The formatting is a little off and it could use a few changes here and there, but otherwise, it's pretty good!

This is one of my favorite fairy tales and I think you did some justice to it. Better than I handled it when I wrote my version in French and handed it in for a project, anyways.

I liked this. :)

Author's Response: I do suck at formatting most of my stuffies x] Aww Thankies (: