Date: 11/15/09 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oh my Oh my,, I love this (and its really hard to get me to like twincest) but this is cute and tasteful.
More please ^.^
Date: 11/15/09 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 9
Awww the dandilion thing is sooo cute ^.^
Awshumness xD
Date: 11/14/09 09:31 am Title: Chapter 14
Hahahaha that was a long-ass chapter! :D But in a good way!
Where to begin? I really loved how they interacted with each other in this chapter. They were so playful and happy together, it was really refreshing compared to how awkward things have been between them. You did it really well, too, exactly how I would imagine them to goof around together!
I love love loved where Bill said about how he didn't think they could be friends yet, but that Tom shouldn't stop trying. It was like a very "woohoo!" moment for Tom, because he's making progress with Bill, and I really think its meaningful for him to get "permission" from Bill to continue getting close, because its no longer just Tom making unwanted advances. Ya know?
I really liked this chapter, no constructive criticism this time! :D
Hey! Hey! Is it Gusti??? :D
Date: 11/13/09 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 14
GUSTAV PLEASE!!! Please say it's Gustav!!
Date: 11/13/09 11:19 am Title: Chapter 14
AWWWW this is full of super cute fluffiness =) I loved Bill smudging grease across Tom's cheek, the tickling scene and Bill leaving the grease smudge on his cheek. There's hope *grin* Wanting more please =)
Date: 11/12/09 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 14
AWWWWWWWWW!! He left it
Date: 11/12/09 03:09 am Title: Chapter 14
yay! i love that bill wants him to keep trying. i think its a very realistic response. keep up the great work, and i look forward to the new character! ;)
Date: 11/11/09 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 14
xD i don't wanna shit my pants D: in case i will be prepared!! xD
okei i will start properly: ejem... OMFG!!!! :Q
xD
first surprise was when i saw the banner i said like: umm...familar xD and then it hit me xD and the second was omg and update! and then omg 2 chapters...and finally omg i missed a chapter xD and and
woo
xD
u put the banner :'D
and and and umm... yeah xD
this chapter was soooo niceeeeeeeeee like aaaaaaw xD
tom with his butterflyness xD and bill *-*
awesome! i love it :D
eh..yeah gotta go D:
baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai ;D
.nekito.
Date: 11/10/09 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 14
they both want it but wont admit it to each other
Author's Response: How do you figure?
Date: 11/10/09 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 14
Ooh! Ooh! A special new character?! Ummmm I don't have a clue to who it could be xD This chapter made me giggle because there were so many cute moments!
Date: 11/10/09 11:39 am Title: Chapter 14
Awwwwwwwww *squeals in delight*
This story keeps getting better and better. You're amazing, keep the updates coming!
Author's Response: :o I'm so glad you think so!
Date: 11/10/09 04:44 am Title: Chapter 14
Awww, that was so sweet, and then bittersweet at the end. I love how they could just fall back into old patterns, but know that's not enough after all this time. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I loved the ending too :)
Date: 11/10/09 01:15 am Title: Chapter 14
Omg, it's so serendipitous! I was washing dishes tonight and I thought 'gee, man, I definitely feel like reading that about Bill and Tom where trying to build their relationship back up.' and then I sit down at my computer and =O There it is! xD
Omg twin sweetness! I can feel the love already and this was just so beautiful! I can already tell that they're going to be so good together and Jorg! AHH! Father-son reunions! Ok, so much AMAZING stuff happened in this chapter and I'm bouncing on the edge of my seat from reading it that I can't even think logically!
*deep breath* They're being so tender towards each other and my heart if absolutely melting, please....please more?
Is the new character Gustav? He's been MIA here, don't skimp on the Gusti! I love him ^_^
Author's Response: Awesome! I love it when that happens! They still have a long way to go, but i think you're right, they will be good together :D I'm so happy you liked the chapter! ;D I love Gusti as well.
Date: 11/09/09 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 14
Everything about this chapter was perfect! I really felt the tension and emotions--you did such a fantastic job, I really didn't want it to end. Bill all dirty and sweaty, working under a car and getting his hands greasy is one of the sexiest things I've ever read, lol I loved that part!
Actually I love this whole story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: :O Thank you sooo much! Homg, yes, Bill covered in motor oil all slippery next to Tom was amazingly hot in my mind, i adored writing it! Thank you so much for the review, I'm so glad you like it! :)
Date: 11/09/09 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 14
Another great chapter. The ending part was sad, yet hopeful, but I liked it :) And oh, a new character? Hm...I dunno 0.o
Anyway. Back to the chapter. Very cute, I loved their interactions, though it made me upset when Bill reverted back to being cold towards Tom. Then again, he was letting Tom feel what he felt, wasn't he? *_* I know nothing about mechanics but this was still a lovely chapter, I love the on-and-off interaction between the two, leaves me wanting more. Another great update, can't wait for more ^^
Author's Response: Thank you soo much! Bill's just really unsure about Tom, thats why he keeps checking himself. He doesnt want to get too close again. T^T I had to research cars for this chapter, literally, everything written is "real". D: It was hella hard. XD. Thank you for the review! :)
Date: 11/09/09 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 14
hmmmmmmm okay, gustav? hehehe, i love you for writing this! i think ive been reviewing since chapter one when it first came out, and i must say that im loving it more with every chappie hun! update soon, okay?
Author's Response: :D Thank you sooo much!
Date: 11/09/09 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 14
omg!!! super chapter!! incredible!! XD please continue!!
Date: 11/09/09 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 14
Special character... Hmmm... Here are some wild but totally correct guesses :P
-Love
-Kisses
-Lube
Am I right or am I right? XD
At the end I was like AAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWW
And Bill totes did the right thing. Can't wait for more ^_^
Date: 11/09/09 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 14
yay! i love suprises, unless its the "i just had a baby and it's yours" kind... I don't really get the last part. What did bill leave?
Author's Response: The smudge Tom left on his cheek.