Date: 01/22/08 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
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AWWWWWW!
That was adorable. So cute.. Is the story over now? D:
Date: 01/22/08 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
I think you should write more. ;T
Date: 01/22/08 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
wow great ! :D I love it
Date: 01/22/08 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
omg so cutttttttteee
adorable ending!!!! *sniff* so.... omg... so ....(dont have words)
Date: 01/03/08 01:44 am Title: Chapter 2
yes pelase
we wnat more ;) at least I do
anyweays
this chapter was great
they are too cute, espacially Tom in this one
Author's Response: I've almost got the next chapter finished :D I just hope it's as cute as this one was
I'm glad you liked it; thanks for reading!
Date: 12/30/07 04:54 am Title: Chapter 2
wow, i thought it was really really good!!! and yep, i think you should add a one off, it would finally complete the story!!! i loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm working on it ;)
Date: 12/29/07 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awww... That was a good job, hun and oww... You really searched information about that? That's awsome, hun. But I still wonder... it was a little bit weird, though. I mean, of course the pain of the first time exists (even if here not lol). Anyways, I loved it and the "kissing lessons" was so damn good. Keep writing like that! Love ya!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks. And my research was...not terribly unlike Tom's, haha. (Although I also asked my friends who've done anal as well and got their experiences, so there's that xD)
Date: 12/29/07 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, I'm so glad you continued! Yay! This was very yummy indeed *nods* And lmao at what you said about Tom's research! xD That sounds very Tom-ish, yes. Mwahahaha, I'm also glad it doesn't feel finished :D lol.
Author's Response: It sounds like every guy I've ever known, and VERY much like Tom. <3 Keep your eyes open for another part!
Date: 12/29/07 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ooh.. this was cute! Although I must point out, the first time would actually be quite painful.. And nowhere near pleasant. But, I like this! C:
Author's Response: Thanks for that; I edited it a bit in the middle to make it more realistic. (Although for some [not all!] guys, anal sex is actually really pleasurable 'cause it hits their prostate, so the pain is somewhat mixed in with that.) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12/29/07 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
Just read it. Thanks :D
A nice present. I especially liked the lecture at the end :P So true.
It be nice to see what Tom does if Bill went to try something with another guy, couse he said "And I don’t want anyone else to touch you yet anyway". Jelousy = love XD
Author's Response: Welcome :D Thanks for reading
I threw that in there because I'm super sex education-oriented (I volunteer a lot of my time at Planned Parenthood and other places like that), and I think it's really important for people to know :P
I think Bill might eventually get kinda pissed at him, actually, 'cause Tom goes out with these girls, but he gets all angry and jealous if Bill does, so...Yes. Bill is angry xD I really have no idea how it'll go, though.
Date: 12/29/07 11:21 am Title: Chapter 2
more please, i am not enough...XDD
Author's Response: xD I'll try~
Date: 12/29/07 11:03 am Title: Chapter 2
SO HOT ! :D You write very good ! ^^
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! :DD
Date: 12/29/07 10:53 am Title: Chapter 2
Love it! I kind of hope for a relationship that´s more then brotherly between Bill and Tom, i mean like they get together or something. 8D Anyway, great story!
Author's Response: xD I honestly have no idea if they will...I sort of hope they will, too. (I generally don't know what's going to happen until I've written it, which is...weird. =_=;;) Thanks for reading~
Date: 12/29/07 10:42 am Title: Chapter 2
Can't you continue this.. Pleeeeease?
Author's Response: xD As long as someone wants to read it, sure!
Date: 12/29/07 10:42 am Title: Chapter 2
Fittingly, I was listening to SafetyDance while reading this. And Light My Fire by the Doors... :P
I'm sure that anything you write will be awsome, judging from this. Thanks for writing this ;) :D
Author's Response: Haha, awesome. <3rnrnThanks for reading it! :D
Date: 12/29/07 10:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Had Bill been like, fingering himself or using toys a while before he had sex with Tom? 'Cause it seemed to be virtually pain free for him, usually it'd hurt like a bitch.
But I liked this, I think you need to add more! :)
Author's Response: Yeah, he said that he had been trying it when he jerked off. I didn't want to write him in a lot of pain because, um, I'm not very good at that. >.>;; So I threw that in there, haha.
Thanks, I'll try~
Date: 12/29/07 10:33 am Title: Chapter 2
ohhhh it seemed pretty real but with one exception
i mean anal sex hurts really bad...and bill took it so easy...
another chappie plz
Author's Response: Bill mentioned that he had sort of experimented by himself, so he sort of knew what to expect. If you're relaxed, you know what to expect, and you use a lot of lube, it shouldn't be *terrible*.
Date: 12/29/07 10:24 am Title: Chapter 2
O MAN talk about a non innocent scene, lol frikkin HOTT and it's so cute how Tom is scared of hurting Bill. ^_^ loved it
Author's Response: It would be a pretty intense experience, right...especially if it's your twin. And Tom just seems really protective to me, haha. Thanks for reading, I'm glad you loved it <3
Date: 12/29/07 10:19 am Title: Chapter 2
This... was... HOT!
oh god. srsly.
i'm Speechless. duh.
this fiction is love and I'd be in heaven if you'd continue.
Author's Response: Awesome. I'm happy to know that you liked it. <33 Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12/29/07 07:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Cute. It's really good. Hope you write a sequel about the... advanced stuff :D
Author's Response: xD It's up now