Date: 10/02/12 02:00 pm Title: The Hoodie
rofl that is cute and funny xD
Date: 10/20/11 12:51 pm Title: The Hoodie
it reminds me of that song '' I Want Candy.. Dead'' ;DD
Date: 08/31/10 12:08 am Title: The Hoodie
im not sure you can murder someone with eyeliner and it not be completely ruined...this was funny. very cute. I hope youadd more storeis to this series.
Date: 03/03/10 01:20 pm Title: The Hoodie
LMAO thats AWESOME!
Date: 07/18/09 09:04 am Title: The Hoodie
I do love this series, I have to say. The commentary from Tom seems really like him and is really funny, not to mention Bill is absolutely adorable.
My first tip is that you have 'OMG' in the final section. The reason I don't like this is I don't see Tom thinking this, I can kinda visualise Bill thinking it, but not Tom. He'd probably be all 'oh f*ck' or 'oh christ.'
Other than that, I can't actually think of anything (although techinically you should put speech on a new line if it's a new person - but who cares?) except please pretty please put up the next one message me when you have!
Author's Response: o.o i just found this review and thanks for the suggestion. i think it's a good one. i'll change that for sure! and i'll definitely let you know when i have put up the next one.
Date: 06/19/09 11:42 am Title: The Hoodie
that's funny!! i liked it. a softer side of tomi.....and he doesn't want to go shopping!!
Date: 05/19/09 03:06 pm Title: The Hoodie
haha lol i love the song and this just to funni
Date: 05/19/09 03:06 pm Title: The Hoodie
haha lol i love the song and this just to funni
Date: 05/19/09 08:45 am Title: The Hoodie
OMG! That was amazingly funny! AWWW!
Date: 05/19/09 12:16 am Title: The Hoodie
You have no idea how much the line: '“That little betch. I’mma betch slap the dumb out of her and then kill her…with my eyeliner.”' cracked me up. Ahahahaa! -laughs and starts to cry- Oh, maaaaaan. I could totally see Bill killing somebody with eyeliner! This is AWESOME. +Fave, most def! ~Inari
Date: 05/18/09 11:35 pm Title: The Hoodie
HAHAHAHHAA!
I'll try that one day
(that part of killing someone with an eyeliner!)
You were great!
*claps*
Date: 05/18/09 11:21 pm Title: The Hoodie
Made my day but I worry about the poor eyeliner getting close to her it did nothing wrong and does it's job well now will be subjected to torture. lol
Date: 05/18/09 10:53 pm Title: The Hoodie
Last line was classic, and will go down in history as one of the spiffest lines EVER! What the hell am I saying? The WHOLE DAMN THING was spiff, and I would shout that over hill and dale, and just LET someone try to say different!
Ok, rant done now, but it was hilarious, and I loved it! You go on with yer bad self, girlie!
Date: 05/18/09 09:08 pm Title: The Hoodie
i hope he doesn't completely ruin his eyeliner! i love it!!!!
Date: 05/18/09 09:05 pm Title: The Hoodie
Loved this! The first fic in this series was awesome...and this is the perfect continuation. I really can't wait for the third in the series!
Date: 05/18/09 08:30 pm Title: The Hoodie
Hahahahhahahahahah that was so funny!!!!
just like the original!!=DDD
you did a great job, as always=DD
Date: 05/18/09 08:08 pm Title: The Hoodie
Ehehehehe. That was great hun!
Date: 05/18/09 07:44 pm Title: The Hoodie
bill is psycotic....spycotic......phsycotic? god... O.o i don't know how to spell that.... but i likes!