Date: 08/06/09 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 18
wow i cant belive let her do that... brynn is such a slut... and wat the fuck is up with bill
Author's Response: I guess we'll all find out next time :/
Date: 08/06/09 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 18
Ooooooh Bill you stupid hormone driven boy you!!!
Author's Response: *sighs* The life of a rockstar..
Date: 08/01/09 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 17
wow just wow this is one of the most amazing stories i have read... the characters aren so much fun and goofy... its absoulutly amazing... i realy do love it
Author's Response: Well thank you oh so much Miss. punk_princess_044! I really appreciate the review and am glad you like my story so much!
Date: 07/28/09 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
They said I love you's! So sweet. Bill is truly like her own personal angel from heaven, like damn. She better stop going bipolar and him and CLING on as LONG as possible, because it's very unlikely she'll find anyone else quite like him.
Author's Response: that's how I imagine Bill to be, you know? I don't think he's like every other guy out there. :)
Date: 07/28/09 11:42 am Title: Chapter 17
aaaahhhh that was amazing!!! xxxx
Author's Response: :D! thank you dear!
Date: 07/27/09 08:59 am Title: Chapter 17
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! SHE SAID IT!!!! *chants* GO JOCELYN! GO JOCELYN! :D
Author's Response: *chants along with!*
Date: 07/27/09 01:08 am Title: Chapter 17
Awww she said it yayy hahaha
Author's Response: :) yay x 2!
Date: 07/23/09 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 16
Omg I love this story. You have no idea how much my heart raced when I saw you updated! And I'm happy they made up, they obviously need each other desperately. You area an amazing writer please keep it up. I hope Bill is able to her help her with her drinking problem.
And wooo they had some intense sex there!
Author's Response: LOL They totally did! I'm so glad to hear you're into the story that much; that really makes me happy :)
Date: 07/22/09 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 16
YAY!!! they didnt break up!! damn! I dont get Bill! :P
Wonderful chap...absolutely loved it! and tha sex scene was sweet...and dammit, it was HOT! :)
Author's Response: GOOD! I'm glad you liked it! So it met the criteria for a good solution to their fight?
Date: 07/22/09 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yea I loved the bugger fallin from her nose part lol. And then he just wiped it off like nothin. I have done that b4 hehehe. Couples do that...
Author's Response: Exactly my point :)
Date: 07/22/09 09:40 am Title: Chapter 16
Ahhhhh yay they're all good again...well for the time being...I loved this chappie xxx
Author's Response: Ah yes, they are :) Glad you enjoyed it dear, thanks so much!
Date: 07/22/09 07:51 am Title: Chapter 16
Nicely written, girl! A nice way to make up too! i like this story; even if i haven't always reviewed, i keep reading.
Author's Response: :) Well I got a comment that said the fight was dramatic, and I'd need a great way to bring them back together, or not at all and so that's what popped out! I'm glad you enjoyed it dear, and that's awesome :)
Date: 07/21/09 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 16
Loved it! Hahha it was so realistic hahaha.
Author's Response: Really? You think so? That's awesome to hear; that's part of what I strive for! :)
Date: 07/16/09 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 15
Well damn...I completely understand jocelyn's frustration with Bill..but he famous!!!
I hope she can fix this cuz man...if she loses Bill...I'm taking him! :P LOL
Author's Response: LOL! Psssshhhhh I have first dibs!
Date: 07/16/09 04:47 am Title: Chapter 15
Oh nooooooooo!!!
Author's Response: o.o
Date: 07/15/09 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 15
Uhmm .. constructive critism here .
did you make her leave so he can take her back ? because it seems like she's leaving for good now .. i doubt you could fix this without it sounding SUPER liche and corny . unless you wanted it to be like that :P in which case keep going , cuz i'm definitely gonna read the next chapter (Y)
Author's Response: I enjoy constructive critism but unfortunately I'm not going to tell you what I'm going to write next, but you have given me a lot to think about. Maybe I'll change things around a bit... But thank you so much! I really appreciate it. :) I'm always looking to improve myself.
Date: 07/15/09 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 15
Uh ohh...
Author's Response: :/ It ain't lookin' good man.
Date: 07/06/09 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 14
uh oh...I see a bitch fit coming on in 5,4,3,2.........
loved the chap btw XD
Author's Response: HAHA we shall seeeee!
Date: 07/06/09 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 14
OMG those bitches xxx
Author's Response: Hmhmm, and it just might get even uglier.
Date: 07/06/09 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 14
Uh oh. Jocelyn don't go getting jealous now! You know he only has eyes for you!
Ugh. haha.
I swear I get excited everytime I see you've updated! Add more soon =)
Author's Response: That's what I love to hear! I get excited when I update too :) Thank you dear for the review!