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Reviewer: Irene Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/09 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 4

Good! Bill always knows what he wants, i need to know what happens!

Author's Response: You'll find out in the next chapter! ;)

Reviewer: wenny Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 3

Loved it =)

Author's Response: Two for two! :) Thanks!

Reviewer: wenny Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 2

I loved how you describe everything here, I can almost picture every scene taking place.

Author's Response: That's what I shoot for :)

Reviewer: wenny Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really liked how you describe everything it gives an insight to her character and still retains some mistery.

Author's Response: I'm writing in a different tense to give it that vibe so yeah, it definitely helps. :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Kaycee23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 3

love it!!

Author's Response: Awesome, thanks so much!

Reviewer: meandtokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 01:54 am Title: Chapter 2

Awsome 2 chapters

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) I appreciate the review!

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