Date: 11/07/09 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 13
I adore the new banner! And the new chapter, of course. There's something about this story. I just love it. I find myself yearning for these cute little slightly awkward encounters between the two of them.
Love how everything is progressing! :)
Date: 11/06/09 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 13
ohh andi's going to be pissed
Date: 11/04/09 11:46 am Title: Chapter 13
I love how Bill knows so much more than the one who seems more masculine...
Date: 11/03/09 10:41 am Title: Chapter 13
Awww twin bonding time!!! -squeal- and uh oh...Andreas is not going to be very happy...
Date: 11/02/09 04:35 am Title: Chapter 13
oh wow! topless!Tom andandand Bill, who knows how to do everything... he is so sexy like this! maybe they can get caught up in a kiss or something soon? steam, fluff and smut please?
Author's Response: I know! UGH Bill who can work on a car is fucking hot in my mind!! BUT, remember, they are still brothers! Imagine how awkward a kiss would be considering their past! I can promise it will happen, but i cant say it will be soon. XD.
Date: 11/02/09 12:56 am Title: Chapter 13
Wow.
Just picturing Bill...working on a car just...*swoons*
Ha, great chapter! I'm glad they're on better terms and REALLY talking to one another, now :D
Author's Response: OMG i know!!! I LOVE a Bill that can do shit MANLY shit like this. UNF. Believe me, the next chapter gets even better! XD. And thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: 11/02/09 12:07 am Title: Chapter 13
I love Tom's realisation that Bill fits in everywhere now, and he wonders when that changed. The banter between Georg and Tom is great, loved the 'I want you to have my babies' line =) So cute that Scotty ran 'home' to attack Tom with licks. Oh and Bill is full of surprises, love that he knows more about mechanincs than Tom, very kewl. Poor Andreas...maybe!
Author's Response: I loved that line too xD. I love my Bill too, he's so tough!
Date: 11/01/09 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 13
cool! i like them having a project to work on together. this is a great bonding exercise for them. =) keep up the great work!!
Date: 11/01/09 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh my....they're getting closer~
That was said in such a sing song in my head lol, but, this chapter was SO awesome, especially from where Georg dropped Tom off at home until that last line lol.
I don't like how Andi is such a doody head to Tom, s'not right *pout*, so, I'm kind of glad Bill forgot him lol.
I seriously can't wait to read the next chapter because you just totally roped in back into this story by my neck lol.
Author's Response: Lol, thank you very much for the review! Yeah, Andi's kind of a dick right now, but you dont really know a lot about him, so dont worry. More will be revealed soonish. XD.
Date: 11/01/09 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 13
NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! I was so absorbed and wrapped up in the story, being terrible and not reviewing each chapter because I just wanted to read fluidly, and then all of a sudden it ran out of chapters. Please update soon and frequently! I am totally addicted and you better believe I'm going over to the Feature nomination thing. This should be read by everyone. So good!!!!
Author's Response: =^_^= Aww, thank you so much! I'm sorry it ran out of chapters .___. Good news is i have a chapter already written, but it wont be posted until the next one after that is done... XD Anyways, I'm so happy you like it that much to think it would be Featured. *__* That makes me so happy!
Date: 11/01/09 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Bill Trümper was…
“…my brother.”
Holy Monkeys! This is definitely going to be a great read! My fingers are just itching to click on the "next" button!
Author's Response: ^--------^ Yay, I'm glad!
Date: 11/01/09 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 13
YESSS!!! I'm so happy they're being amicable :D This was a very sweet chapter. And the fact that Bill just dropped everything to help Tom out... He's such a sweety :3 Great Halloween update!
Author's Response: ^^ I'm happy they're happy too! But its not the end of the road for them, far from it. XDD. Bill IS such a sweetie too. UGH That makes Tom so much more of a dick. :/ xD Thanks for reviewing baby, i always appreciate your comments!
Date: 11/01/09 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 13
Wow I would sure love to see bill fix my car lol
Author's Response: Lmfao, god me too. XD
Date: 10/26/09 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 12
Pretty was such a…pretty word.
It was a win phrase XD it was also so different it seemed from the actual content, which turned to be a lighter bittersweet type of angst, and I loved how that line was able to throw me off, but then you pulled me back in so well n_n you're writing just does that every single time, and I'm so happy it can. I look forward to reading what you write because you're just able to suck me in XD It helps that you can write Tom's thoughts as more or less a guys'. The whole scissors incident... even though the scar wasn't mentioned before, it didn't seem as random as it could've been. You did a really nice job of blending everything in. n_n lovely chapter :)
Date: 10/24/09 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 12
I liked how you worked the scissors into both the past and present, very well done. The scene in the music room is very touching, my heart is breaking for these boys. Looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you, i really loved the whole scar idea, and i cant wait to write more about it. ^^ Thank you so much for your reviews! <3
Date: 10/24/09 11:22 am Title: Chapter 9
Awww this is just an adorable chapter
Date: 10/24/09 10:04 am Title: Chapter 3
Argh! That was harsh, I can't believe Tom would do that! Poor Bill =(
Date: 10/24/09 09:38 am Title: Chapter 1
ooooh great start!! Very interesting, I love everyone staring at Bill, cause you know that they would ;)*runs to read more*
Date: 10/24/09 03:23 am Title: Chapter 12
damn and wow...
Poor Bill, wonder how Tom is going to make up fo everything... and crap he's been an ass to Bill for a long time..
Can't wait to read more
Date: 10/23/09 08:13 am Title: Chapter 12
i am very glad tom is starting to get it get how awful it must have been for bill. great chapter, very revealing, i loved it!