Date: 06/23/09 01:01 am Title: Chapter 3
awwwww. i love this chapter. bill's creepy in a cute stalkerish kind of way xD but tom's an ass nuff said xD
Date: 06/08/09 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
Girl, you kill me. This is so good! I'm already craving more of this story; it's like a drug.
Date: 06/08/09 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
Man, that bet is a dangerous thing. A really really dangerous thing.
Date: 06/07/09 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love the plot! keep it comin!
Date: 06/07/09 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
This seems like it's going to be interesting :) I'm gonna keep reading this, so write more soon!!
Date: 06/07/09 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
Their relationship saddens me :(
Nonetheless, this was brilliant! =] I can't wait for more!
Date: 06/07/09 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
Sounds interesting....
Date: 05/26/09 07:19 am Title: Chapter 1
my brother i couldn't stop imagining tom hitting his on desk ones... with all his strenght
Date: 05/26/09 01:26 am Title: Chapter 1
And bang, this had such a surprising end! Well done :) I'm excited to see how this goes on.
Date: 05/25/09 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like what I'm reading to far! I think the story seems very pure, clean, and simple. Your idea for the plot will make a very good fic. It's just at the right level - nothing lacking, and nothing going overboard. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Please keep writing!
Date: 05/25/09 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Omg - I love you. Seriously, I saw this and I was like "aw, I like highschool fics even if some are a bit repetative" and then I read it and was like "oh, it looks like twincest-not related" but then... "... my brother." Seriously, this is lookin pretty damn promising, my friend! And it seems different from other high school fics, idk. The dialogue is so believable - maybe that's what it is. Anyway, I'm PUMPED. [ps, had a big, sugary dessert, so pardon the strangeness of this comment] LOVE YOU.
Date: 05/25/09 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
i read this first but my internet killed itself! i restarted it and now, i can fucking review on how much I LOVE YOU for writing this! please update it as much as you can
Date: 05/25/09 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
I completely love that you did that. I was a little weary about this story, but you've hooked me.
Date: 05/25/09 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh-HO!! A shocking turn of events!! *jams a fishing hook into her mouth* Reel me in, dahlin!