Date: 07/06/09 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 5: War
Great chapter; extremely well written and good to read. And we got a small look inside Tom, which I liked. Now it's just time to open Hales up.
Date: 07/01/09 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 5: War
welcome back! thank u for updating.
I was worried that you didn't want to continue this awesome story.
Hale's character is so dark. please give more insights/haunting flashbacks on why Hale distances herself from Tom and the others.
I'll be waiting for the next chapters. =]
Date: 07/01/09 10:39 am Title: Chapter 5: War
This is sooo good :D enjoy reading it .
so plz contiue soon, will ya ?
Date: 07/01/09 10:09 am Title: Chapter 5: War
Hmmm :) lovely story to make me think about what all in being said with the whole trust thing. You know I just read a big article on that, about trusting, and how people find it hard to trust, it was interesting, just like this :)
“Hales, you know I adore you, right? But you’re like…running a marathon. Every time someone catches up to you, starts to figure you out you sprint ahead of them and change. Trying to understand you is a fulltime job.”
I liked that line :) It seemed to fit very well, interesting way to put it, and kind of a cool way to look at things. So probably my favorite line there. It just seems like I keep having Hales pushing everyone away, and so closed off, but there doesn't seem a reason, which is getting frustrating, trying to find out the reason, while crossing fingers that there is a reason :) It was cute to sort of see how Tom and her interacted in the beginning, kind of like sweet sorrow? lol, she probably wants that again no matter how much she denies it. *squeeze* hopefully more light will be shed on her situation? Sooner? :D
Date: 05/31/09 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Death Of Flirting
Okay so i just sat and read all the chaps you got up so far and let me just say...
DAMN
I love this story =D
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you like it. :)
Date: 05/31/09 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Death Of Flirting
i love your sporadic updates. =] i want to know what the heck happened to Hales! Poor Hales, she seems to be suppressing her feelings even though her heart is still flutering for Tom. Poor Tom, he actually cares for her. At first I thought he left her and became an a-hole, but it seems that Hales is the one avoiding the confrontations. We need more flashbacks to understand. this story is so intense, but i love it! i love how you incorporate the quotes into the story too. update when u have time. =]
Author's Response: Glad you like it. There will be more flashbacks in the future, more revelations. I thought I knew exactly how this was gonna go but Hales took on a mind of her own. Hmm...lol. :)
Date: 05/31/09 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Death Of Flirting
Oh...that last line broke my heart...I don't normally get really depressed when there is a girl in the story as the main love interest, but ouch, that last (wait no, second to last, Tom said it) line, just was ouchies.
If you hate a person, you hate something in him that is a part of yourself. What isn’t a part of ourselves doesn’t disturb us. Hermann Hesse
Favorite quote :) I don't know why, but it just seemed to be the best thing to fit there :) I'm stealling all the quotes in here, and putting them all up in a collection to hold onto them :) So what's happening next!! Gosh, so want to know, because you've roped me into this one :)
Author's Response: Yes, poor Tom. Hard not to feel bad for him. Glad you like the quotes. I try hard to find good quotes for this story. Glad you like it. :)
Date: 05/30/09 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Death Of Flirting
I get the sense that Hayley is confused and she's pushing Tom away for that reason.. I just wish I knew why they had broken it off in the first place. They fit, in some odd way, to me it seems. I just wish Hayley wasn't so stubborn, in a way. It makes for a great story, to see their struggle, but I'm a girl who likes her happily-ever-after and though it is frustrating to watch Tom and Hayley go through this, I love every minute of it. However, it makes Hayley somewhat unlikeable, in my opinion, because she's so...so incomplete, it seems. But I still love the story, and love Hayley. She's so emotionally torn... Ah! I have to stop or this review will never end. Wonderful job dear, hope to read more from you soon!
Author's Response: Glad you like it. Hayley and Tom will continue to have a lot of drama, of that I can promise. I thought I knew exactly where this was going at first but now Hayley has taken on a mind of her own. Glad you like it. :)
Date: 05/30/09 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Death Of Flirting
awwh
even a flirt can get their heartbrokrn
poor tom =(
Yay i love it, looking forward to more =)
Author's Response: Aww, he's Tom. He'll be fine. :)
Date: 05/30/09 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Death Of Flirting
AW. I wonder what's happened to Hayley that made her likethis D: Although, I do actually love her ♥ She reminds me so much of myself, how nasty she can be xD I really love this fic =)
Author's Response: More will be revealed later. Glad you like it. :)
Date: 05/30/09 05:25 pm Title: Prologue: Tomb Of Love
GREAT STORY
Author's Response: Glad you like it. :)
Date: 05/30/09 05:11 pm Title: Prologue: Tomb Of Love
GREAT STORY
Author's Response: Glad you like it. :)
Date: 05/30/09 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Death Of Flirting
Why is Haley so defensive with everyone specially with him?
Author's Response: More will be revealed later. :)
Date: 05/29/09 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 3: Coffee And Collarbones
wow! your story is getting better and better.Thank-u for having hayley express her emotions and thoughts more...especially towards Tom. I love how hayley and tom met. it's unusual but very special and interesting. I love flashbacks and hayley's special bond with tom and bill. Take us readers back to their pasts and hayley's past so that we understand them better. To me, somethings strange about hayley's reply to tom's questions. She is so passive and indifferent with what she wants. She's a difficult girl to read when she doesn't give a straight forward answer. so much mysterious which i love. I want to read more! update asap when you have time. =] keep up with the drama and love. hahaha
Author's Response: Hmm...Hayley is...complex. I thought I knew how this story was going to turn out but now I think she's taken a mind of her own and has twisted it into something new. :)
Date: 05/29/09 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 3: Coffee And Collarbones
Me likes =)
Author's Response: Glad you like it. :)
Date: 05/29/09 10:53 am Title: Prologue: Tomb Of Love
It's obvious that Hayley is hiding something and now I wish that I had picked that I wanted to read why she is so guarded! But it was wonderful, and it seems to me that Tom calms her in a way, maybe even completes her and she just doesn't know it or doesn't want to admit it.
Author's Response: Hmm...Hayley is...complex. I thought I knew how this story was going to turn out but now I think she's taken a mind of her own and has twisted it into something new. :)
Date: 05/29/09 07:51 am Title: Chapter 3: Coffee And Collarbones
more please
Author's Response: More to come soon. :)
Date: 05/29/09 01:15 am Title: Chapter 2: Wardrobe Combat
Hmm.. They all sound so tempting! I think I would like to know one of the things that caused them to split up though! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Oh, I will definetly be adding information on that. No worries. :)
Date: 05/29/09 01:04 am Title: Chapter 1: Dramatics And Doubt
This story is amazing so far! It's extremely well-written and very witty and entertaining. I love the plotline; in my heart I want them to be together despite their differences. Hayley is different- I like her character a lot. You're doing a fantastic job, keep it up!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you. Glad you like it. I wanted Hayley to be different but not in a way that people find her TOO weird or dislike her because of it. Hope I pull that off well. :)
Date: 05/27/09 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 2: Wardrobe Combat
yes! new chapter. soo curious about tom and hayley's past relationship. i think hayley must be very passive because she claims that she is not jealous at all. i don't believe her. She's in denial about it. It would bother her because she is still in love. Well i'm not sure because she doesn't express her feelings and thoughts that convey her love for tom expect in the Prologue. just a thought...maybe i'll understand better as the story progresses. :]
oh yeah about the poll:
Where is All the above option? lol hehe well, if i have to choose, it'll be A. more about hayley and tom when they dated. i love how complicated their relationship is. I'm always into the the main pair of the story more than other characters.
looking forward to next chapter :]
Author's Response: Hayley is....complex. She likes to keep things close to her heart and not share her feelings very often. She'll become less of a mystery as you get to watch the story progress. Glad you like it. :)