important, or just, a friend n_n A while ago in some chapter (everything blends to me XD) You said something about how Bill is just friends with everyone, and I love how in here, we see that even better. You keep backing up most of the statements you made before, and I love that n_n Something just isn't said and then forgotten. :D You really are so amazing at sculpting worlds.

Author's Response: *_* Wow, thank you! I really really try to be consistent! Dont worry, ;D more will be revealed next chapter. ^^ Thank you so much!

Oh ok ^_^
Ok, I need to do some clarifying lol. Yes, I do remember that Tom is bisexual but I guess I was thinking of him in terms of him being....not so open about it.
Secondly, I know homosexuality is universal. I don't know if you have this affliation in your country because I don't want to assume it's the US and be wrong, BUUUUUUT, in the US, in most states, we have this club in high school's called a Gay/ Straight Alliance, GSA it's shortened as and I did presidency for it for two years trying to explain that homosexuality is as normal as normal comes, so yeah. I was thinking 'odd' in the respect that the majority of students, gay or not, in an American high school might raise an eyebrow, you know? And when I see two guys or girls together, I sometimes do raise a brow like 'they're together? no freaking way'. Tom and Bill don't seem the type that would get together.

I didn't know that Tom punching Tobi in the face meant everyone would assume he has it bad for Bill. I mean, he could just be being a friend.

And I know that no one knows that Bill and Tom are brother; that's why their relationship is so messed up, isn't it?

Really? Amazing then! xD I'm such a sucker for teary confessions and comforting on the part of a *wink*wink* lover lol.

But, yeah, I can REALLY get into a fic sometimes xD, if I really like it, I mean. I love stories like this one though, but, I think there are only two others beside this one where they're twins trying to repair a relationship. But, yours is long and ongoing so it makes me smile lol.
But, yeah, I can analyze a story into next week, but, usually I'm too lazy too lol.
But this is definitely coming along beautifully!

Author's Response: Lol, lets make this the last one till next chapter ok? I understand where you're coming from with the whole homosexuality thing (I too was an advocate in my high school with the GSA) I think when i initially wrote "it was like the school had a gay gene" or something, that i didnt really want to have to explain it, come this part. I really didnt want the whole "homg, he's gay?!" or "fags gotta die!" shpeel. And, i really, really, still dont wanna get into that, so I think this is how its gonna be, regardless of the "norm". I mean, granted, there will be some people that wont see it coming, and others who have (as you'll find out in the next chapter). I'm just gonna keep with the whole "being gay is normal" in this fic, just for simplicity's stake. If that changes, well, you'll know. XD (Oh yeah, and remember Svenja? ...let's just say she's not happy with it either.) And remember that Tom's lunch table said Tom was "Bill's knight in shining armour" for defending him. Gossip was the norm in my school, and im sure by the end of the day people would've been saying they'd been fucking for months before any of this even came into question, regardless of them not even been seen together previously. ANYways, lol i feel like i've just had to defend the honour of my own fic, lol, but its been refreshing to see from a pov outside my own head! Thank you! Talk to you next chapter!

Ok, you're gonna have to forgive me for replying to your reply in another review BUT, it has to be done lol.
First off, I mean, despite the handholding scene, it's pretty obvious that they will be together especially given chapters 15 and 16...and the chapter when Tom first reaches out at Bill's play. Sure, it's coming slowly and maybe you wanna end it alluding to a future relationship between Bill and Tom or maybe you wanna end it with them being happy and making mad, passionate love, but, either way you're still a while off from that point so...I don't understand why people are 'complaining'. I'm just saying, you know?

I mean, lol, it is a little odd to have two teenage boys with no real affiliation to hold hands, had anyone seen it and perhaps odder that two teenage twin brothers would hold hands and Bill, I can understand he was hurt for a long time by Tom brushing him off, but, I'd still think it a little wierd for him to suddenly start holding my hand, if I were in Bill's position xD But, it's sweet.
OH! I know we're way past the point, but, when Tom was in Bill's room and saw all the pictures of 'himself' and their mom said Bill had been through a hard time, OH MY GOD, I would have LOVED for you to delve into that! lmao I only laugh because in my head the words sounded so loud but, I think I'm a bit of a sadist for fictional characters. Maybe once they get closer, Bill will tell Tom how much he was hurt and maybe some tears will be shed (squee!) but...umm, yeah, just the thought of a loyal reader xD
Oh! I can't wait to see the love triangle cleared up! ^_^
Ok, a plus =)

Author's Response: Well, this review deserves a response too, and i dont really mind the talk back and forth between us, btw. OK, first of all, i concede, i get your point. Secondly, Tom is bisexual. Remember that? They mention is way back in the first chapter. Its not "odd" at all to see two boys holding hands anywhere. Gayness is natural in this universe. (And remember how Tom punched Tobi in the face? Everyone is assuming Tom has it bad for Bill ever since that) Thirdly, no one knows they are related. Thats also important to know, and is mentioned back in the second chapter. I dont really remember the exact point you're mentioning, that you want me to delve into, but the more i write, the more Tom learns about Bill, and everything should become clear sooner or later, with explanations to the past. ^^ It really makes me happy that you think this deeply into the story, and im not the only one. XD.

so wat was bill doing with the other guy

Author's Response: Well, they were hugging ;D

oh okay, well i hope Bill gets tipsy enough to kiss Tom and Tom tipsy enough to do something back... or the other way around... i would love more fluff and hints of smut...

Author's Response: ~something~ happens, but not quite that. :D

Very cute! I love the image of Bill in Tom's hoodie.

Author's Response: .__. God, me too. *__*

Aaaawesommmmmeeee! I like this one, it was a good find. ;)

Author's Response: :D yay!

=O
I'm not gonna lie, I was really having the worst day ever today; I mean, I did not wake up until like 9pm but this chapter picked me up some ^_^ Like, it defintely made me smile.
I have to admit though I'm a bit confused. I thought Andi wanted Bill but Bill is with Gustav?! (Who I noticed was MIA in this story ]=)
Omg, what's going on?! And doesn't Bill notice Tom's.....not normal behavior?! I mean, maybe he thinks Tom's trying to bridge the gap but holding hands at a football game. -_- Really?
*sigh*
I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad i could help :D. Aaand, actually, the handholding scene was not supposed to even be there, but everyone in the reviews is beginning to complain that there is not enough "hints" they will be together. I mean, the main pairing IS Tom/Bill, but apparently thats not enough. -.-' I realise how odd it was, but then, it was more of a childhood thing, they used to hold hands all the time. So maybe Bill just wanted the closeness in the same way Tom did? And dont worry, the supposed love triangle will be exposed in the next couple chapters. (its not as bad as it seems. xD)

and here i was thinking that we'll have some twins-kissing scene in some kind of spin-the-bottle -_-'
okay, i get it, their relationships are still too fragile and stuff))
but i'm actually kinda confused about tom's motives. is he still doing this becasuse of the bet?

Author's Response: Wait, you WERE thinking that would happen? Sorry...i dont think i can consider myself THAT cliche. I mean, do you really see Bill agreeing to that? Regardless of anything, thats his BROTHER. They are nowhere near that point yet. Tom's motives are skirting, he's a lil confused right now, but hopefully he will clear up soon. Thank you for reviewing!!! :D

i loved it with all my heart and i would like to see more fluff, the twins need to get more romantic. soon imo... ild babe!

Author's Response: I can guarantee the fluff, but it might still be a while for any really romantic things to happen. Sorry, i love the drawn out stuff! :D I'm so glad you loved it!