Date: 05/25/09 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Bathroom
OMG! I seriously got goosebumps reading this! You're so amazing
Author's Response: Awww thanks so much! :D I'm really glad you like it! :)
Date: 05/25/09 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Hotel
*whimpers*
Author's Response: Muhahahahah! *evil laugh* NO smut this time HAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAA!!! :P
Date: 05/25/09 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Bathroom
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
GET MY BOYS OUT OF THAT PLACE RIGHT NOW!!!!
*is freaked out too*
Author's Response: Sorry, no can do... ;) Thanks for reviewing though! Don't get mad at me. XD
Date: 05/25/09 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Bathroom
eish! RUN BOYS RUN!!! oh no!
Author's Response: Haha! XD Thanks! They sure will, but like any good horror movie, they will naturally run towards the scream to see what's going on. ;)
Date: 05/25/09 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Bathroom
Wood splinters? This is so freaky, and original! It was in your dream? It had be a scary one!! This fic is awsome, I like it so much!! Thanks for updating quickly!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D I'm glad you think it's original! The wood splinters bit actually wasn't in my dream, but the boys and the hotel were, and also some stuff that will happen later in the fic, and of course the ending. Please keep reading! :)
Date: 05/25/09 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Hotel
i like it: i normally read slash, bt give me a good thriller any day!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! :D I normally write slash too... XD
Date: 05/25/09 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Bathroom
I do too:D
I love this!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! :D I'm glad you like it!!
Date: 05/25/09 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Bathroom
:O!!!!!
This is getting quite exciting x3
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! :D I'm glad it's getting excited to you!
Date: 05/25/09 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Bathroom
i hate my family! first when i was reading about the little girl and the elevator my step-dad snuck up on me and scared the living shit out of me! then i was reading about Tom's experience when the cell phone went off and started vibrating on the desk. I screamed and jumped out of my chair. This is creepingly good because i'm very scared
Author's Response: Hahaha! XD Aww you poor thing! I'm glad my story is scary though, I was aiming for that, of course. :P Thanks for your review! :D
Date: 05/25/09 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Bathroom
Eeeep!!!! Poor Tomi! So scary, but I kind of like it. You had a dream about this?! Wow! how scared were you when you woke up? I would be freaking out. Update soon :)
Author's Response: Well, mostly the ending of my dream was very detailed, so that scared me a lot. I didn't actually dream this experience, but I decided to spice things up a bit. Otherwise the bit between the beginning and the end would get very boring! XD But as soon as I had got over the initial shock when I woke up, I already started planning the fic. XD Thanks for reviewing again! I hope you'll keep reading. :)
Date: 05/24/09 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Hotel
I'm really interested to see how this turns out...
Koos it really must have been one freaky dream! xD
Author's Response: Thanks twinny! Oh, believe me, it was freaky all right. :P
Date: 05/24/09 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Hotel
I LOVE scary stories, and this one seems promising =]]]]
I'm excited to see where this goes ^^
Much love xo
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! :D I hope I can live up to your expectations. :)
Date: 05/24/09 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Hotel
more more more more more more more i love this sooooo much
Author's Response: You love it already? XD Thanks for the review! I promise to update soon!
Date: 05/24/09 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Hotel
OHHHHHHHHHHH, I love fics like this.
Even more when Bill seems to be the more in tune with what's going on! Can't wait for part 2, cause I wanna know who that little girl is too.
Sorry this was inspired by your nightmare, but I like it so far! ^^
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! :D I'm glad you like it! Well, I was a little scared when I just woke up, especially because of the ending of my dream, but I immediately thought it would be a good idea to turn it into a fic. XD More to come soon!
Date: 05/24/09 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Hotel
-clappingandjumpingaround- I LOOOOVE IT!!
Author's Response: Awww thanks so much! :D I'm glad you like it!!
Date: 05/24/09 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Hotel
Really good description throughout. Took me a while to work out the end bit. :S
Author's Response: Thanks for the review babes. It's ok, just ask me and I'll explain it. :)
Date: 05/24/09 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Hotel
Ok, so I'm a little nervous about the character death because too many people hurt Bill. Although I do like suspence and a little horror. I do think this story is interesting and want to read more, just try not to kill Bill ( no pun intended).
Author's Response: Awww... I wish I could guarantee Bill won't die... You don't have to read the story if you don't like character death, because I can assure you many people will die... :( Sorry, it was the nightmare I had last night... Gotta stay close to it. :P
Date: 05/24/09 11:46 am Title: Chapter 1 - Hotel
I really like this, this fic is going to be very exciting,to be honest, I really like scary things:-) I`m sure that little girl is a ghost!! Keep writing, please!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! :D I'm glad you like it! I'll try to make it as scary as possible. ;)
Date: 05/24/09 09:15 am Title: Chapter 1 - Hotel
Ooo, creepy... gosh, I'm getting chills jsut reading it. Little girls who randomly disappear in white dresses are never a good thing...hehehe mints on the pillows!!! That's amazingly awesome. The inside of the hotel seems a lot different than the outside :) gosh, this is going to be an eventful few stays right?
lol, I loved the way Bill waved his hand at Tom :) Maybe that seems so insignificant to you, but lol, I love it because I can just imagine him doing that :) hopefully more intereaction between the boys in the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! :D I'm really glad you liked it! And I'm glad you liked the hand wave. I could also see him do that, so I put it in. :P And I'll make sure to have them interact more in the chapters to come. :) I hope you'll keep reading! It will surely be eventful. ;)