Well that was depressing. Was Bill not there by choice or by force, Tom was trying to justify the situation to himself a lot but then near the end you said 'they' when refering to Bill having to be gone for a whole month...

Author's Response: I think this is the best review I've received. I was aiming to trigger some emotions from readers. Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you...... <3 (((((((: