Date: 07/06/09 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 14
Omg can't wait for the next one
Author's Response: Glad to see you're still hanging in here :) Thanks dear!
Date: 07/01/09 09:31 am Title: Chapter 13
ha ha ha awesome!!! xxx
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed! :)
Date: 06/29/09 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
More more more lmao!!
Author's Response: LOL! More to come, I promise!
Date: 06/29/09 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 13
Yay!
Author's Response: Yay x 2!
Date: 06/29/09 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 13
All I can say is....HELL FUCKIN' YEAH!!
LOVED IT =D
Author's Response: :D! Awesome!
Date: 06/29/09 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 13
hahhaa loved it!! more...
Author's Response: LOL! "more..." You guys are so greedy! I love itttt!
Date: 06/27/09 06:56 am Title: Chapter 12
aaaahhhh yay its going to be alright...now all Bill and Joce have to do is make beautiful sexy times and the world is put to rights one more time lol xxx
Author's Response: HAHA! I definitely got a good laugh out of this review; thanks dear! More will be coming, and trust me things are JUST heating up!
Date: 06/27/09 02:04 am Title: Chapter 12
I LOVE this story!!! Update as fast as you can please!!!!!! It's so in depth and I just love the characters!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm liking it the more I write it :) Glad to hear you like it as much as I do!
Date: 06/26/09 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 12
Awww loved it great chapter hun!!
Author's Response: Thanks dear :)
Date: 06/26/09 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 12
She finally talked. It was about time!
Author's Response: I know right! It took a while, but the ball's rolling now!
Date: 06/26/09 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 12
I saw you had updated and I literally almost cried I was so happy! LOL
This chap was awesome, this story is freaking ahhhhmazing. LOVE IT! =D
Author's Response: I know I'm so sorry it took so long! But I'm thrilled to hear you liked it; I especially liked this chapter. I just thought it was so...so personal. I liked it. Glad you did too!
Date: 06/17/09 11:46 am Title: Chapter 11
ahhhh poor Bill and even poorer Joce!!! xxx
Author's Response: It's getting intense!
Date: 06/16/09 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 11
AWWWWWWWW poor Jocelyn...poor Bill.
I hope she opens up to him soon
this chap was so good...I didn't want it to end :)
Author's Response: A lot of things can happen; she may open up, or everything will come crashing down. :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/16/09 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 11
Omg!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 06/16/09 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 11
Jocelyn needs to talk to Bill.
She CANNOT keep shutting him out like this!
I can understand how she feels, but nothing will get better if she doesn't let it out to someone. Bill loves her so much it's quite obvious. She needs to trust him and talk. Period.
I really liked this chapter. I felt the emotions. I believe I've said it before but you right very descriptive. Truly remarkable.
This story should be featured.
Add more soon
--Mona
Author's Response: Maybe Jocelyn is shutting him out for a reason; maybe the end is near, maybe she plans on leaving, who knows? Well, I do. :P Thanks for the review dear.
Date: 06/15/09 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
I swear i can't get enough.
Their relationships is beautiful.
But damn is her dad a dick.
Ima need you to add a new chapter very soon please? PLEASE?!
Author's Response: I'm trying m'dear! :) Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 06/15/09 10:10 am Title: Chapter 10
Fantastic...all the drama is coming to a head now...don't stop!!! xxx
Author's Response: Oh yes, yes it is. :)
Date: 06/13/09 12:48 am Title: Chapter 10
that was such a great but sad chapter!! posy ASAP! :)
Author's Response: I will try my hardest :)
Date: 06/12/09 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 10
Okay LOVED tha beginning of this chap...it was cute and funny (especially the part where Bill and Tom race to the front door...hilarious XD)
I was kinda upset with Jocelyn in the middle when she got mad at Bill, BUT I can understand (kinda) why she was mad...glad in the end he decided to bring her along (GO BILL!!! LOL)
okay...now the last part of the chap...I felt really bad for Jocelyn...I know she DEF did not want the guys to see her father and I definitely didn't want Bill to find out that he abused her. I'm glad its out in the open though now. Hopefully Bill (along with the help of the others) can persuade her never to back to that house again.
So yea...I liked the chap and LOVE this story =D GREAT JOB!!
Author's Response: First of all, LOVE the long review! That makes me happy! :) Secondly, yes, there's a lot of emotion and confusion inside of Jocelyn; she's mad, then she's not. She's afraid, but she can't stay away. She's a confusing and confused and this three month trip can turn out to be pretty amazing or really bad. We shall see where this takes us, hm?
Date: 06/12/09 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
Omg amazin chapter! She better not go back there ever!
Author's Response: We shall see m'dear!